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Jan 17

Kelvi B Kelvi B (Jan 17 2023 1:47PM) : the narrator saw his first tree.this mean that the narrator lives in a place where are not real trees.

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Jan 17

Mr D Mr D (Jan 17 2023 1:47PM) : The narrator saw his first tree. This means that the narrator lives in a place where there are no real trees. [Edited]

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ABRIL V ABRIL V (Jan 17 2023 1:48PM) : The narrator saw his first tree. Thisd means that the narrator lives in a other planet or other place there not real trees.

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Jan 17

Joahana L Joahana L (Jan 17 2023 1:54PM) : the narrator He says that his father told him that he had seen trees when he was a child. maybe because they ended

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Jan 17

ABRIL V ABRIL V (Jan 17 2023 1:56PM) : The father told the narrator that when he was little there were trees, this means that currently there are no trees.

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Jan 17

Joahana L Joahana L (Jan 17 2023 1:56PM) : the narrator mentions that there were plastic trees and not real ones

Jan 17

Joahana L Joahana L (Jan 17 2023 2:00PM) : THE NARRATOR MENTIONS THAT THERE WERE PLASTIC AND DONT REAL ONES IN THE FUTURE

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Jan 17

Isaías Fernando G Isaías Fernando G (Jan 17 2023 1:59PM) : the father told the voy that there were a few three thatno longer existed because there was no urbanization orogram

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Jan 17

DULCE S DULCE S (Jan 17 2023 1:58PM) : The father told his son that one day he saw a tree because in the time where the boy lived there were no trees anymore

Juan 0

Jan 17

Juan H Juan H (Jan 17 2023 2:00PM) : The narrator he told his son when there were trees when he was a boy

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Jan 17

ABRIL V ABRIL V (Jan 17 2023 1:59PM) : This means that there are almost no trees today.

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Jan 17

Yelson Z Yelson Z (Jan 17 2023 2:02PM) : yesterday my father told me a story about trees and

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Jan 17

Kelvi B Kelvi B (Jan 17 2023 2:04PM) : the narrator tells me that he lives in the future and there are not only artificial trees

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Jan 17

ABRIL V ABRIL V (Jan 17 2023 2:00PM) : This means that the narrator lives in the future, because he had not seen real trees, only plastic.

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Jan 17

ABRIL V ABRIL V (Jan 17 2023 2:04PM) : It means that there are no cows, they drink some other type of synthetic milk.

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Jan 17

Diego R Diego R (Jan 17 2023 2:04PM) : This means that the dad lives in the time where there were real trees. [Edited]

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Jan 17

Joahana L Joahana L (Jan 17 2023 2:05PM) : THE NARRATOR WANTS TO SAY THERE ARE NO MORE COWS IN THE FUTURE BECAUSE DRINK SYNTHETIC MILK [Edited]

kelvi 0

Jan 17

Kelvi B Kelvi B (Jan 17 2023 2:06PM) : the narrator tells me that there are no cows and they have to make artificial milk

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Jan 19

Mr D Mr D (Jan 19 2023 12:37PM) : FINISH: Reading the text. Take turns reading with your group ANNOTATE: Analyze and write notes on your assigned paragraph. DISCUSS: The characteristics of a science fiction texts. Descriptions of a futuristic world in the text.

Jan 19

DULCE S DULCE S (Jan 19 2023 2:06PM) : in the future there may no longer be yards because there is no more space or they may be prohibited

Jan 19

Juan H Juan H (Jan 19 2023 2:07PM) : The officers upon discovering that the house had a yard were surprised since in the future the houses do not have a yard

Jan 19

Yelson Z Yelson Z (Jan 19 2023 2:11PM) : porque el ofisial se le asia raro que en esa casa avia yar

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Jan 19

Mr D Mr D (Jan 19 2023 12:39PM) : FINISH: Reading the text. Take turns reading with your group ANNOTATE: Analyze and write notes on your assigned paragraph. DISCUSS: The characteristics of a science fiction texts. Descriptions of a futuristic world in the text.

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Jan 19

Mr D Mr D (Jan 19 2023 12:40PM) : FINISH: Reading the text. Take turns reading with your group ANNOTATE: Analyze and write notes on your assigned paragraph. DISCUSS: The characteristics of a science fiction texts. Descriptions of a futuristic world in the text.

Jan 19

Isaías Fernando G Isaías Fernando G (Jan 19 2023 2:06PM) : MON TRAVELED TO A LON PLACE TO SEE THE TREE THAT DAD DISCOVERED more

THAT FATHER WAS DISCOVERING THE TREE THAT WAS HARDLY FOUND AT THAT TIME AND THE MOTHER DISCOVERED A LIFT BUS THAT CAN BE SEEN IN A SHORT TIME

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Joahana L Joahana L (Jan 20 2023 1:42PM) : Sentences

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DULCE S DULCE S (Jan 20 2023 1:45PM) : cThe government was charging them because they wanted there were no trees or yards in that place or time and since they were the only ones they had to charge less for having them

Jan 20

Juan H Juan H (Jan 20 2023 1:48PM) : they were surprised to discover a tree outside in the yard since in the future that is not normal

Jan 20

Juan H Juan H (Jan 20 2023 2:05PM) : paragraph 6;the house was not important to them because in the future they could not touch the old houses [Edited]

Jan 20

DULCE S DULCE S (Jan 20 2023 2:02PM) : 8.the houses only have one color and it does not have an important value it cannot be made of a combustible material and it is illegal to touch the things in the house and at present it is not [Edited]

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Joahana L Joahana L (Jan 20 2023 2:05PM) : Paragraph. 6 In the future there were no houses like that because they couldn't touch anything from the old one

Jan 20

DULCE S DULCE S (Jan 20 2023 2:12PM) : 9.He got lost when he saw a tree because maybe he didn't have trees or natural grass and they only had talk

Jan 20

Juan H Juan H (Jan 20 2023 2:14PM) : paragraph 7 ;he was surprised to see grass in the yard while hiding the houses in the future had synthetic grass

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Mr D Mr D (Jan 19 2023 12:38PM) : FINISH: Reading the text. Take turns reading with your group ANNOTATE: Analyze and write notes on your assigned paragraph. DISCUSS: The characteristics of a science fiction texts. Descriptions of a futuristic world in the text.

Jan 19

Kelvi B Kelvi B (Jan 19 2023 2:06PM) : that perhaps in this world or in the future they will not open more backyard in the future [Edited]

Jan 19

Joahana L Joahana L (Jan 19 2023 2:08PM) : That maybe in the future there will be no back yard because there are only apartments and no houses

Jan 19

Diego R Diego R (Jan 19 2023 2:08PM) : "the O'Brien home was one of the few examples of old-style wooden structures" more

This means that in that world the houses of wood are going o be a old type of house maybe because the houses would be made of a different material.

Jan 19

JENRRI C JENRRI C (Jan 19 2023 2:10PM) : that perhaps in this world there are no patios and this world does have patios but they are restricted and the houses are made of wood in the old style more

that perhaps in this world there are no patios and this world does have patios but they are restricted and the houses are made of wood in the old style

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Isaías Fernando G Isaías Fernando G (Jan 17 2023 1:50PM) : isaias el narrador vio su orimer arbol de verdd

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