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Jun-25-23 June 25 Summer Sunday
Jun-26-23 June 26
Jun-27-23 June 27 Thoughts about Kumospace
Jun-28-23 June 28 - summary of recent improvements
Jun-29-23 June 29 a new introduction after TTT last night requested some overview
Jun-30-23 June 30 I wrote this in response to feedback on Wednesday
Jun-30-23 a symphony between conflicting projects, trying to bring a harmony of ideas for one ultimate end.
Jul-01-23 A wooden knight in the foreground, mid-morning sun as the backdrop, and an abstract painting style to capture the idea of different perspectives and expertise in chess.

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I wan want to align and integrate Youth Voices, NowComment and Kumospace as part of the DigDiscourse efforts. I'm not sure it all fits together, but I hope that I can find a unifying structure that encourages others to join these efforts. I also want to be my best scheduler and planne so that proposals of "let's write about this" don't just get forgotton. Oh, and part of this will be to get a video about AI and Youth Voices together for the Write Center Conference. How can I make this all feel like the same inetellectual and pedagogical program and not a series of interesting dispaeate events and projects?

I want to align and integrate Youth Voices, NowComment and Kumospace as part of the DigDiscourse efforts. I'm not sure it all fits together, but I hope that I can find a unifying structure that encourages others to join these efforts. I also want to be my best scheduler and planne so that proposals of "let's write about this" don't just get forgotton. Oh, and part of this will be to get a video about AI and Youth Voices together for the Write Center Conference. How can I make this all feel like the same inetellectual and pedagogical program and not a series of interesting dispaeate events and projects?

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Paul A and/or Haiku Here Tool (Jun 30 2023 6:54PM) : Make this into a poem for me. more
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This Thinking Partner turns text into haiku poetry

Connect the parts
in a unifying frame
Challenge and create

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DMU Timestamp: June 23, 2023 23:36

Added June 25, 2023 at 6:48pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 25 Summer Sunday

Slow day today in terms of my goals and all. I spent some time thinking and talking to Marcie about Jim Moffett, and I reviewed a few documents that I read as part of a Moffett study group that the NWP is sponsoring. I'm interested to understand his relationship to the NWP and his history in general, his Interaction series and the protests and his turn to meditation and introspection. I think there are interesting lessons here.

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It has been a while since I added any Thinking Partners and I have a lot of ideas to work on there, bringing some particularly effective templates from Youth Voices to NowComment.

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And now I wondering how Moffett's frameworks would be of value to a writer in the form of AI feedback.

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So yeah, that's what I'm thinking.

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DMU Timestamp: June 23, 2023 23:36

Added June 26, 2023 at 3:11pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 26

I just posted this in a Deeper Dive that is about putting together text-sets on the NWP's Studio.

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I'm a retired secondary teacher and a teacher consultant for the New York City Writing Project (NYCWP). I manage two platforms where text sets and argument are nurtured: https://youthvoices.live and https://nowcomment.com.

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This spring, a colleague, a third-grade teacher, Marina Lombardo, from the NYCWP and I are facilitating four-week series of workshops designed to introduce graduate students--who are in a STEM program at Lehman College--to multimodal literacy. They will be student teaching, beginning as observers in the fall.

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Marina just completed a problem-based "solutionary" project with her third graders about the Hudson River, and we are using her work as a model project. She is quickly gathering student work and the resources she used with them into a collection on NowComment.

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We plan to use an inquiry approach with the STEM students in July, asking them to pull together a text-set around a question that might be appropriate for the students they will be working with in the fall, Most of them will be working with early-childhood and childhood levels.

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I'd love to see how elementary school teachers think about text-sets that might be built around inquiry-based learning.

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Looking forward!

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As far as my questions... I'm deeply immersed in AI these days, and given the students I'll be working with in July (see above), I want to think about pulling together a text-set about AI in early-childhood and elementary education. #AILiteracies #elementary #earlychildhood #Inquiry #TextSets

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DMU Timestamp: June 23, 2023 23:36

Added June 27, 2023 at 8:53pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 27 Thoughts about Kumospace

After a day of playing with DigDiscourse teachers in Kumospace, and seeing teachers think, "Hey, I could use this," I'm thinking about how this platform is most appropriate for students who are at a distance from each other and maybe the teacher. As such, it might act as a way to connect classrooms both face to face and asynchronously.

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DMU Timestamp: June 28, 2023 00:53

Added June 28, 2023 at 4:34pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 28 - summary of recent improvements

Dear Friend of Thinking Partners on NowComment:

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You can follow these links and read the small print here AND/OR join us tonight at 9E/8C/7M/6P at kumospace.com/youthvoices and we can talk!
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I want to update you on a few things that we have improved upon in the first part of our summer of testing (since March).
More Context
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First, one of the behind the scenes changes, we have been reducing the number of tokens that we dedicate to the results of a query. The upshot of this is that you can now use Thinking Partners on the whole text -- as long as that text is 25 or 30 average paragraphs long or shorter. Try it. We put the AI icon back on the "General Document Comments" link. If your text is too long, you will get a box explaining how many tokens (not the same thing as words) you are over. Clearly, we are still testing this, but so far, we are able to do a lot more text than we were able to do a few weeks ago. And OpenAI will probably continue to expand their context levels. Please test this out and stay tuned.
New possibilities
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Next, this page sums up a lot of the new possibilities, most of which were recommended by you: Thinking Partners. When you get a chance, please review this and let me know what might still be unclear.
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Some details for you as an early tester
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  • One of the systems we have put in place is to give Group Administrators the ability to see and edit any Thinking Partner created by members of the group that they administer. This way a teacher, for example, would be able to see and edit Thinking Partners that students in their classes or groups had created. And the rest of us won't see it happening -- until a Thinking Partner is made public.
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  • In addition, the Group Administrator (often teacher) would be able to select Thinking Partners from their group to share with the entire group. These, then, would be available to use and duplicate by other members of the group without complicating the "public" list.
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  • Test this out by joining the Thinking Partners Group. Many of the partners that have been created from March - June are shared with that group, and when you join they will all show up on your Thinking Partners page and drop-down menu.
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  • Note that there is a parenthetical (public) next to the partners that everybody sees.
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A basic set
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So one of the things that I will continue to need your help on is to identify and/or create a basic set of Thinking Partners that a new user sees. So I have started to winnow down to the following list. Here's what a new user -- or someone who is not in a group with Thinking Partners -- sees:
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This is something I will want to get more feedback about -- how many? which ones? -- in the next two months.
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Now something delightful!
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There has been a clear request to be able to easily see the prompts. I think what Jeremie Wood, the NowComment tech wizard, came up with is pretty nice, When you click through the drop-down menu, you will see a two-column box that shows you the title, the description, and the prompt for each Thinking Partner.
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Please jump onto NowComment and play with these new features!
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A way to play!
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I've spent some time putting together this set of instructions to encourage/guide the creation of AI Dialogue Notebooks. It's #18 under Help > Videos and Overviews.
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Check it out - and leave Kevin a reply or two!
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Our colleague and friend Kevin Hodgson has been kind enough to keep his AI Reflection Journal public.
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SEE YOU TONIGHT
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at 9E/8C/7M/6P kumospace.com/ youthvoices
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DMU Timestamp: June 28, 2023 12:38

Added June 29, 2023 at 11:34pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 29 a new introduction after TTT last night requested some overview

By the end of these 19 steps, you will have a notebook--or what is called a collection on NowComment--where you can collect different kinds of multimodal documents that you are using for your own reasons and that you can invite others to comment on as well.

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An Ai Dialogue Notebook is a place to gather both your daily and weekly logs about your thinking and resources that you find helpful in your journey to find solutions to you own burning questions or wicked problems that are important to you and your community.

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You control how public, private, or shared with a small group you make the different documents in your Notebook.

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We begin by uploading one document that you will add to each day for a week. The idea is that you can log your questions, ideas, observations, conversations (with yourself and others), inspiring moments, frustrations.., things going on with you and in your head each day.

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The directions below show you how to collect your daily logs on one document each week, which will allow you to use Thinking Partners beside your freewriting, jottings, exploratory logs. You can upload a new document each week for you logs, then collect these into a Personal Collection on NowComment. This collection is your AI Dialogue Notebook.

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In time, as you come upon videos, articles, short stories, poems, news items... that relate to the questions and ideas in your logs, you can upload those items to your notebook as well.

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Here's an example: Paul's Notebook
It worth saying that this notebook is public so that others can see it as an example. We recommend (and the instructions below suggest) that you keep the Personal Collection that is your notebook private and shared with the People and Groups you invite. That way you can choose to keep some documents in your notebook/collection private (such as your logs) and other things can be made public (such as the resources you find).

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DMU Timestamp: June 30, 2023 01:14

Added June 30, 2023 at 7:15am by Paul Allison
Title: June 30 I wrote this in response to feedback on Wednesday

By the end of these 19 steps, you will have a notebook--or what is called a collection on NowComment--where you can collect different kinds of multimodal documents that you are using for your own reasons and that you can invite others to comment on as well.

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An Ai Dialogue Notebook is a place to gather both your daily and weekly logs about your thinking and resources that you find helpful in your journey to find solutions to you own burning questions or wicked problems that are important to you and your community.

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You control how public, private, or shared with a small group you make the different documents in your Notebook.

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We begin by uploading one document that you will add to each day for a week. The idea is that you can log your questions, ideas, observations, conversations (with yourself and others), inspiring moments, frustrations.., things going on with you and in your head each day.

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The directions below show you how to collect your daily logs on one document each week, which will allow you to use Thinking Partners beside your freewriting, jottings, exploratory logs. You can upload a new document each week for you logs, then collect these into a Personal Collection on NowComment. This collection is your AI Dialogue Notebook.

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In time, as you come upon videos, articles, short stories, poems, news items... that relate to the questions and ideas in your logs, you can upload those items to your notebook as well.

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Here's an example: Paul's Notebook
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Title: a symphony between conflicting projects, trying to bring a harmony of ideas for one ultimate end.

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Title: A wooden knight in the foreground, mid-morning sun as the backdrop, and an abstract painting style to capture the idea of different perspectives and expertise in chess.

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Helps us to identify this Habit of Mind in the text.

This example showcases a strong example of “Thinking Interdependently.” The persona in this scenario is attempting to connect multiple ideas and projects into “a unifying structure” that “encourages others to join”. By making the goal “to make this all feel like the same intellectual and pedagogical program,” rather than a set of disparate events, this demonstrates an understanding that in order to tackle complex tasks, multiple minds and perspectives are necessary. The person in this scenario is actively thinking interdependently, building on other’s ideas, and seeking others’ input to create a larger, collective, and collaborative project.

On the other hand, if this person had been only concentrating on their own work, without considering its relationship to other projects, the potential collective outcome would not have been achievable. To create the unifying structure, this individual should consider active collaboration with others, exploring different viewpoints and perspectives on the topics, and seeking agreement and consensus with the group involved. They should also look for ways to share their individual and collective knowledge to create a shared understanding of the projects.

Finally, this example is a prompt for us to re-read the text with an eye for the “Thinking Interdependently” Habit of Mind. What other examples in the text can we identify that show the person integrating multiple projects and striving for collective understanding and collaboration with others? Is there anything that could be better or improved with their current thinking? How can we use this example to help make “Thinking Interdependently” more tangible and grow its presence in our lives?

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Alignment: The text carefully aligns the three elements of Youth Voices, NowComment, and Kumospace to create a unified program as part of the DigDiscourse efforts. It identifies a goal of creating a structure to invite others to join the efforts when it sometimes can be difficult to do so. It also sets an ambition to become a better scheduler and planner, in order to ensure that the proposals are not forgotten. Finally, it sets a goal to create a video around the subject matter of AI and Youth Voices for Write Center Conference. You could further develop this alignment of ideas by making sure that there is an explicit connection between the themes of the AI video and the goals of the DigDiscourse efforts. Additionally, you can tie specific actionable steps to each one of the goals in order to unify them into a single, more concrete program.

Precision: The text is very precise about the the mission of unifying the mentioned programs, as well as setting up the goals for the DigDiscourse efforts. For example, the goal of becoming a better scheduler and planner is described in very clear terms. Additionally, the text is specific about where the video will be presented and what will be the subject matter of it. You could further refine the precision of your writing by adding idea of timelines for the completion of the individual pieces of the program, as well as a clear overview of each one of the projects in relation to the the whole.

Sequencing: The text defines a manageable sequence of goals that creates an understandable, unified structure for the DigDiscourse efforts. The sequence starts with the need to integrate the three tools, continues with finding a unifying structure, defines a goal of becoming a better scheduler and planner, and finally mentions the video for the Write Center Conference. You could further articulate the sequence by dividing the individual pieces into smaller tasks that will help create a more manageable plan. Additionally, you could create a timeline that indicates when each of the tasks needs to be completed in order to adhere to the overall goal of the program.

By considering and applying the principles of Iyengar Yoga, you will be able to take your writing to the next level. Taking a step back and analyzing your structure, precision and sequencing of ideas in relation to Iyengar Yoga principles can help you build a unified and stronger program that will bring the DigDiscourse efforts to life. Now, explore further and find new ways of integrating the Iyengar Yoga principles into your writing that suit your style and goals. Try to approach this challenge with a sense of curiosity and create something new and inviting.

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Question 1: How can I ensure that my efforts are unified and don’t seem disjointed?
Quote from the text: “I’m not sure it all fits together, but I hope that I can find a unifying structure that encourages others to join these efforts.”
Definition of Keywords: Unifying structure: A plan or arrangement that integrates all the parts into one whole. Encourages: To urge on; stimulate; motivate.

Question 2: What do I need to consider to be an effective scheduler and planner?
Quote from the text: “I also want to be my best scheduler and planne so that proposals of “let’s write about this” don’t just get forgotton.”
Definition of Keywords: Scheduler: Someone who assigns tasks in an orderly manner. Planner: Someone who establishes a plan of action or movement for a particular event.

Question 3: What is the best way to tie together different elements (AI, Youth Voices, video, etc.) of a single program?
Quote from the text: “How can I make this all feel like the same intellectual and pedagogical program and not a series of interesting dispaeate events and projects?”
Definition of Keywords: Pedagogical: Relating to the methods, principles, and practice of teaching. Disparate: Unrelated or dissimilar; mixed in a confusing or inconsistent way.

Now, please re-read the text in order to answer each of the three questions. Paraphrase the quotes in your answers.

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It sounds like you have a lot of goals for your project and want to make sure they are all integrated and coherent. It seems like you are looking for a way to bring together Youth Voices, NowComment, and Kumospace in an organized structure that encourages collaboration. Additionally, you want to be a successful planner and scheduler, so you don’t forget about your ideas, and also create a video about AI and Youth Voices for the Write Center Conference. Through all of this, you want to weave everything together and create a unified intellectual and pedagogical program. It might be helpful to create an action plan and break down all the elements that you need to create in order to tackle this goal.

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It sounds like you are trying to bring together many aspects of you project, DigDiscourse, and make sense of the individual pieces by creating a unifying core. Specifically, you are looking to incorporate Youth Voices, NowComment, Kumospace, writing and AI into this core. You want to make sure that you create a strong and practical schedule and are considering making a video for the Write Center Conference. Ultimately, you are seeking to make all the pieces feel like an integrated intellectual and pedagogical program and not just a group of scattered events and initiatives.

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You have paid attention to how the ideas in your text are connected, demonstrating your awareness of the principle of alignment. To further exemplify this principle, you have used short sentences and phrases, connecting these concise statements together. This thoughtful sequencing of ideas gives your piece a clear structure that your readers will be able to follow. To further explore alignment, consider how each of the projects listed (i.e. Youth Voices, NowComment, and Kumospace) could further inform each other. For example, explore the potential for your Kumospace project to utilize what has been learned from Youth Voices or NowComment. Additionally, also find ways to combine the various projects together so that they collectively demonstrate a more unified and cohesive program. By doing this, you can further integrate these disparate projects into a larger framework, creating a stronger sense of alignment in your writing.

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I wrote this passage to demonstrate the complexity of the tasks I am taking on as a digital literacy educator in terms of the various projects I am undertaking and, hopefully, connect them into something cohesive. Two of the lines I think are really essential for me to think about are “I’m not sure it all fits together" and "How can I make this all feel like the same intellectual and pedagogical program and not a series of interesting disparate events and projects?” – these two lines indicate that I want to make connections between the projects, but I’m not sure if this is possible or how I can do it. I want readers to sense my desire to bring all of the projects together and develop a connection between them, rather than them seeming like separate, unconnected things. My goal with this text was to articulate my thoughts in a way that is simple and relatable so that readers can understand my feelings and care about this effort.

Now I’d love to learn how this text resonated with you. How would you explain the concept of linking different projects together in a way that feels like one intellectual and pedagogical program to others? Have you had a similar experience when you were working on projects or did you ever encounter a situation in which you wanted to connect disparate elements of a project, but weren’t sure how to do it? Let me know!

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Theme: Connecting Projects

Metaphors:
1. Putting together a jigsaw puzzle
2. A house of cards
3. A quilt of ideas
4. A ladder of shared projects
5. A network of interlinked ideas

Similes:
1. Connecting the projects is like solving a Rubik’s cube
2. It’s like trying to weave a carpet of planning and proposals
3. Aligning the projects is like fitting together puzzle pieces
4. Linking the projects is like creating a tapestry of ideas
5. Scheduling it all together is like constructing a daisy chain of events

Hyperboles:
1. Threading together a million projects into one
2. Juggling a million and one things at once
3. Merging a million ideas into one big project
4. Trying to spin nine million different projects into one cohesive effort
5. Ranking an infinite amount of tasks into a sensible order

Personifications:
1. Finding harmony among the projects
2. Picking the ideas strewn across the projects
3. Letting the projects collaborate
4. Having the projects talk to each other
5. Facilitating a conversation between the projects

Extended Metaphors:
1. It’s like rebuilding an aircraft in mid flight; I’m the engineer trying to revamp and restructure the components, resources, and plans before time runs out.
2. I’m like a conductor of a symphony between conflicting projects, trying to bring a harmony of ideas for one ultimate end.
3. I’m in a marathon race, I’ve got to maintain my footing and footing the line between all my projects; be sure not to trip and fall behind or give up before I even start.
4. Like a playwright creating a dramatic masterpiece, I’m stringing together my projects, intertwined in an intricate masterpiece.
5. I’m a magician of my projects, carefully taking and curating the pieces to turn different projects into one big, lively production.

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A prompt for a Faith Ringgold-like image could be: In the foreground, a woman stands in profile with one hand balancing a stack of books, while the other hand is held up in an embrace. She looks confidently toward the horizon with her back to the setting sun, its warm, golden light bathing her in a beacon of hope. The vibrant colors of the scene provide a sneak peek into the energy and purpose behind her efforts, while the sky is a deep shade of blue that implies calm acceptance and perseverance.

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A metaphorical winding road of potential, illuminated by a hovering moon, stretched between the towering mountains of Youth Voices, NowComment, and Kumospace, representing the effort to combine them into a unified effort lit by the promise of a video about AI—captured in a dreamlike style befitting Georgia O’Keeffe.

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Capture Jacob Lawrence’s style as a representation of my project: a jumbled pile of nails, rusty pieces of chains and bright new screws against a bright golden sunset, with a low angled close-up perspective that includes a few small details like a thin scattered wire or a few extra screws. Copy and paste this prompt into an image generator like https://StableDiffusionWeb.com..

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I the style of Jacob Lawrence show a midnight blue sky, silhouetted figures lit by a single streetlamp gathering books, technology and a whiteboard to discuss youth empowerment, bracing against a powerful wind.
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