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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 3:23PM) : lighter/thinner than rest of URL
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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 3:27PM) : They had not much room and no way to edit this graphic to add "Reserva la fecha", so no Spanish made it in... :-<
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Maria Garlock (Jul 08 2024 11:47PM) : Is there any way we could align the date with the 'save the date' banner? I feel that the 'save the date' banner takes away from the actual date slightly (it looks just as big/bigger) but curious what you all think too!
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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 5:55PM) : I changed the wording to be a little lighthearted/playful... also added a mention of Charlottesville and Waynesboro offices.
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Maria Garlock (Jul 08 2024 11:39PM) : colors are better, though i suggest less green? maybe panton 13-0755 tpx, primrose yellow. just a thought
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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 5:56PM) : Much bolder now (good Maria suggestion to do something to achieve that effect)
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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 5:59PM) : A little shorter so could be a bigger font size
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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 5:59PM) : Another Maria suggestion they adopted
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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 6:00PM) : shorter and centered, much cleaner
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Maria Garlock (Jul 08 2024 11:40PM) : could we add an exclamation after info? "info!"
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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 6:02PM) : Andrea suggested removing special service, which we did... and then since it was a very short line I suggested dropping it to the bottom bullet to keep things looking balanced!?
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Dan Doernberg (Jul 08 2024 6:11PM) : Certainly solves the legibility issue, both white on Navy in this column and Navy on white are easy to read... but am wondering if this navy is so dark that it looks like Black, and the white/black contract not so interesting!???
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Maria Garlock (Jul 08 2024 11:37PM) : i agree, could we make the background blue color a bit brighter? such as the same blue from the honduras flag
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Maria Garlock (Jul 08 2024 11:42PM) : What do the bullet graphics serve? If we have them, is there any way they could be on the left side of the text? It seems out of place being on the right, esp since we are reading left to right
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Maria Garlock (Jul 08 2024 11:43PM) : also, it looks like the bulleted list is the only body of text that is right justified. could we make it centered or left justified to be consistent? otherwise this area looks great
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Maria Garlock (Jul 08 2024 11:50PM) : I feel the info about ticket purchasing is not as clear. more
‘Purchase your tickets in advance’ is helpful, but is the ticket purchasing happening at the QR code or elsewhere? . We could say Purchase tickets in advance by scanning this QR code! (Kids are free) or something more claro?
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