Current text (Lisa thinks too long) is:
The current immigration crack-down is making many of our immigrant neighbors food insecure: lost paychecks from loved ones detained or deported, fearful to go shopping, avoiding food aid they’re eligible for.
I kept some explanation but tried to trim it down… better? I think font can be further reduced.
Shorter wording maybe:
“Cards don’t show a dollar value, so we need…”
I think we need to explicitly say “You can Help” or similar somewhere… Do people think “Join the Grocery Card Campaign” is grabby enough when it’s not a familiar name/term??
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