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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 10:30AM) : I told C-Ville Weekly that young adults 18-35 looking for parties was our primary audience for this ad, so I would put Beer Garden here (swap placement).... add word "Free" to Kids Zone [Edited]
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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:32AM) : I like your suggestions
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 10:31AM) : It gets kind of lost to my eye... I think the flag design takes too much screen real estate, probably too distracting more

design was great as standalone piece, but when we have a lot more to convey….

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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:33AM) : I'm indifferent about whether to keep or remove the flags. I'll support what ever you decide.
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Maria G Maria G (Sep 12 2024 9:39AM) : I am also indifferent but leaning more towards removing the flags.
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 10:43AM) : https://www.facebook.com/cvillesabroso/ •  434-531-0104
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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:34AM) : Yup sounds good.
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 10:46AM) : This takes up a lot of space and pretty prominent... I'm not even sure we want to specify pricing! more

If we do give prices, start with Kids free and go from there to Teens to Adults!?

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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:36AM) : I like your idea of starting with kids free but we should keep the pricing with Fanny's concern that we haven't been very public with it.
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Dan D (Sep 12 2024 8:10PM) : Teens 13-17 (NOT 12-17)
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 11:08AM) : I would use bullets here (and between date and time, rather than comma)
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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:37AM) : I will support what you think is best here. I'm indifferent whether bullets or paragraph format.
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Maria G Maria G (Sep 12 2024 9:40AM) : I think bullets would be nicer
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 11:09AM) : Don't think we need the graphic and name repition, better to use space for other features/benefits.
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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:39AM) : I get why they included to Fanny's point that people don't go to our FB or read all of our advertising. The picture is a quick reference of location. Maybe remove the Ting Pavilion Text? [Edited]
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 12:02PM) : I think this takes up too much space, and is too wordy, for a magazine ad. more

Not sure how to handle this…

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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:42AM) : Maybe use Bulltes/Stars to highlight the benefits?
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Maria G Maria G (Sep 12 2024 9:41AM) : I actually recommend switching the text with the maquina performers picture, condense the info and making that text bulleted
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 3:03PM) : Good to say Saturday too!
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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:43AM) : If we keep Ting image then replace Ting Pavilion text with Saturday?
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Dan D (Sep 12 2024 8:35AM) : To be generated, is this easy for C-Ville Weekly to do? Desired page is https://www.facebook.com/cvillesabroso/ [Edited] more

Whoever generates it should wait to see final design to we can pick a color that looks good (likely something more interesting than black!??)

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Dan D (Sep 12 2024 9:46AM) : I don't find the QR code graphic for the Cville Sabroso Facebook page, did we have one? The one used in the C-Ville Weekly ad is not working now, says "QR code Campaign has been disabled for some reason". more

I’m getting a similar message when I look at an older QR code; did we use a free QR code generator whose QR codes expire quickly???

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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 10:41AM) : My initial explanation of goals to C-Ville Weekly: [Edited] more

__1. graphically striking/interesting to get attention (of course!)

__2. MAIN TARGET AUDIENCE — young adults looking for a party (18-35 demographic, just to make up something??) 9 hours of Latin music and dancing and food and beer should be fun, yes!!?!.

Attached is the 60-second radio ad with the vibe I think we’d like to capture. Video of the headline act whose music is in the radio ad is La Maquina de El Salvador, video is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=otbLXQvkFzA )

__3. Target Audience #2 — families with kids (Kids Zone with free craft projects for younger kids and face painting with optional $1 donation)

__4. NOT a big goal of ad, but just in case helpful for any reason I’m also including our first-ever Tshirt design (we’ll be selling white Tshirts with the design at the show).

Biggest Challenge: because we’re at Ting Pavilion this year (very expensive to rent), we have to charge admission which we’ve never done before: Adults 18+ pay only $10 a ticket, teens 12-17 $5, and kids free (not too expensive for 9 hours ofentertainment we think). We want to acknowledge/disclose that there is a charge, but probably we don’t need to specify exact ticket costs, they can find that out when go to our website (QR code and URL link both to be provided).

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Annie G Annie G (Sep 05 2024 12:39PM) : Don't forget Sin Barreras as host: name, logo, and "Building a Community without Barriers" [Edited]
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 11:02AM) : Should we give performer lineup as a small table? [Edited] more

1:00 Opening
1:25 Casa de la cultura Peru (Peru)
1:45 Victoria Bracho (Venezuela)
2:00 Raices Ecuatorianas (Ecuador)
2:30 Panamanian Traditional (Panama)
3:05 Tahuantinsuyo (Peru)
4:00 Tradiciones Bolivianas (Bolivia)
4:35 Raices Ecuatorianas (Ecuador)
4:55 Villa Sabrosa (Mexico)
5:25 Foreign Playerz (Social Dancing)
5:50 Atrapado Musical (Mexico)
7:05 Kids Parade of Flags
7:40 La Maquina (El Savador)

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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:45AM) : If you thought there was too much text before why would we add the lineup here? or maybe add line up and a couple bullet points of what they would get? [Edited]
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Dan D (Sep 05 2024 1:23PM) : Annie ideas: Do we list sponsors? Mention community and other vendors?
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Andrea J Andrea J (Sep 12 2024 1:46AM) : No we have too many and if you thought too much text before we would just open the door to criticism that we mentioned some and not others.
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