Extended Essay Psychology example
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Added June 05, 2016 at 4:28pm
by Candice Kwok
Title: couldn't upload the whole doc
I disagree with that statement. Although it had evidence for it, I feel like that there is influence when it comes to being homosexual.
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prenatal: before birth
spatial: relating to space
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I’m still kind of confused of how I’m supposed to write the body paragraphs. They all seem like they’re summarizing the information that they found in the source.
There are a few analysis on the paper
That is true. I’ve been bullied before, and it made me feel like some of the emotions listed in the paragraph
this is not necessarily true for me and most Christians. We are not homophobic; it’s just that we believe what they are doing isn’t right. It doesn’t mean we don’t love them; it’s because we know it’s a sin
This can also apply to other indentites as well
Added June 05, 2016 at 5:06pm
by Candice Kwok
Title: same reason as the other doc that I added
I think that it’s very general until the next page
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Not sure if I make any sense, but here are my thoughts
I got confused of what the difference is between introduction and abstract. I think this clears it a little bit
As a Christian, we are to love each other. I know that being homosexual is wrong, but it doesn’t give us the right to hurt them. Instead, we should try to help them see that this is a sin.
Why is that? Is it because that it isn’t a part of your essay (if you know what I mean)?
very interesting; makes you want to read it
The first paragraph shows statistics and studies of discrimination. These facts lead into the question the author is trying to answer
The second paragraph shows the author’s thoughts on how to solve this problem. The author refers back to the statistics in the first paragraph to show her point. S(he) also describes the impact of harassment before hopping into her body paragraph
It isn’t acceptable for us to make the font on the title bigger. Is it ok to use on the EE?
is it by the author and the date of when it was written? Or the website and date? I’m slightly confused
I don’t agree with the statement that being homosexual is biological. If that’s the case, is it possible to find out if your child is going to be straight or not?
Sorry for being so critical of this essay. I’m expressing my thoughts in the essay. After all, we are supposed to challenge other peoples’ opinions in IB, right
It’s doubled spaced, everything centered in the middle. The title of each little section has a slightly bigger font and it’s underlined. There seems to be two spaces in-between the start of each new sentence
I uploaded the doc, and it got messed up. Sorry!
Is there a way where you can find out what your “gender” is what you are born?
I wonder if that is really true. If it is, I want to look deeper into the theory of his research
How come the quote wasn’t cited in the 1st paragraph?
Author uses the pychologists’ and gay peoples’ perspectives in the essay
Does that count as a part of the 4000 words in the essay? I don’t remember what the handbook said about it
It summarizes all the body paragraphs, and takes out the important points in each paragraph to prove her point. Also, it shows how to fix it and how this research can help change the thoughts of others
why end with an example?
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