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Review of One Second to the Next
Vince Horiuchi

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Reggie Shaw doesn't even remember what he texted to his girlfriend. But just seconds after he pressed the “send' button on his cell phone, the act of texting in the car cost the lives of two Cache County men and forever changed his own.

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Julissa Soriano Julissa Soriano (Apr 28 2015 5:20PM) : Reply [Edited] more

This is a great way to start off a review, by including somethings really emotionally driven as this paragraph. including that he does not even remember what he texted is a very strong start

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 10 2015 8:33AM) : yes
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Khrystyna Melnyk Khrystyna Melnyk (May 15 2015 11:49PM) : I didn't like the way this review began because of how emotional it was. When I think of a critic's review, I think it should be more succinct and clear, without bringing in so much emotion. more

I agree that the writer picked a strong moment from the film and used it to his best advantage. However, was this professional? The documentary is very emotional and I do understand that is one of the things the writer wanted to convey, but I didn’t like the manner in which he did it.

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Charles Parietti Charles Parietti (May 14 2015 1:13PM) : Vince Horiuchi, decides to start this review of the documentary, One Second to the Next by telling of an emotional and compelling story in order get the readers attention, right from the beginning.
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Daniel Kvist Daniel Kvist (May 14 2015 9:42PM) : Reply [Edited] more

The opening paragraph of the review of “One Second to the Next” is very dramatic. Vince decides to take the last of the 4 stories in the documentary, and emphasizes the horrific aftermath of texting and driving. It’s a great way to catch a reader’s attention and making the reader continue reading. Without watching the documentary, I imagine the opening paragraph to be filmed in slow motion with sad music (which there actually is) playing in the background. He describes it in pictures so you can imagine it yourself without watching it.

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Annie Paul Annie Paul (May 15 2015 10:58AM) : I completely agree with the movement against texting while driving. Obviously taking your attention away from driving can be fatal to yourself or anyone else, and i drive every day and conciously choose to never text and drive. However more

There are other things to blame accident like this than on texting. The first accident I have ever been in was from taking my eyes off the road during traffic to switch radio stations. Everyone ridiculed me because they thought i was texting and driving. A friend of mine was just trying to adjust her side mirrors while driving and rear ended someone. Campaigns should remind people that taking your eyes off the road for any reason whatsoever can be harmful and dangerous. Yes, texting does contribute to most cases especially nowadays in this digital society, but people have many reasons to take their eyes off the road and think its okay if they are not texting. They should be reminded that it is not

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 11:47AM) : I think the idea of this film was on texting and driving, the other topics would be in a different film or an overall film of challenged driving. I do agree with you 100% drivers should be reminding of all these things
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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 11:44AM) : The start of this review just so happens to be one of the many strong parts of the film. It is as if the words stung at me becausse of how disturbing it is, Great way to start a review. Its saying, how important was that text?
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Hui Maggie Su Hui Maggie Su (May 21 2015 7:50PM) : He began by showing how serious the aftermath can be by driving and texting. The driver doesn't even remember what he texted because it's not important compared to the 2 death.
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“I think back now and it made sense [that I was texting while driving],' Shaw said about the fatal accident Sept. 22, 2006, that killed James A. Furfaro, 38, and Keith P. O'Dell, 50. “I used my phone when I drove all the time. To me that was just driving.'

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 11:53AM) : As much as Shaw was owning his mistake, it is frustrating to hear him say that txting was usual for him while driving. Then again, it brings light to many drivers who are use to texting at the same time. He's explaining this norm isn't okay.
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Khrystyna Melnyk Khrystyna Melnyk (May 15 2015 11:53PM) : I think this is an example of a way to convey the emotional aspect of the film without bringing in the critic's feeling about the film. You are using a direct quote from the documentary and can therefore, show emotion with proof from the real person. more

With a film like this, I think it is best to include some of what was spoken by the people in the documentary so that if the viewer hasn’t seen the documentary, they would at least be able to get some sort of idea.

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Nearly seven years later, the incident still haunts Shaw and the families of the victims. But he and Megan O'Dell, the daughter of Keith O'Dell, were able to retell the tragedy and its devastating impact in a new 30-minute documentary on YouTube directed by legendary German filmmaker Werner Herzog (“Grizzly Man,' “Aguirre: The Wrath of God').

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Daniel Kvist Daniel Kvist (May 14 2015 9:56PM) : Reply more

If you’re a person who is emotionel, it’s very hard not to feel the pain and guilt these people have to live with. The fact that Shaw is still so touched about what he did 7 years ago just shows that he is a person who cares, but weren’t thinking about the safety of others while driving the car. Does it make him evil? Some would argue yes, others no. You genuinely feel that he is sorry for what he did, but there’s no way he can make up for what he caused another family, so he has to live with the guilt for the rest of his life. It’s hard not to feel sorry for him.

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Evie Horn Evie Horn (May 14 2015 11:25PM) : I don't think what happened to Shaw makes him evil at all. more

What happened to him could happen to anyone. If I were to get in an accident like this tomorrow, I don’t think it would be fair to claim that I was an evil person. No body intends to hurt anybody else when they text and drive, and people don’t actively thinks about the lives they could put in danger by doing so. You could say he was selfish, or careless, but he did not have bad intentions so I don’t think it’s fair to say he’s an evil person.

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:01PM) : Shaw made a HUGE mistake and ruined a family. It is devastating, and a careless mistake. I don't find him to be evil. However, someone I know who lost a loved one to something similar tends to compare texting and driving with drinking and driving. more

Both being careless, but one feels more extreme than the other.

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Jing Zhang Jing Zhang (May 13 2015 4:21PM) : One Second to the Next is the shortest documentary film that we watched in this whole semester, but it is such a strong film that elicits many emotions and sentiments in a relatively short period. more

I think a good film does not depend on its length at all. One Second to the Next teaches the public a lesson on how to be a responsible driver in 30 minutes.

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:04PM) : I agree, this film spoke to me and has a huge impact on society. Not only is it opening up peoples lives to something so extreme but it is informational and will help relay a message of what drivers shouldn't be doing when driving.

The video, “From One Second To The Next,' was commissioned by cell phone carrier AT&T and released Aug. 7. By Wednesday, it already had amassed more than 1.9 million views. The makers also are planning to provide the short to government agencies, safety organizations and schools.

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Julissa Soriano Julissa Soriano (Apr 28 2015 5:27PM) : Reply more

This video not only made a huge impact on the community by receiving 1.9 million views, but it also left a lasting impression on me. So much so, that I emailed this video to a couple of people in my family that I know who text while driving. I am also a victim of texting while driving and I could honestly say that this film has changed my perspective and encourages me to never text and drive again.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 10 2015 8:34AM) : Texting is a huge problem. I just listened to a radio report of a person struck by a car looking at a phone while crossing the street.
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Khrystyna Melnyk Khrystyna Melnyk (May 15 2015 11:56PM) : I've seen campaigns about texting behind the wheel for a while now, but there is a new one that is truly a wake up call. more

It shows shattered glass on the sidewalk and a doll that is dirty and run over. The words read “she was looking when she crossed the street. The driver wasn’t. Keep alert behind the wheel.” It doesn’t show anything too bloody or violent, but the viewers know what this ad is referring to.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 17 2015 8:15AM) : Sometimes less is more.
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Evie Horn Evie Horn (May 14 2015 11:21PM) : I think a lot of people have an invincibility complex, where they think 'oh that will never happen to me.' more

It’s important to remember that the people in the film probably had the same thoughts. There’s no reason that me texting ’I’m on my way’ is any different than say Reggie Shaw texting it. These tragedies can happen to anyone. It’s not like gun violence where if you live in a bad neighborhood you can be more susceptible to it. Anybody can be a victim, and the invincibility complex is no excuse to text and drive anyway.

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Annie Paul Annie Paul (May 15 2015 11:01AM) : Plenty of people are aware of their mortality, it's just the little careless mistakes that anyone can make that cause the damage more

I think in addition to the invincibility complex, people just think that something as simple as sending a quick text couldn’t possibly do something so drastic and change their lives. Its more so the “It’ll take a quick second, no harm” rather than thinking they are invincible.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 17 2015 8:16AM) : Gun violence occurs in good communities all the time.
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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:07PM) : Same here. So much can happen in a second of looking down on your phone. I've seen clips of this film long before, yet these stories still shock and should be shown in the 5 hour class taken before taking road test.
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Charles Parietti Charles Parietti (May 14 2015 1:19PM) : This documentary has the potential to make a serious impact in society about the dangers of texting while driving, but people should be aware that texting can also be dangerous while walking around cities, like the example the Professor provided more

of the woman walking in the street and being hit by a car. Texting while driving and walking seem to a have similar effects on an individual’s awareness and/or motor skills that alcohol could lead while one is driving or walking.

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Annie Paul Annie Paul (May 15 2015 11:03AM) : This is true. I knew a woman who had her purse stolen form right in front of her, and she didn't notice because she was staring at her phone while in a park. more

People become so detached and it gets dangerous how unaware people can be.

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Daniel Kvist Daniel Kvist (May 14 2015 10:03PM) : Reply more

Another thing to look at, especially in the year of 2015, is all the pedestrians who cross the street while having their face buried in their smartphone. Is it safe? Absolutely not! In a city like New York where people j-walk all the time and cross red lights it becomes even more dangerous.

Is making a film about how bad dit is to text and drive really going to make a difference? In the short run yes, but you can pass all the laws in the world that prohibit texting while driving, and you’ll still see people doing it.

If we look at it on a broader scale, is there much difference in texting and how we operate our navigation system in the car? Today’s cars are very high tech, and everything is controlled by the screen in the middle of the car, from music stations to navigation and how you want the suspension of the car to be. Now, they even make cars that will break automatically if you don’t break in time.

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Annie Paul Annie Paul (May 15 2015 11:05AM) : I completely agree. My first accident happened because i was looking at my car radio, not my phone. more

It is getting much harder and harder to avoid being so attached to this tech gear, becasue not only is it so innovative, it is also built in to our society as something most people need. It does make me wonder if these campaigns will have any long term affects

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Khrystyna Melnyk Khrystyna Melnyk (May 16 2015 12:03AM) : I think that point is really interesting because it shows that the problem is not only with cell phone usage, but rather with the driver paying attention only on driving. more

When you are driving, texting and playing with the radio distract you from the road, but what about pressing the button to answer the Bluetooth call? That also takes your attention away, if only for a moment.

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Hui Maggie Su Hui Maggie Su (May 21 2015 10:13PM) : Totally agree. Even just fixing the volume of the radio or connecting to your phone would take away your attention. How about talking to someone on your phone through Bluetooth? You are multitasking because you need to think while driving.
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Jing Zhang Jing Zhang (May 13 2015 4:23PM) : The cell phone carrier's involvement such as AT&T represents the corporation's social responsibility, which I think is a great and sustainable cooperation between profit-driven companies and art.
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Evie Horn Evie Horn (May 14 2015 11:23PM) : I think it's really great how all cell phone companies backed the film even though AT&T commissioned it. more

The fact that companies like Sprint and Verizon were able to step up and support such an impactful film even though they didn’t have any stake in it is great. I’m sure cell phone carriers get a lot of flack about texting and driving, so it’s nice to see them take a stand and say ‘we know this is wrong.’

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The video profiles four families across the country who were affected by critical or fatal car accidents resulting from a texting driver. The film was commissioned for an anti-texting-and-driving campaign also backed by Sprint, T-Mobile and Verizon. (Learn more about the “It Can Wait' campaign at www.itcanwait.com.)

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Julissa Soriano Julissa Soriano (Apr 28 2015 5:28PM) : Reply more

Knowing that all of these cell phone providers are in on this and want to help spread awareness to is really refreshing.

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Julissa Soriano Julissa Soriano (Apr 28 2015 5:31PM) : Reply more

I don’t know when this film was created but I would have really liked it if they included alternatives to texting and driving. I know that pulling over or waiting until you reach a destination to text is obvious, but what siri voice text messages, FaceTime, or even the new gadget that lets you record your voice and send it? Are those affective alternatives, or are those dangerous too?

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 10 2015 8:36AM) : There are studies that show that any kind nof activity other than concentrating on your driving is likely to contribute to an accident.
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Daniel Kvist Daniel Kvist (May 14 2015 10:06PM) : And that really brings home the point I made in another comment that the cars are so high tech nowadays, that it's not only texting that has become a problem, it's everything else in the car as well.
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Evie Horn Evie Horn (May 14 2015 11:17PM) : This is such a good point more

Now with all of the settings in a car, something like turning on your steering wheel heater or changing the radio station are pretty equivalent to texting. You still take your eyes off of the road and your concentration wanders. Texting is made out to be such an evil, but it certainly isn’t the only one.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 15 2015 9:21AM) : Right
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Kerry Mack Kerry Mack (May 15 2015 8:20AM) : It's also interesting because cars themselves are far, far more safe than they have ever been before. Yet, we as humans continue to introduce distractions for ourselves that end up making driving in a car more dangerous than ever.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 15 2015 9:21AM) : Lots of distractions in the way car interiors are designed.
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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:13PM) : Speaking from experience, even having a bluetooth device connected is distracting. There is no way i can have a conversation with someone for more than 5 minutes and not loose focus on the road. Its not that I can't multitask but driving requires a lot of more

concentration

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Khrystyna Melnyk Khrystyna Melnyk (May 15 2015 11:59PM) : I think that is a great point because the law doesn't let you talk on the cell phone by you can talk using Bluetooth. How is that any safer? You are still taking your full attention away from driving safely.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 10 2015 8:35AM) : It is also in their self-interest. They don't want to be associated with a product involved in the deaths of its customers.
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Charles Parietti Charles Parietti (May 14 2015 1:21PM) : For being considered a review of a film, up to this part the reviewer has said little about film itself and has focused more on the impact it has made.
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Annie Paul Annie Paul (May 15 2015 11:12AM) : This is a good point. more

I think that because the film was so short makes it easier to just focus on the impact it made. Also, the fact that Werner Herzog is a very famous, well-known filmmaker, there was not much to fix, since it’s easy to assume he knows what he’s doing.
However, i would like to have seen some criticism on how the film was made, if there were any.

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:18PM) : As Julissa stated it is refreshing that these carriers are on board with anti-textin-and-driving. It is a huge part of these companies to support campaigns such as these because they are the root of the issue. Without phones this wouldn't occur. more

Well of course it has a lot to do wiith the driver as well, however, the carriers need to make suree that the product they sell does not do bad to society

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Herzog met with Shaw and Megan O'Dell last May to interview and film them about how the incident changed their lives and turned Shaw into an activist to help stop people from texting while driving.

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Hui Maggie Su Hui Maggie Su (May 22 2015 12:27AM) : I love the idea of turning Shaw to an activist. It gives him a chance to "make-up" his mistake somehow. Even though he can't make the two men alive again, but by testifying and confessing, he warns other people not to do the same mistake.
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“If we can reach that one person each time we talk about it, or if there's an article about it, then it's worth it,' O'Dell, 25, of Logan, said about making the film.

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:21PM) : Although this film was sad, it would be helpful to have films like this as a reminder or just to spread the word
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On that rainy morning in 2006, Shaw, then 19, was on Route 30 near Logan in his Chevy Tahoe when he was texting his girlfriend. At the same time, Furfaro and Keith O'Dell, both rocket scientists for Alliant Techsystems, were on their way to work.

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A witness behind Shaw saw him weaving in and out of the lane three times. That's when Shaw crossed the center line, clipped the victims' car, causing it to strike a third vehicle. Furfaro and O'Dell were killed instantly.

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Meanwhile, Megan O'Dell was in her apartment and had trouble sleeping because she sensed something was wrong.

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“It was just this different sense that my gut was saying something was not right,' she remembered.

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Later that morning, a neighbor of her mother's arrived at O'Dell's apartment and told her about her father's death. “I didn't believe it,' she said about the news. “I just didn't want to believe it.'

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It wasn't until months later, after police subpoenaed Shaw's cell phone records, that Shaw realized his texting caused the accident. He pleaded guilty to two counts of negligent homicide and was sentenced to 30 days in jail and 150 hours of community service. He also spoke to the Utah Legislature in 2009 when lawmakers passed a bill outlawing texting and driving.

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:39PM) : It is insane to me that it took months later. Shaw must have been in total shock to not remember that. At any point of an acident, ones first thoughts are normally, how did this happen?
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More than 100,000 accidents involving texting while driving occur each year, according to the National Safety Council. Nearly half of commuters admit to texting while driving, according to a recent AT&T survey, yet 98 percent agree that sending a text or email while driving is not safe.

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 1:34PM) : 98% agree but don't practice what they preach, this is why they need show films like this more often. It is a shocker and is needed to help drivers undestnad the importance of not texting and driving
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University of Utah psychology professor David Strayer, who has conducted nationally-recognized research on the effects of using cell phones while driving, said his studies show that texting while driving can result in an eight-times greater chance of getting in an accident. In contrast, driving while legally under the influence of alcohol — a blood-alcohol level of .08 — results in a four-times greater chance of an accident.

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“They just drive differently,' Strayer said of those who drive while texting. “They swerve all over the place. At least 38 states have outlawed texting. The question is what's keeping the other 12 from doing it?'

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It took years for O'Dell to overcome her hatred for Shaw and what he did to her father, she said.

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“It was enough, that if I had the opportunity, I would have really contemplated killing him,' she said. “I hated him so much because he took my father away just before I was getting married, and my dad was my best friend.'

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Hui Maggie Su Hui Maggie Su (May 22 2015 10:21AM) : This part in the film really makes me feel sad when Shaw said how sorry he is that Megan didn't have her dad walks her in her wedding. His action results in many lifetime regrets for him and the victim's family.
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It wasn't until O'Dell and Shaw both were invited to appear on Oprah Winfrey's television show in 2010 to talk about the dangers of texting and driving that O'Dell began to see his remorse and willingness to tell people about the accident.

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“This kid has courage to talk about something so huge,' she said. “To hear him and see how emotional he was talking about it, I said, 'I need to try and forgive this kid.' '

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Julissa Soriano Julissa Soriano (Apr 28 2015 5:25PM) : Reply more

I really like how this video included both victims and the sufferer and both the people who survived and where killed. It allows the viewers to get perspectives from both sides which is really interesting because both sides mourn and are traumatized. I also think it was necessary to include when a victim did not want to be documented and for what reason.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 10 2015 8:36AM) : I think the film gains in credibility it is not does simply concentrate on the victim, or on attacking the guilty party.
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Kerry Mack Kerry Mack (May 15 2015 8:22AM) : I like the fact that not only does it not simply attack the guilty party, it shows the miraculousness of two opposing parties coming together for a mutual cause.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 15 2015 9:17AM) : Yes, the film has a lot of ramifications.
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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:48PM) : I think this is what makes the film so interesting and real. Shoing both victims and how they both suffered brings awareness for drivers and pedestrians
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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:45PM) : I love that this was mentioned in the review. The most moving part for me was hearing Megan say she forgave Shaw. Many people carry the anger forever, Megan did what her father would have wanted by forgiving.
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Khrystyna Melnyk Khrystyna Melnyk (May 16 2015 12:06AM) : I think that was such a turning point in the film in general. more

They kept talking about people killing others because they were texting and distracted. But I don’t know if I ever could forgive something like that because that is something one can control. You can control whether or not to look at your phone. You aren’t forced to do it.

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And she has, she said. The two have since become friends while campaigning against the dangers of texting and driving, and both appear in Herzog's film together.

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“I love Megan, and I'm extremely grateful for that forgiveness,' Shaw said. “She helped me in ways that no one else can.'

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In the meantime, Shaw said the experience of making the film has helped him as well, and he plans to continue talking to groups about the dangers of texting and driving.

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“That was one of the most difficult things that I have done,' he said about being interviewed by Herzog for the film. “But I'm grateful for the experience. He [Herzog] challenged me and he questioned me in ways I've never been questioned. It opened my eyes to things and remotivated me to continue [to speak out]. It's something I'm very passionate about, and I don't want anybody to make that same mistake.'

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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:53PM) : So many peple don't have the courage to speak on such drastic mistakes. Speaking on it not only makes one realize these things happen to normal people but it can happen to any of us at any point in our lives.Seeing the pain Shaw was in makes one want to more

really pay attention when driving No one wants to feel the way Shaw is.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Jan 19 2015 7:25AM) : Quite aside from the ostensible subject, texting while driving, what is this film about? Discuss the director's choices? Why did he tell this particular story? What other ways might the same subject be treated?
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Julissa Soriano Julissa Soriano (Apr 28 2015 5:43PM) : Reply more

Besides the film being about the harmful effect of texting while driving, I think the film uncovers the impact that a car accident leaves on close family members and even the suspect. The film shows you how life could change in seconds. It also shows you that the victim has a good life before the accident. Another thing that arises in the film is the costs of the hospital bills not being met.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 10 2015 8:32AM) : The film creates a context for the accident, one of the major contrbutions of documentary film, according to Nichols.
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Alison Ng Alison Ng (May 09 2015 1:30PM) : Reply more

I think the film shows how a decision you make affects a whole web of other people, whether you know them or not. We tend to forget that strangers are people who also have families, hopes, dreams, etc. We are selfish because we think about our own needs in the moment, but we have to open our eyes and realize that our decisions affect other people and that needs to be considered before acting.

Herzog focuses on texting and driving, because it is a very strong and emotional topic. Not only that, but almost everyone owns a phone that has the ability to text message. People are able to connect with many different aspects of the film because these situations are apart of everyday life.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 10 2015 8:37AM) : Yes, he found a way to make an important film that does not require you to be a texter. I don't text at all, but I am still affected by texting.
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Khrystyna Melnyk Khrystyna Melnyk (May 16 2015 12:11AM) : I think this also raises the point of responsibility and how an accident like this should be treated. more

If I have a phone that texts, but I know that when I am crossing the street, I need to be careful so I don’t text and I act responsibly, but a driver doesn’t do this and hits me because he was texting, how should this crime be seen. In my opinion, this should be seen as manslaughter if the person dies because this was a preventable accident that was caused by the person who was distracted.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 17 2015 8:17AM) : I agree.
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Charles Parietti Charles Parietti (May 14 2015 1:29PM) : The director choses to focus on the aftermath of families who lost loved ones due to an accident caused by a driver texting. By doing this it creates a more lasting impact on the viewer as they my be more likely to try and avoid texting, [Edited] more

if they see the problems and the agony that families go through after they lose someone due to a texting accident.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 15 2015 9:16AM) : And in part this is a story about family, not just texting.
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Evie Horn Evie Horn (May 14 2015 11:15PM) : I think this film is also about how tragedy can happen to anyone. more

The subjects that are chosen are those from all walks of life. There’s an african-american family, white families, brothers, fathers, and children who were affected by texting and driving. All of the families are from different parts of the country as well, and their families were affected in different ways. Though the medium in this film is texting and driving, the film serves as a reminder that no body is safe from accidents or tragedy.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 15 2015 9:18AM) : Yes, the film has a certain universality.
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Raymond Urrutia Raymond Urrutia (May 15 2015 8:12AM) : A Story of People whose whole lives have changed due to texting [Edited] more

The film is about people, both victim and perpetrator, whose whole lives have changed due to texting while driving. Personal stories about kids, sisters, brothers and every other sibling, always strikes a cord with an audience, because the audience members can always relate to having some sort of family member in their lives that they would not want something like this to happen too. I also like how he didn’t overdue the statistics or the written messages about texting and driving. I felt this made the movie even more real than it already was.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 15 2015 9:19AM) : Good points.
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Annie Paul Annie Paul (May 15 2015 11:36AM) : Response more

I think that the film was good, and it was about the impact that a simple mistake can do. Most people underestimate the small mindless things they do, and this movie sheds light on it. It adds the family aspect of it on order to elicit emotion from the viewers.
I think he also chose this particular way of film because he wanted to show the daughter of victim as well as the texter come together in order to create this film.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 17 2015 8:08AM) : Just to create the film?
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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 12:59PM) : The film creates awareness and shows something informational through trauma. more

The director chose four different stories but touched based on most aspects in society. From a mother and son, to a daughter and father, and so forth, they are all different stories that show how normal lives have been wrecked in seconds. the director also showed different views, such as Debbie who wants nothing to do with the drive and Megan who was able to forgive.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 17 2015 8:10AM) : What does his sequencing of the stories tell you?
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Jocelyn Davila Jocelyn Davila (May 15 2015 6:23PM) : Response more

This documentary came out at a time when the rate of texting and driving deaths were through the roof. It shows how it could really happen to anyone and it makes a strong point and argument to make people stop doing this. Sending out a text is a really tragic way of ending someone’s life.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 17 2015 8:14AM) : Some would say not tragic, but stupid.
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Charles Parietti Charles Parietti (May 14 2015 1:25PM) : I did not feel as if this was a sufficient review of the documentary. The author very briefly discusses the what the film is about, while focusing mostly on the impact this film has made and the dangers of texting while driving. more

Horiuchi really fails to comment on the filmmakers style and approach used in the film in order to deliver their message.

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Kerry Mack Kerry Mack (May 15 2015 8:24AM) : I noticed that Horiuchi failed to do that as well, which was disappointing. Although the importance of the film's message is certainly allowed to be a focal point of the review, I also wanted to hear about style, tone, etc.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 15 2015 9:20AM) : Right, there is more than content to discuss.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 15 2015 9:19AM) : Yes, the film certainly could deserve a different kind of review.
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Annie Paul Annie Paul (May 15 2015 11:38AM) : Yea i agree. I would have liked to see some critical comments towards the making of the film. It would add to perspective and open up more possibility to how this message could have gotten across
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Professor Carl Rollyson (May 17 2015 8:09AM) : Right
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Christina Rivera Christina Rivera (May 15 2015 1:40PM) : I agree. There was so much more that can be said about this film. He quoted a lot but should have got in depth to what the victims have said. more

He doesn’t mention how the filmmaker or why the filmmaker created the film they he did. That is an important factor. Anyone could have made a film on driving and texting but the way this was created was moving and Horiuchi didn’t represent that

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Khrystyna Melnyk Khrystyna Melnyk (May 16 2015 12:13AM) : I had the same problem with this review. Of course the writer is pushing us to see the documentary and think about our actions, but the techniques used in the film weren't discussed that well. more

I would have liked more technical reviews rather than just emotional ones.

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