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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 2:21PM):
Javier/Xavier told me he was specifically teaching Bachata; IF true, is that worth specifying (versus more general "Latin American")?
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 2:23PM):
I think it looks more believable to round up (later) to nearest 5 minutes... no way we can hit times to the very minute, so I think doesn't look as good to give impression we can. Minor point!
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 2:30PM):
Maria and I tried a few approaches, we decided on using hyphens (and I advocated taking away any space characters within the phone#) so readers would more immediately grasp that it is a phone# being provided!
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 2:37PM):
I just tested (others pls confirm!) that capitalizing it as "CvilleSabroso" still resolves to our page and is much easier for people to read (make sense of) at first glance.
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Is there an extra (unwanted) space before the “c” in cville or is that just kerning?
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 2:46PM):
I'm wondering if the white space (vertical space) between each line could be condensed to make the design feel more "airy".
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It’s most pronounced to me for La Maquina de El Salvador, where their time almost runs into the row of photos below it.
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 2:50PM):
If this was a 2-liner maybe it could be flush left like most of the other bands.
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Same treatment could be done for Peru above… it is flush right, Panama is flush left, and La Maquina de El Salvador is centered… my eye notices the inconsistency. Of course 2 lines vs. 3 also not consistent, but feels like not to obvious or important… (but that’s just me, no claim to much art sense!!).
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 2:58PM):
This looks good here, and we also need to add Sin Barreras logo and name somewhere ("Hosted by" or "Organized by" would be nice, but takes more space). Good catch Annie!
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 3:18PM):
Readers could interpret this as El Tio and other businesses are selling tickets for us.
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I think we need to try one or more things to avoid that:
1. “Ticket info/purchase here”
2. Whatever text we use in #1, maybe make it 2 short lines so the readers’ eyes see it as going with the QR code rather than with the list of businesses.
3. Note— I know not done in the past, and maybe not room, but would it be good to note businesses as “Sponsored by” or “Thanks to our sponsors” or similar?
Andrea J(Aug 25 2024 11:20PM):
The only act missing is Victoria Brancho. She is a 12 year old girl and her mom does not have any professional pictures of her. We will not stress or make room for her. She will be listed on the day of program.
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 11:41PM):
Love that solution, that means just one version of poster, so performers will be happy (all appearing on all posters) and posters may be a bit cheaper per unit with larger run. Yay!!
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 3:01PM):
Any room/way to "Kids Zone 1-6pm" and "Beer Garden (Adults only)". If space tight could take out Kids Zone time and take out Adults only.
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Dan D(Aug 25 2024 3:05PM):
When the marketing team on thursday looked at the various colors, that was ONLY relevant to colors!
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The text and layouts were several versions back from what Maria had done, so fact that some things were missing from the color versions (e.g. no mention of Kids Zone or Beer Garden) was to be expected.
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Andrea has added the Sin Barreras host line. All is good!
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Is there an extra (unwanted) space before the “c” in cville or is that just kerning?
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Compare to: https://nowcomment.com/documents/379999 or Maria’s latest on Canva.
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When we circulate fliers to non-local media outlets (regional) we want to make sure they know what city the festival is in!
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It’s most pronounced to me for La Maquina de El Salvador, where their time almost runs into the row of photos below it.
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Same treatment could be done for Peru above… it is flush right, Panama is flush left, and La Maquina de El Salvador is centered… my eye notices the inconsistency. Of course 2 lines vs. 3 also not consistent, but feels like not to obvious or important… (but that’s just me, no claim to much art sense!!).
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I’m wondering if the 3 different background colors used make the overall design feel a little choppy?
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As discussed on Thursday, important for Sin Barreras to get credit for all the work/time/money we’re investing in the Festival!
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I think we need to try one or more things to avoid that:
3. Note— I know not done in the past, and maybe not room, but would it be good to note businesses as “Sponsored by” or “Thanks to our sponsors” or similar?1. “Ticket info/purchase here”
2. Whatever text we use in #1, maybe make it 2 short lines so the readers’ eyes see it as going with the QR code rather than with the list of businesses.
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1. I saw your email or text that you’re dropping Victoria Brancho from lineup; are other times extended or ??
2. If we have room, should we somehow add names and times to the poster of performers who we don’t have room for pictures of?
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The text and layouts were several versions back from what Maria had done, so fact that some things were missing from the color versions (e.g. no mention of Kids Zone or Beer Garden) was to be expected.
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