Document: Invite

Comments:

3736 Cville Sabroso 2025 FullPage CvilleWeekly

Sabroso 2025 display ad

DMU Timestamp: August 27, 2025 01:45

Paragraph 1 (Image 1) 0

No whole image conversations. Start one.

Whole Image 0

No whole image conversations. Start one.

Opening block of text 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:32AM) : Probaby too much text, and all in a big block. Alternative below. more

Cville Sabroso is 9 hours of family-friendly live music and lively dance performances, food, artisan crafts, and interactive cultural activities. Sabroso has something fun for everyone!

Cville Sabroso is an unforgettable celebration of the vibrant Latino spirit and cultural heritage; come experience the richness, diversity, and warm hospitality of Latino/Hispanic communities!

Aug 31

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 31 2025 6:14PM) : I agree that it is too much text.

OLD QR Code 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:37AM) : 1. new QR code was in the original NowComment document (appended at bottom below the marked up 20w24 ad). 2. Can this QR code be added to the Tickets bubble/burst (could be a bit smaller I think)? [Edited]

Aug 31

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 31 2025 6:48PM) : I like the size, could purple bubble be made bigger and moved to where this QR code is?

Sep 1

Dan D Dan D (Sep 01 2025 5:56AM) : Agree with Andrea, if QR code size can stay the same size while "combined" with ticket info that would be great! BUT if that can't work...

13th hard to read 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:38AM) : maybe a font oddity, but looks more like "1.3” than “13” to my eye

Aug 31

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 31 2025 6:36PM) : This looks fine to me but what if we changed color to white make it stand out?

Sep 1

Dan D Dan D (Sep 01 2025 6:03AM) : I'm not sure which element you're suggesting get changed to white. The background is currently white, changing font to white will make it disappear!

Kids Zone 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:43AM) : tweak ideas below [Edited] more

1. room to have a “Kids’ Zone” header on this burst?

2. Change where the quote marks go, should read:
Musical Instrument “Petting Zoo” (MIMA)

3. since some items are two lines, would it look OK to have small bullets for the first words of each item ( • Copa, • Musical, • Handicraft, • Face Painting)?

Sin Barreras logo 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:46AM) : Maybe this is taking up too much space here? (and 2 logos one after another doesn’t seem ideal) [Edited] more

Can this go to bottom left corner or elsewhere and a bit smaller to get us more space (e.g. roomier bursts).

bottom corner very pink/purple 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:47AM) : would it be good to mix up the colors, or does that make things too garrish/hard to read?

Aug 31

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 31 2025 7:01PM) : I like the white.

Sep 1

Dan D Dan D (Sep 01 2025 6:05AM) : Sorry, I was referring to the color of the bubbles... that bottom left corner has 3 pink/purples out of 4 background colors in that little grouping.

Schedule inaccuracy 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:49AM) : La Internacional Sonora Dinamita start time should be listed as 8:40 [Edited]

Aug 31

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 31 2025 7:02PM) : yes I would do that as covered in note below.

Room for header? 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:50AM) : "Performance Schedule” or “Performances" [Edited]

Aug 31

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 31 2025 6:33PM) : What about "Festival Line Up"?

Sep 1

Dan D Dan D (Sep 01 2025 6:06AM) : Another fine option. Faith, can you ask a couple of your colleagues what they prefer and see if there's a consensus (or go with your experience with such things!).

Sep 1

Dan D Dan D (Sep 01 2025 6:11AM) : On further thought, I'd go with "Performances", sign it's just one word (tho long) vs. two or three words... less processing required from readers who are just skimming rather than reading carefully.

Discount Period 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:56AM) : Current wording is fine for first ad run, will change for 2nd run: [Edited] more

2nd insertion only, should read:

13+ $10 online or at Ting on Saturday

Eliz country name 0

Aug 28

Dan D Dan D (Aug 28 2025 7:58AM) : Awaiting clarification

Aug 31

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 31 2025 6:24PM) : Are you looking for birth country of artist? or country the performance is from? I think he is planning to show a Colombia Cumbia because he's going to try to do something with final band. Did you need Ximena or I to find out? [Edited] more

Also La Internacional Sonora Dinamita needs to be listed as playing 8:30 to 9:50pm but as we discussed we are saying 10.

Sep 1

Dan D Dan D (Sep 01 2025 6:01AM) : Consistency I think is NOT critical here; we just want to give whichever bit of information will make the concert more appealing to attend! more

Last year we used “Social Dancing” for Foreign Playerz because we needed to communicate that we had social dancing as part of the program; hationality wasn’t particularly relevant.

Same for Elizabeth Lainez — even tho she’s not from Mexico, she’s playing Mexican ranchero music and I figured that since Mexico is the largest population of immigrants here (correct??) then having a lot of Mexican acts listed on the program would increase out appeal to that large group.

Replace 0

Aug 31

Andrea J Andrea J (Aug 31 2025 6:18PM) : Could this be replaced with "Culture . Food. Music. Performances" [Edited]

Sep 1

Dan D Dan D (Sep 01 2025 6:08AM) : that wording is already changed per the note about the initial text block being too big.

Contact information 0

Sep 1

Dan D Dan D (Sep 01 2025 6:14AM) : 1. do we want/need the "www." 2. I realize that most text is in all-caps, but wondering if mixed case here might make the facebook URL easier to read? [Edited]

Please choose from the list of thinking partners to the left

Choose a tab, then select
your Thinking Partner

Original

Resubmission