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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:14AM) : This font with flourishes conveys to me something fancy, celebratory, or from a previous (Victorian?) era... I would use a more straightforward and easier-to-skim/read font for this urgent immediate action needed situation.
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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:15AM) : I think the black text would be easier to read against a lighter background color.
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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:17AM) : I think having any background image is a little distracting (especially for social media, where people are just scrolling and we want them to understand immediately what we're saying)
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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:19AM) : I'm not sure we've started using the other logo for anything else yet. more

Was there any technical problem using the old one, or did you like this one better?

Even if we switch to this one (I do kind of like the box of food, and showing big variety, vs. the grocery bag), the stars are a little distracting to me.

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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:20AM) : These words will be replaced with the respective logos that spell out the store name as part of that logo.
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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:21AM) : Do we want this in a smaller font?
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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:23AM) : I'm not sure if using a graphic for the numbered steps adds much... I find it maybe minorly distracting but maybe in an easier-to-read font without the two black stars it wouldn't be bad!?
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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:23AM) : Do we want this in blue and clickable!?
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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:24AM) : Local organizations collaborating on this Grocery Card Campaign: [Edited] more

Trying to avoid repeating forms of word “organize”, probably there’s a better way to say this!

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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:27AM) : Do we want organization logos here, or does that add clutter? more

If we don’t use a background image that will give the design more space (and more white space between elements) so maybe we could have large enough to be readable logos, but I’m not sure that’s good or important here (certainly in general we would use logos, but…)

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Dan D (Mar 26 2026 8:28AM) : I think it might be more visually interesting if there was only the one image on the left side!?

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