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How AI can teach kids to write – not just cheat

Author: Javeria Salman

Salman, Javeria. “How AI Can Teach Kids to Write – Not Just Cheat.” The Hechinger Report, 25 Oct. 2023, hechingerreport.org/how-ai-can-teach-kids-to-write-not-just-cheat/.


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Chat GPT’s ‘voiceless’ writing can help students find their writer’s ‘voice,’ and allow teachers to quickly analyze trends in student writing

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While the reading and math “wars” have gotten a lot of attention in education in recent years, writing instruction has not received that same focus. That is, until the release of ChatGPT last year.

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There isn’t really an agreed-upon approach to teaching writing, according to Sarah Levine, an assistant professor at Stanford University’s Graduate School of Education. But now that ChatGPT is here to stay, experts like Levine are trying to figure how to teach writing to K-12 students in an age of AI.

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“The question that teachers are having to ask themselves is, what’s writing for?” she said.

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ChatGPT can produce a perfectly serviceable writing “product,” she said. But writing isn’t a product per se — it’s a tool for thinking, for organizing ideas, she said.

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“ChatGPT and other text-based tools can’t think for us,” she said. “There’s still things to learn when it comes to writing because writing is a form of figuring out what you think.”

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Earlier this year, Levine and her team conducted a pilot study at a high school in San Francisco. Students in an English class were given access to ChatGPT to see how they engaged with the tool.

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Some were given prompts that asked them to create an argument based on directions, such as, “Some people say we should have a new mascot at our school. Some people say we should keep our old mascot. What do you think?” Other prompts were more creative, such as asking students to write an outline for a movie script about a new superhero based at their school.

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Levine and her team found that students looked to ChatGPT, primarily, for help in two categories: Ideas or inspiration to get started on the prompt questions (for example, “What kind of mascots do other schools have?”) and guidance on the writing process (“How do you write a good ghost story?” ).

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Reflecting on the statement you’re contemplating, it appears you are exploring the ways in which ChatGPT assists students in their educational endeavors. Given that you’re engaged in academia, constantly seeking fresh perspectives, and that you have an interest in the utility of technology in learning, this finding about ChatGPT can be particularly relevant.

Considering your quest for ideas or inspiration, just like the students in Levine’s research who were looking for a starting point for their prompt questions, you might see a mirror to your own experiences. When you asked, "What kind of mascots do other schools have?” ChatGPT could serve as a springboard for creativity, offering various examples that could trigger a unique idea for your own context.

Remember the question you’re examining – it delves into the motives behind turning to ChatGPT for help. Your experiences with seeking guidance on the writing process, such as “How do you write a good ghost story?” resonate with the second category Levine identified. It’s not just about getting the ideas, but also about refining the craft of writing, which you value in your pursuit of effective communication.

Would it be accurate to say that you’ve found ChatGPT most beneficial in these same two categories? Maybe upon reflecting on the text and your own inquiries, you’ll discover additional ways that ChatGPT has been valuable, or perhaps it’ll inspire you to explore further uses.

It could be fruitful to reread the text and ask yourself if there are other elements of ChatGPT’s assistance that align with your experiences or if any new insights emerge. Does this statement about ChatGPT’s role in providing ideas and writing guidance resonate with other aspects of your academic journey not explicitly mentioned? This reflection could potentially deepen your understanding of how AI tools like ChatGPT can be interwoven into your academic practice.

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“What the kids are now getting from this AI is what expert writers already have: a big bank of examples that they can draw from when they’re creating,” Levine said. Using ChatGPT as a sounding board for specific questions like these can help students learn to be stronger writers, she added.

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While the study is ongoing, the early findings revealed something surprising: Kids weren’t excited about ChatGPT’s writing. “They thought it was ‘too perfect.’ Or ‘like a robot,’” Levine said. “One team that was writing said, ‘We asked ChatGPT to edit our work, and it took out all of our jokes so we put them back.’”

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Levine said that, to her, that was the big takeaway of the pilot. She’s heard teachers say they struggle to help students find their voice in writing. When students could contrast their own writing to ChatGPT’s more generic version, Levine said, they were able to “understand what their own voice is and what it does.”

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Mark Warschauer, a professor of education at the University of California, Irvine, has spent years studying how technology can change writing instruction and the nature of writing itself. When ChatGPT was released, he decided to tailor some of his research to study ways generative AI could help students and teachers, particularly English language learners and bilingual learners.

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Like Levine, Warschauer, director of the university’s Digital Learning Lab, said he believes ChatGPT can help students who struggle with writing to organize their ideas, and edit and revise their writing. Essentially, it could be used as an early feedback tool to supplement the work of a teacher, he said.

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As part of a project on the effectiveness of ChatGPT as a tool for giving students feedback on their writing, his team at the Digital Learning Lab placed student essays that had already been evaluated by teachers into ChatGPT and asked the AI to provide its own feedback. Then experts blindly graded both the human and AI feedback. While the experts found the human feedback was a little better overall, the AI feedback was good enough to provide value in the classroom. It could help guide students as they progressed on an assignment, allowing teachers to spend more time with students who need extra support, Warschauer said.

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Rolyn H Rolyn H (Dec 12 2023 6:47PM) : I love the idea of students getting feedback - if the teacher can't get to all the students' work, there's that assurance that they can still get some kind of feedback.
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Warschauer’s team has also partnered with UC Irvine’s school of engineering to create an intelligent writing coach, to be called PapyrusAI. The tool, which the teams plan to release next year, would be tailored to help middle school and high school students improve their writing through intensive coaching, he said.

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In addition, he said, the tool is being designed to provide a safe and protected way to use AI, to address parents’ and educators’ concerns about student data and privacy on ChatGPT, which stores students’ data.

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Stanford’s Levine also sees value in using ChatGPT to coach students on writing.

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“A lot of teachers feel intimidated when it comes to teaching writing, because they themselves don’t necessarily feel like they’re the best writers,” Levine said. ChatGPT can help teachers fill in gaps in writing instruction by working as students’ debate partner or coach she said.

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ChatGPT could also help teachers more quickly analyze trends in student writing, identifying areas of success or struggle. If students “don’t understand how to connect one idea to another,” Levine said, Chat GPT could provide this feedback instead of teachers having to write, “Try connecting these ideas using a transition,” on every paper. Teachers could then devote more time to developing lessons that focus on that skill.

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“Writing should be and is a human experience,” Levine said. Teachers can retain that experience, even when using AI. If they help students learn how to use the new tool effectively — much as they now use spellcheck or Grammarly — students will understand that ChatGPT is “more or less a giant autocomplete machine, as opposed to a place that has facts,” she said.

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“If we think that clarifying your own thinking is something worth doing, then we need to teach writing,” Levine said. “In other words, writing is a way of learning. It’s not just a way of showing your learning.”

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This story about AI writing was produced by The Hechinger Report, a nonprofit, independent news organization focused on inequality and innovation in education. Sign up for the Hechinger newsletter.

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DMU Timestamp: November 14, 2023 14:50

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Rolyn H Rolyn H (Dec 12 2023 5:57PM) : Writing not as a product but as a thinking tool is an important precept.
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Jessica M Jessica M (May 27 2024 5:12PM) : Amazing info more

Thanks for posting it. AI can be for good if you use it in the right way

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