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PS/IS 113, 1st Grade

Author: Jennifer Bencivenga & Kathleen Smith


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Liz L Liz L (Jan 22 2022 9:47AM) : I can't read the last box, but it's a great idea. Your students are doing a great job with the writing. [Edited]

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Liz L Liz L (Jan 22 2022 9:50AM) : Opinion vs Narrative [Edited] more

Why I like fall lends itself to opinion writing. They could still give three reasons and use transitions ( in addition, another thing, finally).
The sequence of events for a narrative might be problem, action or attempt to solve it and outcome with a conclusion showing how they feel about the outcome.

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Liz L Liz L (Jan 22 2022 9:48AM) : Supports more

The word chart, flow chart and list of transition words are all great supports for the writing.

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