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"Candles In Space" 4th Period

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Mr D Mr D (Jan 26 2023 1:28PM) : David lives in space with his family. He is about to turn 9 years in space. So this means that David and his family live in space.

Jan 26

Kelvi B Kelvi B (Jan 26 2023 1:51PM) : I think the author is trying to that the lady needs to keep the ship safe

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Jan 26

Kelvi B Kelvi B (Jan 26 2023 1:29PM) : David lives in space with his family. he is about to turn 9 years in space. so this means he and the family is in the space

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Mr D Mr D (Jan 26 2023 1:35PM) : Analyze details of a futuristic setting.

Jan 26

Kelvi B Kelvi B (Jan 26 2023 1:38PM) : the author included that imformation to they're headed to mars

Jan 26

Diego R Diego R (Jan 26 2023 1:38PM) : The author included that information to tell that they are traveling to a place and that place is far away because the trip takes a long time

Jan 26

Yelson Z Yelson Z (Jan 26 2023 1:41PM) : To show it to the future, the author thinks that this will be useful in the future.

Jan 26

Isaías Fernando G Isaías Fernando G (Jan 26 2023 1:42PM) : the author included this two weeks to know a little more about the futuristic world or how it could work

Jan 26

Jose C Jose C (Jan 26 2023 1:43PM) : to give an idea of what will happen in the future

Jan 26

Juan H Juan H (Jan 26 2023 1:42PM) : The author included that information to know more about the futuristic world

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Isaías Fernando G Isaías Fernando G (Feb 13 2023 1:51PM) : the problem was that she had a birthday on the ship;; Commander Park said that no one else had had a birthday on the ship before David but Revebeca surprised her sister with swollen cheeks because she was practicing blowing out the sails because they were

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Feb 13

Diego R Diego R (Feb 13 2023 1:44PM) : I think this is a conflict because the kid wants to blow the candles in the day of his birthday but in the space you cannot blow candles this is why I think it's a conflict

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Feb 13

DULCE S DULCE S (Feb 13 2023 1:45PM) : that there is still no technology so advanced to be able to make a rim

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Feb 13

Valeria B Valeria B (Feb 13 2023 1:47PM) : In this part of the story the protagonist has a conflict with his sister because he wanted candles on his cake but his sister tells him that he will not be able to because that is dangerous inside the ship.

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Feb 13

Yelson Z Yelson Z (Feb 13 2023 2:08PM) : that David's mother would move on Tuesday because they had been on the spaceship for two weeks and on the ship they celebrated David's birthday more

David had already spent two weeks in the spaceship and David’s sister had swollen cheeks and David was surprised

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Feb 13

Juan H Juan H (Feb 13 2023 1:50PM) : The commander said that no one had turned nine in space because perhaps there was no one younger than David on the ship.

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Feb 13

Joahana L Joahana L (Feb 13 2023 1:51PM) : Conflict. It is a conflict because the commander says that no one had gone into space when they were 9 years old

Feb 13

Joahana L Joahana L (Feb 13 2023 1:56PM) : Conflict. Because is between 3 people

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Feb 13

DULCE S DULCE S (Feb 13 2023 1:50PM) : They are in a ship and they have lasted a long time and they need even more time in that ship and they may have problems with their food

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DULCE S DULCE S (Feb 13 2023 1:52PM) : cshe can't keep a secret and her sister can find out

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DULCE S DULCE S (Feb 13 2023 1:53PM) : I was afraid to say something and when I say it everyone will listen

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Feb 13

DULCE S DULCE S (Feb 13 2023 1:54PM) : for interrupting they will not put candles on your cake

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Feb 13

Juan H Juan H (Feb 13 2023 2:02PM) : David was practicing how to blow out the candles on the cake but he's in a spaceship and he can't light a fire inside the ship

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Valeria B Valeria B (Feb 13 2023 2:07PM) : The author shows us in this part of the text that he is in a futuristic scenario since he says that he is going to go to a Martian colony, so they have the necessary technology to go to other planets.

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Feb 13

Diego R Diego R (Feb 13 2023 2:00PM) : I think this is a conflict because the because they are changing planets and it will take a long time to get there and when someone moves they have problems like the job where they will live and more things like that I think this is a conflict

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Feb 13

Juan H Juan H (Feb 13 2023 2:05PM) : The author included this because in space you can't light a fire, that's why he told him that his cake can't have candles

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Feb 13

Juan H Juan H (Feb 13 2023 3:28PM) : The author included this because in space you can't light a fire, that's why he told him that his cake can't have candles

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Feb 13

Juan H Juan H (Feb 13 2023 5:27PM) : the author included this because it is dangerous since it can burn the ship and they can die

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Isaías Fernando G Isaías Fernando G (Jan 26 2023 1:53PM) : I think the author is saying this because he wants there to be more intelligence in the future.

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Jan 26

Mr D Mr D (Jan 26 2023 1:48PM) : Why did the author include those details?

Jan 26

Yelson Z Yelson Z (Jan 26 2023 1:52PM) : because the party is celebrating

Jan 26

Juan H Juan H (Jan 26 2023 1:52PM) : I think the author is trying to publicize the futuristic system on the spaceship that i couldn't blow out candles in space

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Mr D Mr D (Jan 26 2023 1:56PM) : Why did the author include this detail

Jan 26

Kelvi B Kelvi B (Jan 26 2023 1:58PM) : the author includes that because he is saying that everything in space floats

Jan 26

Diego R Diego R (Jan 26 2023 1:58PM) : The author included that information to tell that in the place where they are there is no gravity, that's why the mother is floating.

Jan 26

Isaías Fernando G Isaías Fernando G (Jan 26 2023 1:58PM) : I think the author included this because in space everything floats

Jan 26

Yelson Z Yelson Z (Jan 26 2023 1:58PM) : because the mama yeba ewl cake and she is floating

Jan 26

Juan H Juan H (Jan 26 2023 1:59PM) : The author include that information to because the mother is in space and in space everything floats

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Feb 13

Juan H Juan H (Feb 13 2023 5:20PM) : The author included this because in space you can't blow out candles and he's too old to get mad about it.

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Feb 13

Valeria B Valeria B (Feb 13 2023 2:01PM) : The author gives us to understand that a conflict is happening since the light goes out in the ship where they are, which interrupts David's birthday.

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ibis c ibis c (Feb 13 2023 2:01PM) : The author gives us to understand that a conflict is happening is happening since the light goes out in the shop where they are ,which interrupts david's birthday.

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