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Pied Pier of Tucson: Twisted 1960s Killings by Charles Howard Schmid, Jr.


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Pied Piper of Tucson: Twisted 1960s killings by Charles Howard Schmid, Jr.

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SPECIAL TO THE NEWS
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Saturday, December 19, 2009, 7:06 PM
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Charles Howard Schmid, Jr., was a little pipsqueak of a guy, standing just about 5'3" tall.

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Jessica Glynn Jessica Glynn (Sep 07 2016 8:21AM) : Discuss the author's choice of words in describing Schmid. What word stands out? What tone or attitude does this suggest?
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Jacob Gallegos Jacob Gallegos (Sep 07 2016 11:19PM) : Pipsqueak stood out to me. Its a word that you would use for a little kid.
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Kaiman Tibbs Kaiman Tibbs (Sep 08 2016 5:36PM) : The author uses these words because...... more

The author uses these words to belittle schmid.

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LeeAnn Hamilton LeeAnn Hamilton (Sep 08 2016 7:14PM) : pipsqueak stood out to me it is a word to tease on little kids.
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micaiah scott micaiah scott (Sep 09 2016 9:21PM) : The author described him as a pipsqueak of a guy. This implies that he was very small and didn't look threatening although his crimes proved otherwise.
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Nicole Sbrissa Nicole Sbrissa (Sep 10 2016 7:14AM) : The word that stands out is pipsqueak, it suggest that he was really small like a kid, so it does seem that it was not him who did everything.
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Michal Renteria Michal Renteria (Sep 11 2016 11:40AM) : "pipsqueak of a guy..." more

That stood out to me because its like the guy is short.

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Mason Bonny Mason Bonny (Sep 11 2016 2:09PM) : Some words that stuck out to me were "When all that failed to pump his ego" because It shows how he needs to feel important or he kills girls
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CJ Kinney CJ Kinney (Sep 14 2016 3:02PM) : little pipsqueak of a guy, standing just about 5'3" tall. more

It sounds like the guy from “where are you going.”

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Anthony Martinez Anthony Martinez (Oct 14 2016 2:43PM) : The words that stand out to me are "pipsqueak" and "freaky". I think the author chose to use these words because she doesn't seem very fond of Schmid. She thinks very low of him.
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To compensate, he bragged non-stop and wore freaky makeup and oversized cowboy boots, which he stuffed with socks, rags, and crushed tin cans to add inches.

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Jessica Glynn Jessica Glynn (Sep 07 2016 8:23AM) : Again, discuss a detail or word Bovsun has chosen to describe Schmid. How is she portraying him?
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Jacob Gallegos Jacob Gallegos (Sep 07 2016 11:35PM) : The author describes Schmid as compensating for his shortness by being freaky. You can tell the author dislikes Schimd.
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Kaiman Tibbs Kaiman Tibbs (Sep 08 2016 5:39PM) : Paragraph 7 The author is portraying.... more

The author is portraying Schmid as a guy who is trying to look more scary than he actually is.

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LeeAnn Hamilton LeeAnn Hamilton (Sep 08 2016 7:19PM) : The author says he is freaky so that shows that the author dislikes Charles Howard Schmid, jr.
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Mariah Gibson Mariah Gibson (Sep 09 2016 7:04PM) : she talks about his freaky makeup and how he stuffs his shoes to make himself look taller, she is portraying him as a kind of person that is trying to be what they are not.
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Nicole Sbrissa Nicole Sbrissa (Sep 10 2016 7:19AM) : The word that she chose was "freaky", she is portraying him by this word, because she wants to say that he is a person, who not looks like this, but is trying to.
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Mason Bonny Mason Bonny (Sep 11 2016 2:12PM) : She portrays him as kind of a freak. "Concealing Schmid's naturally handsome face was a bizarre mask of his own design" is a great example of this.
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Michal Renteria Michal Renteria (Sep 11 2016 4:42PM) : Height more

Again this writer is stuck on his height, he talks about how he was a freak and how he would stuff his shoes with the socks and tin cans.

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CJ Kinney CJ Kinney (Sep 14 2016 3:03PM) : "To compensate, he bragged non-stop and wore freaky makeup and oversized cowboy boots, which he stuffed with socks, rags, and crushed tin cans to add inches." [Edited]
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Anthony Martinez Anthony Martinez (Oct 14 2016 2:46PM) : The author describes Schmid as being a short, weird guy.
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Mariam Osman Mariam Osman (Sep 21 2016 1:21PM) : Was Arnold Friend based on Charles Howard Schmid, Jr?
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When all that failed to pump up his ego, he killed girls.

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Abbey McWhirter Abbey McWhirter (Sep 06 2016 12:25PM) : "When all that failed to pump up his ego, he killed girls." more

The author says this nonchalantly. She uses syntax and diction to make the sentence very powerful. The thing that is interesting about this sentence is not as much the words used but the words not used. She doesn’t build up the tension to make the reader anxious to know about Schmidt, she blatantly says “…he killed girls.”, making the reader look back and read it again. The short sentence cut into two fragments adds to the casual tone. She doesn’t use too many words to make the tone formal and she doesn’t make the sentence short and choppy for effect. She uses it to create a calm reader who then suddenly becomes confused and frightened.

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Ash Uzeta Ash Uzeta (Sep 14 2016 6:54PM) : The author uses a short sentence for shock factor. more

“When all that failed to pump up his ego, he killed girls.” This sentence is short and to the point- it’s blunt and harsh to shock the reader.

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Nick Macy Nick Macy (Oct 01 2016 11:13PM) : The short sentence absolutely provides emphasis as to his killing activities. This may be the shortest paragraph in the article.
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Rachel Berrios Rachel Berrios (Sep 06 2016 11:15PM) : This sentence is really deep. I say tis because he got a feeling that he wanted to kill girls, so he did exactly that. more

When I read this sentence (WHEN ALL FAILED TO PUMP UP HIS EGO. HE KILLED GIRLS.) I think that this guy is really something else, I say that because I believe its not really about his ego but, too see if the girl would actually sneak out of her house to go to a party. The tone of this story is really deep and can affect people emotionally. Personally I think that he deserved what he got.

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Mariam Osman Mariam Osman (Sep 21 2016 1:34PM) : The line: "When all that failed to pump up his ego, he killed girls." Indicates to me he wasn't a fan of Smitty. What's interesting to me is that in the 60s is when the US was undergoing a sexual revolution and the author place on a emphasis girls. [Edited]
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In the early 1960s, Schmid, the adopted son of a nursing home owner, was a fixture on a sleazy strip in Tucson, Arizona, known as the Speedway. He was a sight to see.

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Jessica Glynn Jessica Glynn (Sep 07 2016 8:24AM) : Discuss syntax. What is the impact of this one short sentence?
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Kaiman Tibbs Kaiman Tibbs (Sep 08 2016 5:41PM) : The impact of this sentence is.... more

The impact of this sentence is adding more character.

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micaiah scott micaiah scott (Sep 09 2016 9:23PM) : The short sentence gets straight to the point and clearly describes his appearance.
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Nicole Sbrissa Nicole Sbrissa (Sep 10 2016 7:23AM) : the impact of this one short sentence was because she directly described him., and she added more tension.
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LeeAnn Hamilton LeeAnn Hamilton (Sep 10 2016 11:45PM) : The short sentence says that he is a sight to see by his appearance.
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Michal Renteria Michal Renteria (Sep 11 2016 4:50PM) : It talks about how he looks.
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CJ Kinney CJ Kinney (Sep 14 2016 3:04PM) : It adds more character.
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Anthony Martinez Anthony Martinez (Oct 14 2016 2:47PM) : The impact would be that this sentence gets the message straight to you without having to go into deep detail.

Concealing Schmid's naturally handsome face was a bizarre mask of his own design - dark tan pancake makeup, white lipstick, and hair dyed jet-black. He topped it off with a beauty mark on his cheek made of putty and axle grease.

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Jessica Glynn Jessica Glynn (Sep 07 2016 8:25AM) : Here's another good paragraph for discussing diction. Which of the author's words or details for describing Schmid stand out? What do they show you about her attitude toward Schmid or how she wants her reader to see him?
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Mariah Gibson Mariah Gibson (Sep 09 2016 7:01PM) : She talks about his bizarre mask, she wants her readers to see him as a wired and creepy man.
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micaiah scott micaiah scott (Sep 09 2016 9:28PM) : The author uses the word Bizarre to describe his appearance after he adds frightening makeup. This shows us that she wants us to view his as a scary looking man just as she does.
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Mason Bonny Mason Bonny (Sep 11 2016 2:16PM) : She sort of makes a joke out of his appearance. She makes fun of him and wants her audience to see him as weak minded and bizarre.
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Madeline Todd Madeline Todd (Sep 11 2016 11:56PM) : "Concealing Schmid's naturally handsome face was a bizarre mask of his own design" more

It is interesting that the author thought he was “naturally handsome” but describes his looks and wearing make-up like you would describe a woman’s make-up and pointed out he had a “beauty mark”. Perhaps she wanted the readers to view him as less than masculine.

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CJ Kinney CJ Kinney (Sep 14 2016 3:06PM) : It saying that his big but not handsome but creepy.
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Seamus Bacon Seamus Bacon (Sep 06 2016 12:17PM) : Why is what he looked like relevant? All that'll do is further the discrimination against punks.
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Jacob Gallegos Jacob Gallegos (Sep 07 2016 11:44PM) : I agree. A serial killer can look like anybody. That is what makes them even creepier.
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Ash Uzeta Ash Uzeta (Sep 14 2016 6:58PM) : It's relevant because it shows us a motive for the murders. more

Charles Schmid is physically described to show the readers that he is not mentally sound. The murders were committed out of a power-lust and need to dominate others. In this case, with the sexual-driven murders of young girls. He shows abnormal ego behavior and would maybe be diagnosed with histrionic personality disorder, along with sexual deviancy and antisocial tendencies.

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Nick Macy Nick Macy (Oct 01 2016 11:08PM) : The description of his unusual choice to wear dark tan pancake makeup, etc. description helps the reader understand that Charles was unusual in many ways. There was no other description to suggest any attitude from the author about punks.
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He told wild tales of sexual conquests. "I can manifest my neurotical emotions, emancipate an epicureal instinct, and elaborate on my heterosexual tendencies," was one of his frequent rants.

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Krystal Barragan Krystal Barragan (Sep 12 2016 6:28PM) : . more

I think that the author used this specific rant he used often to show the choice of words that he had. The words that he used like “neurotical” and “epicurieal” show how smart he really was because those are big words that you dont really use on a daily basis. This is an example of diction. This also reminded me of the previous article we read about him which stated that he was intelligent.

Although out of high school for years, Schmid had never bothered to get a job. He lived on handouts from his parents, who paid the rent on his cottage and covered living expenses.

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Sophie Konieczny Sophie Konieczny (Sep 05 2016 11:00PM) : I wonder if this was that start to all his trouble? Not getting a job and living in a house his parents paid for him.
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Jacob Gallegos Jacob Gallegos (Sep 07 2016 11:42PM) : I think that he must have been weird much earlier. I don't think he sits around his little house and becomes a serial killer. He must have had serious problems before that.
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Mariah Gibson Mariah Gibson (Sep 09 2016 6:59PM) : He probably was bullied in school for being short, so that could have been the start to all his trouble.
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Ash Uzeta Ash Uzeta (Sep 14 2016 7:00PM) : Murderers aren't made that easily. more

Charles Schmid almost definitely “went wrong” far before that. Most murderers survived horrific child abuse, bullying, or have severe mental illness, or all of the above. Him not getting a job is a sign of mental illness, not a cause. Extremely few mentally ill people commit crimes, by the way!

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Despite his creepiness, ladies loved Smitty, as he was known. His power over women would later prompt newsman Don Moser, who wrote a book on the case, to give him the sobriquet the "Pied Piper of Tucson." He was never without a fawning female. In the spring of 1964, that female was Mary French, a dumpy 17-year-old.

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Mariam Osman Mariam Osman (Sep 21 2016 2:06PM) : Irony: Usually you're appalled by creepiness yet despite his creepy personality he's able to get the attention from girls.
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Mariam Osman Mariam Osman (Sep 21 2016 11:25PM) : His charm was his murder weapon.
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On May 31, during a beer binge with his gal and another buddy, John Saunders, Smitty blurted out: "I want to kill a girl."

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Taylor Broussard Taylor Broussard (Sep 06 2016 4:59PM) : "On May 31, during a beer binge with his gal and another buddy, John Saunders, Smitty blurted out: 'I want to kill a girl.'" more

The author’s diction here seems to point out that Smitty was rather drunk when he decided to murder a woman. Not only did she flat out state he was on a drinking “binge” meaning he drank a lot at one time, but he just said this as a strange passing thought. Which puts a very dark head on the body of “Smitty.”

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Nick Macy Nick Macy (Oct 01 2016 11:29PM) : The author's characterization of Smitty's blurting of his desire to kill a girl while on a beer binge does not paint a good picture of the killer.
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French was eager to help him lure the victim, Alleen Rowe, 15, a high-school sophomore. That night, French persuaded the girl to sneak out of the house after her mother, a night nurse, left for work. French said they were going to a party.

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Instead, Schmid, Saunders and French drove Rowe into the desert, where the men raped her, and then cracked her skull with a rock. She had been wearing curlers in her hair when she slipped out of her room. French dug a hole and buried the curlers, while the men buried her corpse.

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Macy Gosch Macy Gosch (Sep 06 2016 12:54PM) : "Instead, Schmid, Saunders and French drove Rowe into the desert, where the men raped her, and then cracked her skull with a rock..." more

This paragraphs is one of the most terrifying paragraphs in the article as it describes some very gruesome activity, yet it doesn’t come across that way. The diction in this paragraph shows that the author is not trying to create suspense, she is simply telling the facts of what happened with no particular emotion or attitude. I think the author is doing this because the article is about a very emotional topic and writing in this style causes the reader to focus on and understand the facts rather than feel so distraught about what happened they can’t think about anything else.

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Seamus Bacon Seamus Bacon (Sep 06 2016 12:13PM) : Why bury the curlers? they could have lied and said it was a girlfriend who had left them there or even they were doing a skit or something.
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Ash Uzeta Ash Uzeta (Sep 14 2016 7:02PM) : Murderers are often very interested in small, irrelevant details. more

Besides the fact that curlers are identifiers, they were probably fascinated with the objects and buried them separately out of a fixation.

Soon after the disappearance, detectives quizzed Schmid, who said he knew Rowe and had planned to take her to a party that night, but insisted she was gone when he arrived. French backed him up.

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As time passed, Saunders joined the Navy, and Schmid got a new buddy, Richie Bruns, an oddball straight out of reform school. Schmid told his new friend all about the killing.

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Seamus Bacon Seamus Bacon (Sep 06 2016 12:14PM) : Why did he tell them? If youre going to kill someone dont trust anyone with the information.
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Taylor Broussard Taylor Broussard (Sep 06 2016 5:02PM) : He told someone because he wanted to brag about it. more

Schmid was very insecure about his life and appearance, so when he was proud of something he did. He was the type of person to tell people about it.

Schmid also found a new squeeze, Gretchen Fritz, 16, the naughty daughter of a wealthy Tucson heart doctor. Blond and slender, Fritz was a troublemaker in her private school, where she scared her teachers. Wild parties, drinking, and stealing were among her favorite pastimes.

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The relationship soon soured, but Schmid kept seeing the loud, headstrong girl. He had blabbed to Fritz about Rowe, and he was worried that if they split, she'd tell.

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Macy Gosch Macy Gosch (Sep 06 2016 1:08PM) : "... but Schmid kept seeing the loud, headstrong girl." more

This is an example of direct characterization of Gretchen Fritz. The author is directly telling us that Gretchen is loud and headstrong, and knowing these character traits about her helps us understand why Schmid was so worried she’d tell people about the Rowe murder.

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On August 16, 1965, Fritz told her parents she was taking her 13-year-old sister, Wendy, to an Elvis Presley movie. They never returned.

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It seemed as if the girls, like Rowe, had just vanished, and may have run away, until Schmid's big mouth gave police a break.

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As he had with the earlier killing, Schmid blabbed to Bruns about murdering the Fritz sisters. This time he asked Bruns for help burying the bodies, which he had left rotting in the desert.

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Bruns kept the secret, until he became infatuated with a girl, and started having nightmares that she was next on Schmid's list. By October 1965, his anxiety reached fever pitch; he spewed out the story and led police to the graves. He also told of Schmid's boasts about the Rowe murder.

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Madeline Todd Madeline Todd (Sep 11 2016 10:42PM) : "started having nightmares that she was the next on Schmid's list." more

I think this shows how messed up in the head he really is. The fact that he has a growing list of people he wants to kill further proves that something is wrong. His friend was so scared that his girlfriend might get hurt he confessed to helping with murder. If his friend hadn’t said anything, lots more woman would would have eventually been raped and killed who were on his so called “list”.

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Macy Gosch Macy Gosch (Sep 06 2016 1:01PM) : Word Choice: "spewed" more

The word “spewed” is often associated with vomiting, which shows that the author is trying to demonstrate that Bruns was feeling so scared and anxious he felt he had to tell the police—it was practically involuntary. The choice of the term “fever pitch” in the same sentence strengthens this idea; it shows that the author is purposefully choosing words that make the reader think of sickness and the desperation of a sick person to do whatever it takes to make themselves feel better.

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Taylor Broussard Taylor Broussard (Sep 06 2016 5:08PM) : I think he was "sick" with worry for his new girl. more

I agree completely with you analysis of how the author wanted him to seem sick, but I think its sick with worry for his new girl. This is because she also said “until he became infatuated with a girl, and started having nightmares that she was next on Schmid’s list.” Showing why he went to police.

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Macy Gosch Macy Gosch (Sep 07 2016 12:16PM) : I totally agree with your comment and that's pretty much what I meant—the author isn't showing that Bruns is physically sick, she's just comparing him to a sick person to make the reader understand he was acting out of desperation.
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Police rounded up French and Saunders, who confessed about the Rowe killing and agreed to testify against their former friend. French was sentenced to five years, and Saunders got life.

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At his trial for the Fritz murders, which started on February 15, 1966, Schmid appeared to be average, clean-cut even. Gone were the mole, the makeup and the bizarre attire. The wholesome veneer, however, did little to sway the jury. After two hours they found him guilty and worthy of the death penalty.

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Krystal Barragan Krystal Barragan (Sep 12 2016 9:40PM) : This shows that your apperance has alot to do with what people think about your character because he thought that by changing his looks the judge would think he was a changed person.
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A significant weakness in the Rowe case was the absence of a body. Saunders and French had led police to the spot in the desert where they had buried Rowe, but, while they could find the curlers, they could not find her grave.

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Sophie Konieczny Sophie Konieczny (Sep 05 2016 11:09PM) : I found this interesting considering it takes the body a very long time to decompose and It would probably take curling irons even longer. I wonder what happened to the body or if Smitty just lied about where the body was?
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Jackson MacKay Jackson MacKay (Sep 06 2016 3:58PM) : If he had lied about where the body was, chances are they would still be found, because his accomplices might still tell.

Even with lack of a body, and the services of the brilliant F. Lee Bailey, the defense team could do no better than a murder two plea. Schmid was sentenced to 50 years to life.

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Within a month, Schmid asked for a new trial, offering to produce Rowe's body. That would be proof, he said, that she was not killed by a blow to the head, as Saunders testified. He knew the exact location because, without knowledge of his pals, Schmid had reburied the girl.

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Sophie Konieczny Sophie Konieczny (Sep 05 2016 11:13PM) : I wonder how she died if her head did not get damaged as they said?
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Abbey McWhirter Abbey McWhirter (Sep 06 2016 12:34PM) : "The autopsy confirmed Saunders' story, and there was no retrial." more

She actually was killed by a blow to the head. Schmidt knew that but he still wanted a retrial because he thought he could convince the jury otherwise. Also, he moved Rowe’s body on his own, so then he had leverage to perhaps get a shorter sentence. Yet, his plan backfired and the autopsy showed that Saunders, Schmidt’s accomplice and the man who testified against him told the truth about Rowe’s body. Thus meaning, Schmidt was not getting out of jail anytime in his life.

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Krystal Barragan Krystal Barragan (Sep 12 2016 9:38PM) : This really makes me wonder why he would do that. What was the purpose of reburying her ? Why did he only do this with this girl and not the others?

The autopsy confirmed Saunders' story, and there was no retrial.

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After 1971, when Arizona abolished the death penalty, it looked as if Schmid was destined to spend decades behind bars. But in 1975, two inmates cut his sentence short by beating and stabbing him to death.

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His bizarre life inspired a story - "Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been?" - by Joyce Carol Oates. It was later adapted into a film, "Smooth Talk," starring Laura Dern as a young girl whose "trashy daydreams" leave her vulnerable to a dangerous stranger.

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Abby Walston, Abby Walston, (Sep 05 2016 3:00PM) : How old was he when he started killing people?
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Abbey McWhirter Abbey McWhirter (Sep 06 2016 12:42PM) : "Although out of high school for years,..." more

Schmidt was at least in his mid twenties when he started killing girls. I wonder it was still illegal for a 17 year old to date a man of his age back then, as it its now? If it was this would add to my evidence of Schmidt being a pedofile. Also it might explain why so many young girls were attracted to him. Since he was “off-limits”, girls probably saw that as mysterious and sexy so they sought after him.

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Ash Uzeta Ash Uzeta (Sep 14 2016 7:05PM) : He's definitely a pedophile. more

Charles Schmid, who preyed exclusively on teenage girls, absolutely fits the criteria for being a pedophile. Rather than making him “off-limits” to girls, which falsely puts the blame on them, he was a violent manipulator and used his age and “charm” to manipulate girls.

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Abby Walston, Abby Walston, (Sep 05 2016 3:03PM) : Why did he want to be taller?
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Seamus Bacon Seamus Bacon (Sep 06 2016 12:07PM) : He probably wanted to be taller because he wanted to intimidate people rather than be that short punk who's starting fights.
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Jackson MacKay Jackson MacKay (Sep 06 2016 3:53PM) : Being taller gives a person a sense of superiority and makes you feel stronger. Being short makes you feel weak, and clearly he didn't want to feel weak.
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Abby Walston, Abby Walston, (Sep 05 2016 7:06PM) : What made him want to start killing people? Also why only girls?
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Jackson MacKay Jackson MacKay (Sep 06 2016 3:57PM) : He wanted to feel superior, but he was still small. more

I think he decided to start killing people because it’d make him feel stronger, however, I think he killed girls because in his eye, they would be easier to drag away and kill. Also, if he were to be dragging their corpses around in a desert, he would probably want something lighter, seeing as he wasn’t that big himself.

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Madeline Todd Madeline Todd (Sep 11 2016 10:31PM) : Girls are easier targets than men. more

I agree that it would have been because they would be easier to drag away and kill. Although, I also think it could be because women were more vulnerable and couldn’t really fight back. He went after girls who were a little more rebellious and probably thought that they would come with him for something scandalous and risky.

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