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Cville Sabroso 2024 Final Flyer Draft 3

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When	Why
Jul-26-24	Same Design - Red background
Jul-26-24	Same Design - Red and white gradient background
Jul-26-24	Same Design - Red background

same design but different color options (including background)

DMU Timestamp: July 23, 2024 12:13

same design red background

DMU Timestamp: July 23, 2024 12:13

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Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 5:12PM) : Dan/Andrea/All,if you could decide which color/color style (gradient/solid/blocking) you like the best (maybe we could narrow down to 5), I will apply the changes accordingly to those 5. Or if you think there is a better color/style, let me know.

Jul 28

Dan D Dan D (Jul 28 2024 6:04PM) : I'm still getting input, but I'd expect we can narrow down to 2-3 popular options.... maybe in time for the next round of changes, or color can come afterwards.

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Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 7:53PM) : 1-10pm is missing

Jul 28

Dan D Dan D (Jul 28 2024 7:04PM) : This is probably the most important, just making sure you saw since not responded to.

Ting Pavilion 0

Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 7:54PM) : I think it needs to say Charlottesville explicitly, how about: more

Ting Pavilion (Charlottesville Downtown Mall)

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Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 7:57PM) : There is some space here, but is not 2 photos down in same column [Edited] more

Do we want there to be a standard (or minimum) amount of space between the text and image elements?

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:51PM) : There will be equal amount of space from the text and the photos! Just a placeholder for now.

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Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 7:59PM) : Because this one is significantly longer than the one in line#1 it cuts into space needed for padding between caption text and photo on both items on this line!? more

Maybe we can vary the horizontal space given to music notes but maybe shrink both so we don’t have to sacrifice padding between text and photos?

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:52PM) : Yes, this will depend on the image itself. Ill adjust the music notes accordingly

Jul 28

Dan D Dan D (Jul 28 2024 6:05PM) : Ah, yes, that makes perfect sense.

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Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 8:01PM) : Wondering if Column 1 and Column 2 used different text colors to help the viewer's eye group column 1 text+photos separately from column 2 text+photos??

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:53PM) : Yes, i agree. We should maybe keep them the same color , just a different tone (dark green vs light green)

Jul 28

Dan D Dan D (Jul 28 2024 6:05PM) : Different shades is a good thought, hadn't occurred to me... like that!

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Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 8:05PM) : Maria-- I think I remember you saying you didn't like gradient effect, am wondering if you changed your mind or just seeing how it looks?

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:53PM) : I dont, but i don’t mind the gradient effect here for the yellow. I think some colors such as this one does as good job emphasizing the poster. I didnt like it with the red lol

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Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 8:07PM) : Do we gain anything by not using standard dashes (or European periods) for the phone# pattern ddd-ddd-dddd. more

People understand instantly that it’s a phone# when they see the dashes, wondering if losing that instant recognition (making them stop to process what those numbers are) is in our interest.

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:54PM) : Ill change that, i agree.

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Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 8:08PM) : For sure there has to be a QR code; I'd like there to be a URL too, but do you have room?

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:54PM) : Yes, we should have room.

Sponsor names+photos 0

Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 8:09PM) : Andrea question -- we may have a lot more this year, wondering if we can get away with not listing the nonprofits who are paying a very low rate??

Attractions -- alternate punctuation 0

Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 9:51PM) : Food • Music • Dance • Art • Culture more

Did you give this a try and decided against? Fine if so, we were leaning toward trying that when we discussed last draft.

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:54PM) : I didn’t update this! My fault, i want this to be changed to the dots, just forgot to update it.

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Jul 26

Dan D Dan D (Jul 26 2024 9:54PM) : Would it be good to have some extra white space by eliminating one or two of these other four (e.g. just one musical instrument instead of 2) ? [Edited] more

Same question on other side.

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:56PM) : I like the right side orientation and layout…though I do agree maybe i could clean up the left side. I actually think that filling this space with these elements adds some character here

Jul 28

Dan D Dan D (Jul 28 2024 6:06PM) : That sounds good to me... I think I was mainly reacting to the left side anyway.

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Jul 27

Dan D Dan D (Jul 27 2024 8:42AM) : maybe put in parentheses or italics, to make clear it's not part of performer name (some names may wrap to 2 lines, maybe 3?).

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:56PM) : Agree, sounds good

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Jul 27

Dan D Dan D (Jul 27 2024 8:45AM) : I have no opinion on these two options. A wild third idea, probably not practical but brainstorms don't need to be: could the flags (maybe a subset) be used for one or more of the letter "O" in Sabroso?

Jul 28

Maria G Maria G (Jul 28 2024 4:57PM) : I can draft the two options here, the line of flags and the circle. I think both are nice. But i think the O in sabroso might be a little confusing and not as ”centered”

Jul 28

Dan D Dan D (Jul 28 2024 6:06PM) : sounds like a plan!

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Aug 22

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 22 2024 12:29AM) : Don't forget to remove the word "Latino"

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