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"In the driver’s seat there lay folded a paper: one of the colored ones, the pink or the green editions of the diurnal dogwatches, with a thick heavy typesplattered front page filled with ejaculations and pictures. "

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Dec 31 2015 4:36PM) : What is a dogwatch?
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Elvis Rosario Mendez Elvis Rosario Mendez (Feb 01 2016 5:16PM) : Elvis J Rosario. more

In these context, I think it refers to some kind of journal or pamphlet describing daily news and events.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 02 2016 6:35AM) : Not a pamphlet exactly--more like a tabloid.
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Wenting Wu Wenting Wu (Feb 02 2016 10:51PM) : I guess it is like newspaper but in a shorter and briefer form. [Edited]
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 03 2016 7:21AM) : Yes, but what kind of newspaper?
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Treasure Kim Treasure Kim (Feb 04 2016 11:40PM) : A newspaper filled with pictures and content that would grab the reader's attention quickly
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:19AM) : Yes
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Lynette Grodskiy Lynette Grodskiy (Feb 03 2016 12:47AM) : Dogwatch more

A dogwatch seems like a daily rendition of the most exciting and shocking news. Perhaps it contains some gossip and pictures that are considered improper.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 03 2016 7:21AM) : Improper in what way? Who would think they were improper?
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Lynette Grodskiy Lynette Grodskiy (Feb 04 2016 9:44PM) : Improper more

Some of the content may be seen as improper by conservative people during the time period. Similarly, to the example you used in class about not being able to use words such as pregnant on television; some of the content may be unappealing to those that want censorship.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:20AM) : ok
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student Venetia Persaud student Venetia Persaud (Feb 04 2016 4:30PM) : I agree with your comment. It seems that a dogwatch is a form of news that may contain inappropriate information. -Venetia
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:20AM) : inappropriate for who?
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Molly Deng Molly Deng (Feb 03 2016 12:31PM) : A dogwatch, according to dictionary.com is slang for “the period, after regular editions of a newspaper have gone to press, during which staff personnel remain on duty to away any new developments that may warrant an extra issue,”... more

A dogwatch, according to dictionary.com is slang for “the period, after regular editions of a newspaper have gone to press, during which staff personnel remain on duty to away any new developments that may warrant an extra issue,” so Faulkner’s “diurnal dogwatch” could refer to one of these extra issues.
I also think it’s worthwhile to mention that watchdog journalism refers to a form of journalism aimed at identifying societal problems.

- Molly Deng

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:08PM) : yes, that is the full explanation.
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George Ocampo George Ocampo (Feb 03 2016 10:04PM) : Dogwatch more

A dogwatch looks to be almost a tabloid form of news, one where the stories are based on gossip and probably indulge in things that are not exactly factual. It appears to be an entertainment form of reading.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:14PM) : or taking actual event but making them seem like an exciting story
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Manuel Melo Manuel Melo (May 19 2016 10:39PM) : Kind of like the onion? making something seem interesting sounds like a farce.
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Allen Strk Allen Strk (Feb 04 2016 10:40AM) : Dogwatch can be described as. more

A dogwatch provides instant information about their local organizations and overall society. This involves news that is highly demanded with factual statements from public officials to confirm a story.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:15PM) : I don't think the stories are as deliberately done as you suggest.
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Student Rand Shannak Student Rand Shannak (Feb 04 2016 4:32PM) : Rand Shannak - dogwatch more

In the context of the story the “diurnal dogwatches” seem to be brief daily newspapers or releases and perhaps the different colors/editions represent different types of news (e.g finance, world, sports,etc).

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:22AM) : the editions have certain colors, not the types of stories
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Student Rand Shannak Student Rand Shannak (Feb 04 2016 4:37PM) : Rand Shannak more

A style that uses ejaculations intends to create short writings that tell a story thus engaging the readers interest without dragging on the story,

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:22AM) : but ejaculation means something other than short
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Student Rand Shannak Student Rand Shannak (Feb 28 2016 8:45PM) : Rand Shannak more

rather than short to ejaculate in writing means the tone of whats being said is quick and sudden, and almost like it was written without second thought.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 29 2016 9:11AM) : Yes
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Erica Likht Erica Likht (May 18 2016 5:05PM) : What is a dogwatch? [Edited] more

With the above comment in mind then, I think a dogwatch is some sort of a gossip column. I’m imagining that it is similar to the modern day lifestyle outlets like Buzzfeed or Perez Hilton who report pop culture breaking news the minute its heard and then fact-check later.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (May 19 2016 7:17AM) : Dogging the subject like a dog trailing after someone.
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Annalee Manaloto Annalee Manaloto (Feb 04 2016 11:10PM) : Dogwatch more

I would imagine a dogwatch is like a tabloid filled with sensational journalism, as evidenced by the combination of different colours, pictures, and crowded type.

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Manuel Melo Manuel Melo (May 19 2016 10:40PM) : A sensational? like a magazine about pop culture?
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Jason Zawadzki Jason Zawadzki (Feb 05 2016 9:19AM) : Dogwatch [Edited] more

A dogwatch seems to refer to a type of newspaper, delivering current events through eye-opening headlines and a lot of pictures.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 06 2016 9:24AM) : How do you suppose it got its name?
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Erica Likht Erica Likht (May 18 2016 5:10PM) : In response to "How do you suppose it got its name?" [Edited] more

So, a person who is considered a “dogwatcher” is someone who is up and about during all hours of the night, prowling for the latest scoop. Perhaps, this edition is called the “dogwatcher” because its all the news being gathered for when the reader is usually asleep. Maybe all the materials described here (paper, font and pictures) is everything the journalist is going to use for the next morning’s paper.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (May 19 2016 7:17AM) : Right
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Student Thonny Vargas Student Thonny Vargas (Feb 05 2016 12:29PM) : A dogwatch also have to be with staying alert with the news that might have another issues attached that will be found in the future.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 06 2016 9:25AM) : Who is staying alert?
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Student Thonny Vargas Student Thonny Vargas (Feb 10 2016 6:29PM) : The ones who get the written press done.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 11 2016 9:35AM) : ok
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Elvira Amparo De La Cruz Elvira Amparo De La Cruz (Feb 07 2016 2:49PM) : In this text it seems as if he were describing a daily paper of some sort, maybe gossip?. the dog watch sounds like an invesitgative piece
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 08 2016 7:46AM) : Why dogs? Do they investigate. And what do dogs investigate?
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Safiya Sergeant Safiya Sergeant (May 12 2016 8:36PM) : Safiya Sergeant more

A dogwatch is the news that wasn’t reported on the regular channels, instead it was caught while the dog was watching.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (May 13 2016 8:54AM) : never heard that one before
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Michael Andersen Michael Andersen (May 16 2016 12:28AM) : A newspaper with really attention grabbing, sometimes misleading, headlines. It could be considered similar to modern-day “clickbait.”
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Omer Seman Omer Seman (May 20 2016 11:49PM) : Dogwatch more

A dogwatch is an daily newspaper/magazine publication with flashy images and designs to catch someone’s eye. Not as highly regarded as a standard newspaper.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Dec 31 2015 4:39PM) : How would you describe a style that uses ejaculations?
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Elvis Rosario Mendez Elvis Rosario Mendez (Feb 01 2016 5:27PM) : Elvis Rosario more
ideas that are been delivered quick, fast and simple to attract an audience
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 02 2016 6:36AM) : Yes
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Wenting Wu Wenting Wu (Feb 02 2016 10:53PM) : The style that could easily capture one's attention.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 03 2016 7:22AM) : Can you say more about what this style is like?
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Mr. Itamar Hematian Mr. Itamar Hematian (Feb 03 2016 12:36PM) : Style more

Basically the style is fast. Short sentences. Things that catch the eye.

Everything is based off quick attention-grabbers thatll grab the people, but as a downside it might not be the most useful information (you find this style on the internet alot in ads.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:05PM) : right
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Ayannah Woods Ayannah Woods (Feb 04 2016 2:04PM) : Ayannah Woods: I think with ejaculations it's quick, shirt comments like bulletin points of a larger story that would be further explained within the story.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:06PM) : short?
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Ayannah Woods Ayannah Woods (Feb 08 2016 9:47PM) : yes short.
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Molly Deng Molly Deng (Feb 03 2016 12:36PM) : Molly Deng more

I would say that a style that uses ejaculations would be very explicit and attention grabbing. I would assume the style entails really provocative headlines and short blurbs that would entice an audience to read on.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:06PM) : yes, generating excitement.
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George Ocampo George Ocampo (Feb 03 2016 10:06PM) : Ejaculation Style more

I would say that a style that uses ejaculations is probably focused on sensational phrases and words to grab the attention of a passing glance.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:06PM) : yes, like exclamation marks.
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Allen Strk Allen Strk (Feb 04 2016 10:50AM) : Style of use more

Ejaculations is straight to the point. They gravitate to an audience that wants immediate answers. It attracts their attention, which can boost viewership to their respective website. They don’t provide enough valuable information to educate readers on a certain issue or story.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:07PM) : not just straight to the point but statements that explode with excitement.
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student Venetia Persaud student Venetia Persaud (Feb 04 2016 4:35PM) : I would also say that they are able to captivate the attention of the audience quickly.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:17AM) : correct
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Lynette Grodskiy Lynette Grodskiy (Feb 04 2016 10:00PM) : A style that uses ejaculations is meant to grab attention so that the individual becomes curious and decides to learn/read more.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:26AM) : there might not be much more
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Mr. Saveen Wijebandara Mr. Saveen Wijebandara (Feb 04 2016 10:09PM) : Captivating more

A style that describes multiple actions with not too many wordings. I believe comic books use this type of style. The style also allows the reader to imagine beyond just the meaning, but play the action in the mind.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:26AM) : yes, like comics
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Annalee Manaloto Annalee Manaloto (Feb 04 2016 11:13PM) : Ejaculations more

Styles that use ejaculations would consist of attention-grabbing action-packed words like “STOP” or “BUY NOW,” perhaps with a heavy handed use of capital letters and exclamation points.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:27AM) : right
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Treasure Kim Treasure Kim (Feb 05 2016 12:07AM) : Similar to when people blurt things out loud without a second thought, especially when they're surprised or angry or excited, etc. A style that uses ejaculations would be like writing without a filter.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:27AM) : Yes, blirt is a good word.
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Jason Zawadzki Jason Zawadzki (Feb 05 2016 9:28AM) : Ejaculation style [Edited] more

A style that uses ejaculations are timely, attention seeking wordplay that stimulates the reader.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 06 2016 9:26AM) : But what does the word ejaculation mean in this context?
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Jason Zawadzki Jason Zawadzki (Feb 07 2016 12:15PM) : In this context it means a lot of punctuation marks such as exclamation points, or even phrases with all capital letters to show high levels of excitement.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 08 2016 7:44AM) : Right
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Student Thonny Vargas Student Thonny Vargas (Feb 05 2016 12:36PM) : Catchy terms to make the reader get interested in what he or she is reading
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 06 2016 9:29AM) : Focus on what ejaculation means in this context
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Student Thonny Vargas Student Thonny Vargas (Feb 10 2016 6:48PM) : A style that uses ejaculation means and easy and attractive content that is showed to get the readers attention.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 11 2016 9:36AM) : easy and attractive does not really get at the meaning of ejaculation
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Elvira Amparo De La Cruz Elvira Amparo De La Cruz (Feb 07 2016 2:55PM) : I believe that a style that uses ejaculations, maybe something said suddenly and abruptly. Maybe not to much thought was put into it and looking for a reaction. Made to catch the attention of reader. like large font , boldness and risky wording
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 08 2016 7:46AM) : Yes, bold, provocative.
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Safiya Sergeant Safiya Sergeant (May 12 2016 8:38PM) : Safiya Sergeant [Edited] more

A style that utilizes ejaculations, is in your face and quick read style. Your attention is grabbed, and the information that the writer wants you to know is given easily. It could be used in short read articles, or as a tactic within longer pieces, to depict the moment it is covering.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (May 13 2016 8:54AM) : yes
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Michael Andersen Michael Andersen (May 16 2016 12:28AM) : Writing that uses short, attention-grabbing statements that try to entice people to read.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Dec 31 2015 4:41PM) : The paper is in the driver's seat. Why does Faulkner put it there? To be in the driver's seat means what in this instance? [Edited]
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Wenting Wu Wenting Wu (Feb 02 2016 11:46PM) : Because the driver's seat is the first place that one will notice when he or she enters the bus, the paper could easily caught Jiggs' attention. [Edited]
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 03 2016 7:23AM) : Catch
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Molly Deng Molly Deng (Feb 03 2016 12:47PM) : Molly Deng more

Just for clarification, if the paper is in the driver’s seat but the driver I presume is sitting there, is the paper simply on the driver’s lap?

But to answer your question, to be in the driver’s seat means to be in control of something so I assume that the headlines on this paper is what is guiding society forward at the time, it’s representative of the era perhaps. However, I also noticed that the newspaper is folded which means it’s unread.

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Wenting Wu Wenting Wu (Feb 03 2016 8:39PM) : I think the paper is in the driver's seat and the driver is standing outside by the door.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:11PM) : yes, outside the door.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:11PM) : not in the driver's lap. The passage says it is on the seat. Folded presumably means you can't see the whole paper.
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Annalee Manaloto Annalee Manaloto (Feb 04 2016 11:17PM) : driver's seat more

For the paper to be in the driver’s seat means that the driver’s seat is currently vacant, which means the car is probably not in motion, and perhaps might even be empty. For a tabloid to be sitting in the driver’s seat must mean that someone must have put it there, maybe as a reminder in order to read it in the future.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:28AM) : Or to indicate a life that is driven by dogwatches
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Lynette Grodskiy Lynette Grodskiy (Feb 04 2016 11:39PM) : Driver's seat more

The driver is a very vital part to the vehicle, without him the car won’t move. Similarly, the dogwatch might be something important, which like the driver will put the story in motion. The paper is about aviation and features Colonel Feinman, who made the airport which will be a big setting in the story. The driver’s seat might also symbolize control, and power.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:29AM) : good suggestions
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Treasure Kim Treasure Kim (Feb 04 2016 11:47PM) : To be in the driver's seat means that all control arises from whomever (or whatever, in this case) is seated there. The importance of the paper is signified by that setting.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:29AM) : good point
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Jason Zawadzki Jason Zawadzki (Feb 05 2016 9:36AM) : Driver's Seat [Edited] more

Faulkner places the paper in the driver’s seat to signify that news should be readily accessible. But I also think that the positioning of the paper shows that the news starting to take precedence in that time period.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 06 2016 9:27AM) : Take precedence? More than in earlier periods.
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Student Thonny Vargas Student Thonny Vargas (Feb 05 2016 12:44PM) : The paper is a tool that we use to communicate by writting and if it is in the driver's seat it could means that it's content have interesting information to create influent. [Edited]
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 06 2016 9:27AM) : Proofread your comments
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Elvira Amparo De La Cruz Elvira Amparo De La Cruz (Feb 07 2016 3:03PM) : I believe that Faulkner expressed that the paper was in the drivers seat to show meaning of control, possibly the control that the media has taken over his life. more

I believe that Faulkner expressed that the paper was in the drivers seat to show meaning of control, possibly the control that the media has taken over his life. Either someone chose to leave it there, or symbolically the paper needed to be in Faulkner’s view.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 08 2016 7:48AM) : The paper, the media, drive the news, rather than the news driving the media.
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Michael Andersen Michael Andersen (May 16 2016 12:29AM) : Control more

I think it’s as a sense of control. The driver is in control of where he’s headed in the future, and the paper has similar control of where the future is headed, that is to say what is or is not covered by the media can directly or indirectly affect what’s going on in the world.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Dec 31 2015 4:37PM) : What is being said about journalism in phrases like "thick heavy typesplattered"
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Elvis Rosario Mendez Elvis Rosario Mendez (Feb 01 2016 5:30PM) : Elvis Rosario more

Its defining an style of writing that is distributed loosely meaning that there is not pattern or structure being followed.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 02 2016 6:37AM) : So what kind of journalism is this?
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Molly Deng Molly Deng (Feb 03 2016 12:53PM) : Molly Deng more

It sounds like yellow journalism because the “thick heavy typesplatter” reminds me of those exaggerated, eye-catching headlines used to grab people’s attentions.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:12PM) : yes, a kind of yellow journalism
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George Ocampo George Ocampo (Feb 03 2016 10:14PM) : Thick Heavy Typesplattered more

The “thick heavy typesplattered” front page suggests that the piece is of a journalism whose main intention is to grab the reader’s interest with excitement. Heavy type indicates that the front page is really set on attracting a reader to the story.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:16PM) : what about "splattered"?
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Treasure Kim Treasure Kim (Feb 04 2016 11:50PM) : The arrangement of words appears to be splattered and messy
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:30AM) : and what impression is created by the splatter of type?
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Student Thonny Vargas Student Thonny Vargas (Feb 10 2016 7:19PM) : An informal style that does not follow any order in specific.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 11 2016 9:37AM) : in specific is an odd way to end a sentence. Confusing.
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Allen Strk Allen Strk (Feb 04 2016 11:16AM) : Phrasing more

Thick heavy typesplattered can be compared to tabloid journalism. It will emphasize on jaw-dropping stories or incidents, gossip columns, and other trendy headlines. The sole purpose is to generate attention through four to six word catchy quotas. They also use some type of unique caption.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:35AM) : Good description
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student Venetia Persaud student Venetia Persaud (Feb 04 2016 5:31PM) : In the text, "thick heavy typesplattered" suggest that the front page of the paper contains sensational news. Nothing that is really worth reading.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:31AM) : And all jumbled together so that what is really important is lost
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student Venetia Persaud student Venetia Persaud (Feb 07 2016 10:53PM) : Yes, exactly.
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Mr. Saveen Wijebandara Mr. Saveen Wijebandara (Feb 04 2016 10:15PM) : Giving Clues more

Such a phrase brought to me the thought of blood, especially the words thick and heavy. Blood is not the most pleasant thought to have, so it could be a way of alerting the reader, enticing some senses to read more carefully.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:33AM) : Enticing the senses, yes, but I am not sure about reading more carefuly.
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Annalee Manaloto Annalee Manaloto (Feb 04 2016 11:20PM) : thick heavy typesplattered more

The use of the phrase “thick heavy typesplattered” sounds redundant on its own, which could be the writer emphasizing how unnaturally crowded the text was on the paper, probably with no central focus and no logical place for the eye to follow. It makes the journalism sound unprofessional, or at least lower-tier.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:34AM) : Good. no central focus is exactly right.
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Jason Zawadzki Jason Zawadzki (Feb 05 2016 9:47AM) : Thick Heavy Typesplatted more

Phrases such as “thick heavy typesplattered” illustrate that the primary focus is to captivate the reader through large-font headlines, juicy stories and rumors.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 06 2016 9:28AM) : Why splattered rather than some other adjective?
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Elvira Amparo De La Cruz Elvira Amparo De La Cruz (Feb 07 2016 3:06PM) : What is being said about journalism is the importance of being appealing to the eye. whether your are going to read the article or not you will see it, it will be in your view. more

It as simple as looking at the tabloids in your local supermarket these headings and titles scream at you, and some may read others won’t , but the look has grabbed your attention.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 08 2016 7:49AM) : Yes, the news has to be eye-catching
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Anthony Califano Anthony Califano (Feb 08 2016 6:14PM) : I agree with my other students about the symbolism of the font and hints of yellow journalism. I think it definitely is a perfect example of the mainstream journalism today. [Edited] more

It is fascinating how media outlets are able to craft and manipulate a story that doesn’t have much importance in regards to worldwide issues and make it sell.

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Manuel Melo Manuel Melo (May 19 2016 11:30PM) : Lets not forget that newspapers are also a business, and some of them just try to sell instead of spread meaningful news.
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Safiya Sergeant Safiya Sergeant (May 12 2016 8:42PM) : Safiya Sergeant more

I think what is being said about journalism with the phrase “thick heavy typesplattered” is that is it exciting in your face reporting. Not only is the story exciting, but theres a lot of information behind it and the information itself is heavy.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (May 13 2016 8:55AM) : heavy or congested
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Safiya Sergeant Safiya Sergeant (May 13 2016 2:58PM) : Visualy congested as well as information congested.
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Michael Andersen Michael Andersen (May 16 2016 12:29AM) : I think it’s saying that it all kind of meshes together. “Typesplattered” to me sounds like tons of words are being thrown in to sound sensational but without a real focus or purpose other than to be sensational.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Dec 31 2015 4:38PM) : What is being said about the world the reporter lives in?
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Elvis Rosario Mendez Elvis Rosario Mendez (Feb 01 2016 5:33PM) : Reporter's world more

A very exciting world is presented by the author, where you can read of a reporter that seems very intrigued already by the stunt pilots and their lives.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 02 2016 6:38AM) : Do the dogwatches on the reporters car seat deal with he pilots' lives? Is that the impression you have?
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Molly Deng Molly Deng (Feb 03 2016 1:02PM) : Molly Deng more

I have a slightly different impression. With the ejaculation style style of writing and the thick heavy typesplatter, the reporter’s world seems very short-lived and dramatic but at the same time very lively.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:13PM) : yes, that can be true too.
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Elvis Rosario Mendez Elvis Rosario Mendez (Feb 03 2016 7:58PM) : Elvis Rosario more

No. I dont think so. I think it deals with just daily news about the town and, more specifically,deatils the aviation show such as what pilots are on the roster that day, and the time each one of them is on.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 04 2016 2:14PM) : daily news of the sensational variety.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:35AM) : exciting and perhaps confusing
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Allen Strk Allen Strk (Feb 04 2016 11:05AM) : Reporter's setting more

The author formulates an aura that can compare to a very competitive world. This competitiveness makes for high energy, where the reporter wants to get stories from pilots and know about their day-to-day life.

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Treasure Kim Treasure Kim (Feb 05 2016 12:13AM) : The high energy and competition can also pressure the reporter to stick with thick heavy typesplattered dogwatches and ejaculations.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:36AM) : yes,that is his job
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Annalee Manaloto Annalee Manaloto (Feb 04 2016 11:24PM) : World the reporter lives in more

It seems the reporter lives in a world with a variety of journalism, since he had to specify the paper was “one of the colored ones,” meaning there are other types of journalism existing, at least one without so much colour, pictures, or ejaculations.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:37AM) : Yes, different tiers of journalism, so to speak
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Omer Seman Omer Seman (Feb 05 2016 12:05AM) : Exaggerated and hectic more

The reporter’s world is portrayed as kinetic and vibrant, but the tone suggests a grandiose version of reality.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 05 2016 7:38AM) : grandiose and tawdry
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Elvira Amparo De La Cruz Elvira Amparo De La Cruz (Feb 07 2016 3:13PM) : its a world in which the reporter can never escape, its a world where the reporter will know more then he needs to know, even if he chooses not to.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 08 2016 7:50AM) : The reporter writes, in other words, less than he knows.
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Anthony Califano Anthony Califano (Feb 08 2016 5:41PM) : The world the writer lives in has many sides just like the folded paper. It includes a world of color where life seems to be more positive and exciting than the other side. The other side is full of darkness and mystery, where reality is more revealed.
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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (Feb 09 2016 8:08AM) : That is a lot to read into that short passage.
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Safiya Sergeant Safiya Sergeant (May 12 2016 8:45PM) : Safiya Sergeant more

The world the reporter is face paced, with articles that are exciting enticing, everything is covered, and its competitive. He not only has to get the big picture story, but what happens on the dogs…watch.

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Carl Rollyson Carl Rollyson (May 13 2016 8:56AM) : fast?
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Michael Andersen Michael Andersen (May 16 2016 12:30AM) : Sensationalism more

There’s this first impression where everything is lively and exciting, but the reality of it is a much less sensationalized version of what’s going on. The reporter’s aware of his place in that sensationalism though, knowing that there are other forms of journalism that are less dramatic than his own.

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Manuel Melo Manuel Melo (May 19 2016 10:53PM) : I think the less exciting part of it is the division between the top tier newspapers and the "colored" newspapers.
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