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PS.IS 128, 4th Grade

Author: Daniela Faulisi


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3 Directions given to Students:

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4 You will be writing a letter to lawmakers explaining why they should create laws to protect frogs. Be sure to include text evidence from “Fragile Frogs” explaining why the number of frogs are declining rapidly. Also, please refer to the rubric to make sure you have included all necessary information/criteria.

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Liz L (Jan 22 2022 9:48PM) : These make the expectations very clear. I wonder if they could be presented as a checklist instead of in rubric format.
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Liz L (Jan 22 2022 9:49PM) : Are students giving reasons for the law or indicating the kinds of problems that need to be addressed?
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Liz L (Jan 22 2022 9:50PM) : This paragraph explains the problem, uses specific terms, defines the terms and shows how this problem affects the frogs. It also includes a quote from the text. Nice work for fourth grade! [Edited]
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Liz L (Jan 22 2022 9:52PM) : The student understands how to use transitions effectively
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Liz L (Jan 22 2022 9:52PM) : I wonder what the student would say if you asked, Does the essay explain why frogs are important? If they say no, they might want to rethink the conclusion which should flow from the text. [Edited]
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Liz L (Jan 23 2022 3:02PM) : This is a good example to show how to present a quote and then explain it.
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Liz L (Jan 23 2022 3:05PM) : The student states the problem and then explains it.
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Liz L (Jan 23 2022 3:06PM) : Does the essay show why we should protect frogs or does it show how we can protect them? Perhaps discussing an outline first would be helpful.
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Liz L (Jan 23 2022 3:09PM) : This student attempted most of the criteria and would probably meet all the criteria if there was a chart or outline that could be checked before the writing.
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