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Should TikTok be Banned in Indonesia?


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Topic 4: Should TikTok be Banned in Indonesia?

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Group 6: Dewi, Agil, Mukty, Najwa, Tiara, Zeta

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Thesis statement:

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Social media platforms are rocketing, especially in Indonesia. Various advanced features are also presented in it to make users survive. According to the research, currently a rapidly growing social media platform is a short video application, which allows users to share and enjoy various entertainment and educational content. One of the examples of this platform is called TikTok. It is a social media app dedicated to short-form videos created for and consumed by users. The length of videos is 15 to 60 seconds. Amateur and professional creators alike can add effects like filters, background music, and stickers to their videos, and can collaborate on content and create split-screen duet videos, even if they are in different locations (D’Souza, 2023).

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TikTok is very close to the hearts of Indonesian people. This short video sharing platform made by Bytedance is still the talk of the community around the world, with a total of 10 million active users in Indonesia and 732 million active users in the world (Julianto, 2021). Data indicates that users in Indonesia reportedly spent 29 minutes to watch, create, find and share videos on the platform, as shared by TikTok Indonesia in October 2019. It also received the Best App and the Most Entertaining App of 2018 awards from Google Play.

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Despite the impressive growth and numbers, things haven’t always gone well for TikTok. On July 3, 2018, the Indonesian Communications and Information Ministry temporarily blocked the app after learning it contained “pornography, inappropriate content and blasphemy.” The ban was lifted one week later, however, after the ministry said that TikTok showed its commitment to deleting any negative content on the platform (The Jakarta Post, 2020).

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Arguments:

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Firstly, TikTok can make the users have an excessive screen time. If they are scrolling TikTok to procrastinate, then spending time on TikTok becomes wasteful. Secondly, TikTok result in vandalism. TikTok users posted ‘challenge’ content to introduce users to some harmful activities, such as destroying school bathrooms. Moreover, as an example in Indonesia, there is a guy who told their parents into making an uneducated content, to beg to his viewers to be given a reward from TikTok, such as coins and stickers that could be redeemed by money later. He asked his mom to take a mud bath, a video that is very unfavorable to be viewed not only by all people but especially the minors. In addition, there is also another content that shows body curves, or setting some beauty standards, which might be sensitive to other people. Finally, TikTok’s algorithm is hard to predict. Let’s say you are making a video that you expect to pass through a “For You Page” or an FYP, with the similar type of video, length, and same hashtag and same time, but you cannot necessarily expect the same result, as being in the For You Page takes a lot of luck.

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Safira Ayu D Safira Ayu D (May 02 2023 12:48AM) : In my opinion, you can make a stronger argument by adding more data based on surveys or studies about how much the impact of scrolling TikTok to cell-phone screen time especially for students.
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Maulidya R Maulidya R (May 12 2023 8:12AM) : I agree with what Safira said. It will be better if you can find statistics about how long people spend in tiktok app to support the statement that tiktok can make their users have an excessive screen time.
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Conclusion:

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In conclusion, there are definitely a lot of disadvantages to using TikTok, for instance, TikTok is a huge time waster, people spend hours scrolling and can’t figure out where the time went, it also results in vandalism and its algorithm is hard to predict. As users, it is advised that we should be considerate in filtering what content that we want to watch, so TikTok can be a useful app in the future.

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Sources:

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https://www.investopedia.com/what-is-tiktok-4588933

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https://www.thejakartapost.com/life/2020/02/20/banned-and-adored-tiktok-in-a-nutshell.html

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https://voi.id/en/technology/84237

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DMU Timestamp: March 30, 2023 18:12

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Naya D Naya D (May 02 2023 12:55AM) : I think the thesis statement is too much
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alyfia z alyfia z (May 12 2023 5:07AM) : Maybe you can elaborate why there is a violation content in tiktok that brings to vandalism eventhough tiktok has made it clear that this is not allowed.
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Rizki R Rizki R (May 12 2023 5:12AM) : I think it's great that you guys bring a real example about some negative content that is being uploaded on tiktok. It was also viral a while ago.
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putri a putri a (May 12 2023 5:15AM) : While there are some negative impacts tiktok bring in indonesia, i still believe that people nowadays use it positively.
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Muhammad Andika S Muhammad Andika S (May 12 2023 5:17AM) : : I agree with what Nanda said. I see a lot of educational content, I even found an account who give free lesson about tenses and grammar when they're doing a live channel.
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Zahra A Zahra A (May 12 2023 5:20AM) : I also agree with this. I think today people will consider to use this platform positively, like for example, selling their products as part of digital busine
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Fauziah nur m Fauziah nur m (May 12 2023 5:16AM) : The conclusion is summarized clearly. Maybe one thing to add it can be more interesting if you can give the reader some suggestions or recommendations about should they stay in tiktok or not, even after reading the disadvantages the app bring to people.
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narrraaa a narrraaa a (May 12 2023 5:21AM) : That's true. Some recommendations or suggestions can be pointed out here to make your reader more convinced to either stay in tiktok or leave tiktok after reading the negative impacts.
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