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War - Bob Marley

What life has taught me
I would like to share with
Those who want to learn

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Mr. Garcia Miguel Garcia Mr. Garcia Miguel Garcia (Jan 15 2016 11:30AM) : where?

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Laura Camacho Laura Camacho (Jan 15 2016 11:50AM) : - more

This song has the power to send out a powerful message about war and the equality of ones race. He talks about wanting equality to all races and while the gap of the superior and inferior between races is a reality today war is not over and never will until that is abandoned.

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Eliot Peinado Eliot Peinado (Jan 15 2016 11:54AM) : He is addressing these words to the people who are willing to learn and accept new ideas

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Miss Anifa Miss Anifa (Jan 15 2016 11:38AM) : This suggest that only those who can see and understand their reality urge to want to learn.

Until the philosophy which hold one race
Superior and another inferior
Is finally and permanently discredited and abandoned
Everywhere is war, me say war

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Jose Gudino Jose Gudino (Jan 15 2016 11:44AM) : He is saying that until the idea that there is one superior race, war will come to take the lives of the supposed inferior until this philosophy is abolished.

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saul escalante saul escalante (Jan 15 2016 11:44AM) : He is saying that until the thought of one race being superior to others is gone there will always be war.

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Gavin Stevens Gavin Stevens (Jan 15 2016 11:47AM) : That until the philosophy of superior race has ended, war will continue.

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That until there are no longer first class
And second class citizens of any nation
Until the color of a man's skin
Is of no more significance than the color of his eyes
Me say war

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Maria Rodriguez Maria Rodriguez (Jan 15 2016 11:38AM) : His trying to say that as long as the color of skin is still a problem there will be war. When color doesn't matter no more that's when we will be able to look at each other in the eye without judgment. more

Jan 15

Jennifer Arreola Jennifer Arreola (Jan 15 2016 11:53AM) : Until society acknowledges that people are no less than everyone else because of the color of their skin, there will still be war. In the time that Bob Marley was alive, things like this happened and are still happening today. Which is super sad!

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Esperanza Brubaker Esperanza Brubaker (Jan 15 2016 11:43AM) : That even in the smallest of our differences, like the color of our eyes,there should be no discrimination or subjugation to that aspect of one's appearance as for every other aspect.

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That until the basic human rights are equally
Guaranteed to all, without regard to race
Dis a war

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Julia Torres Julia Torres (Jan 15 2016 11:34AM) : He moves from saying that there IS war, to proclaiming that this is war. It's almost like he says it is a call to war and for people to fight back against the circumstances that made it a war.

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Yaridt Dominguez Yaridt Dominguez (Jan 15 2016 11:36AM) : There will always be a war because of the unequal rights in the U.S. from police brutality and other situations, if there is no peace all hell will break loose for those who are tired of the bs, that is, if the basic human rights are gauranteed. [Edited]

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Kassandra Vargas Kassandra Vargas (Jan 15 2016 11:39AM) : He is saying that there will be no war when race doesn't matter and every single person is treated equally.

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That until that day
The dream of lasting peace, world citizenship
Rule of international morality
Will remain in but a fleeting illusion
To be persued, but never attained
Now everywhere is war, war

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Mr. Garcia Miguel Garcia Mr. Garcia Miguel Garcia (Jan 15 2016 11:44AM) : In this paragraph Bob is suggesting that until we all as human beings learn to love and respect each other, the dream of lasting peace and world citizenship will remain of just another dream.

Jan 15

Fernando Barrios Fernando Barrios (Jan 15 2016 11:48AM) : The goal we wish to achieve which is peace is nothing but a "dream". Bob Marley tries to show that no matter what we do this peace we wish to achieve is not possible, it "will remain in but a fleeting allusion."

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Brenda Castaneda Brenda Castaneda (Jan 15 2016 11:56AM) : He speaks about the illusion of never really getting there, just trying. If we don't stop this continues war, we are only following emptiness.

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And until the ignoble and unhappy regimes
That hold our brothers in Angola, in Mozambique
South Africa sub-human bondage
Have been toppled, utterly destroyed
Well, everywhere is war, me say war

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War in the east, war in the west
War up north, war down south
War, war, rumors of war

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Ms. Lysi Bel Ms. Lysi Bel (Jan 15 2016 11:36AM) : He elaborates on how war is everywhere and he speaks of rumors of war. If war actually exists everywhere, is it not a rumor? [Edited]

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604207 Leslie Arzate 604207 Leslie Arzate (Jan 15 2016 11:43AM) : Great Thinking, I was wondering the same thing. Is war really a rumor if we expect it? Do we make it a rumor by blinding ourselves from it? Does that make sense?

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James Macario James Macario (Jan 15 2016 11:42AM) : War more

Marley is stating that there is war everywhere no matter where you are. every part of the world there is always war of some sort.

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And until that day, the African continent
Will not know peace, we Africans will fight
We find it necessary and we know we shall win
As we are confident in the victory

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604207 Leslie Arzate 604207 Leslie Arzate (Jan 15 2016 11:37AM) : In order to get peace they have to fight for it, ironic I know but they believe that good is with them and they will come out with a victory. [Edited]

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Of good over evil, good over evil, good over evil
Good over evil, good over evil, good over evil

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604207 Leslie Arzate 604207 Leslie Arzate (Jan 15 2016 11:35AM) : The use of repetition in this paragraph states that there is a fight between good and evil, Marley chooses good over evil

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Alondra Arreola-Alderete Alondra Arreola-Alderete (Jan 15 2016 11:55AM) : On paragraph 9, Bob Marley uses repetition "good over evil, good over evil" it expresses his passion towards wanting good for the world.

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Dr. Bulldog GKande Dr. Bulldog GKande (Jan 15 2016 11:54AM) : Bob more

The last two stanzas in the last line, have a different message than other stanzas. This is his conclusion or answer to war. Be confident in victory, and believe that you are good, and destroying evil.

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DMU Timestamp: January 12, 2016 03:26

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