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Sabroso 2024 mockup draft02

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Jul-22-24 Sabroso 2023 for comparison

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Dan D (Jul 22 2024 9:23AM) : Should we put country of origin (or "various") in parentheses after their name? more

Am wondering if that would be helpful in (1) attracting Latinos from those countries and (2) showing diversity of countries to attract general audiences too.

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Dan D (Jul 22 2024 9:27AM) : I'd be curious to see a version without the symmetrical dancer here. more

100% symmetry not as visually interesting to the eye, also would give more white space (or maybe allow slightly bigger font)

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Dan D (Jul 22 2024 9:30AM) : too crowded... probably won't be room for logo and big-enough QR code?
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Dan D (Jul 22 2024 9:33AM) : MUSIC •  DANCE •  FOOD •  ART •  CULTURE more

saves space by not needing word “AND”… I recommend staring list with the grabbiest specific attractions (music and dance… or maybe food music dance) and squishy “culture” last.

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Dan D (Jul 22 2024 9:35AM) : I do like this font, what is its name? [Edited]
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Dan D (Jul 22 2024 9:36AM) : Thanks for showing us this more saturated yellow option (mockup#1 was more cream, much less saturated)... but I think I like the red background effect more... we can talk and show these options to more folks and see if there's a consensus.
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Dan D (Jul 22 2024 6:21PM) : NEW SINCE ZOOM CALL: TING PAVILION (CHARLOTTESVILLE DOWNTOWN MALL) [Edited] more

This punctuation is several characters shorter

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Added July 22, 2024 at 9:20am by Dan Doernberg
Title: Sabroso 2023 for comparison

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