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Group 2: Bogor, West Java

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Indonesia, which is the largest archipelago in the world, consists of 18,108 islands. It has five big islands, and other 30 smaller groups which spread along the equator, which gave Indonesia a tropical climate throughout the year. The most populated and largest islands are Sumatra and Java. The other islands which are also as important and famous as Sumatra and Java are Kalimantan, Sulawesi, and Irian Jaya. The capital city of Indonesia is in Java, Jakarta, which is about the same size as Singapore (Jakarta = 750.28 km2 and Singapore = 707.1 km2). Indonesia is a beautiful country with a diverse culture and rich history. It is home to numerous beautiful travel destinations that attract tourists from all over the world. The best travel destination in Indonesia is (Bogor)

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The city of Bogor is in the province of West Java, Indonesia. Bogor city is located 59 km from South Jakarta. In mid-2022, data showed that the population of the city of Bogor is 1.099.422 people with a density of 9.278 people/ km2.

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Nadia A Nadia A (Apr 13 2023 1:25AM) : I like how your group presents general information about Bogor in your thesis statement. It makes the paragraph more interesting
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According to Bogor Travel Guide from Kayak.com, Bogor has several must-visit places.

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First, the botanical gardens. The jewel in Bogor's crown, Kebun Raya is one of the most beautiful botanical gardens in the world, with lotus ponds, hundreds of palm varieties, and over 3,000 orchids. Second, museums and palaces attract visitors. The museums that tourists can visit in Bogor are the Zoology, with its collection of taxidermy, and the Presidential Palace, which houses a wonderful art collection. Third, there are also plenty of family attractions. Bogor has more family attractions than you might expect from a town of its size, including the rollercoasters of the Jungle Fest amusement park, and the chutes and pools at Marcopolo Water Adventure. Fourth, Jakarta is within easy reach. Jakarta is a pulsating metropolis, but staying there can be hectic. A better option is to find lodgings in Bogor and drive in when the desire takes you. Finally, we can take day trips to surrounding natural sights. Not far from Bogor, you'll find the beautiful Cikidang waterfalls, while adrenaline junkies can take whitewater rafting trips on the nearby Sungai Citarum.

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Adinda S Adinda S (Apr 13 2023 5:19AM) : i strongly agree that Kebun Raya is one of the most beautiful botanical gardens in the world.
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rahman s rahman s (Apr 13 2023 9:59AM) : What is pulsating? Do you guys know the synonym of this word? more
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Rakha A Rakha A (Apr 13 2023 11:13AM) : Pulsating means very exciting
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Elky A Elky A (Apr 13 2023 5:21AM) : . more

In this section some fact and opinions can be added which can make the text more complete

In conclusion, Bogor is the best travel destination in West Java because there are plenty of unique places that are worth visiting, for example the botanical gardens, museums and presidential palaces, family attractions like water parks or theme parks, and even natural sights.

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Safira Ayu D Safira Ayu D (Apr 13 2023 1:25AM) : The conclusion part is still quite confusing, the tone is like a thesis statement instead of a conclusion
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Maulidya R Maulidya R (Apr 13 2023 1:33AM) : I agree with Safira, maybe you can try to restate again the places to visit in Bogor, based from your arguments [Edited]
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Adzkiya Noor Ifadha R Adzkiya Noor Ifadha R (Apr 13 2023 1:53AM) : Revise the comment more

Hi Dea, this page is for the third topic of The Best Travel Destination in Indonesia. Would you mind editing your comment? Thank you

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https://www.kayak.com/Bogor.16231.guide

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iradea p iradea p (Apr 13 2023 3:48AM) : my favorite tourist destination is a safari park because safari parks have its own attractiveness and different from other safari parks, more

because the animals living in the Safari Park are like giraffes, lions, tigers, were left to live freely at habitats that were specifically made to them. So to visit there, we have to use a bus or car when we want to travel around even we can also interact directly
with those animals. and the Safari collection of animals owned by Safari is from all corners of the world, starting from elephants, deer, giraffes, komodo, to lions and other animals we can encounter here.

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