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DRAFT 12 (maybe not final?) 2024-09-21 CvilleSabroso Poster English
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| When | Why |
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| Aug-26-24 | Spanish (see Kids Zone+last line) |
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Added August 26, 2024 at 4:29pm
by Dan Doernberg
Title: Spanish (see Kids Zone+last line)
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Aug 26
Dan D
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Not a separate field of info, it's just a long line that doesn't fit on 1 line. Can you remove at least this white space (maybe the other line here and also the white space below Zone de niños too!?)
Aug 26
Dan D
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Translate to Spanish (if we even need the word, everyone will recognize what a facebook address is without being told, just like no need to day phone# for 434-531-0104
Aug 26
Dan D
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Mariam caught that in a previous draft they were noticeably different to her (black vs. blackish gray).
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they look OK here to me, but my eye not always so good…
Aug 26
Dan D
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Mariam has caught (from a previous version) that the tops are being cut off here by the flower graphic, can you pull the notes "down" toward the dancer a bit?
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Mariam indicated she might see same issue on other side, but I’m not seeing that myself… but take a quick look.
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