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PREFACE

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DemystifyingAcademic Conversation

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EXPERIENCED WRITING INSTRUCTORS have long recognized that writing well means entering into conversation with others. Academic writing in particular calls upon writers not simply to express their own ideas, but to do so as a response to what others have said. The mission statement for the first-year writing program at our own university, for example, describes its goal as helping students “enter a conversation about ideas.” A similar statement by another program holds that “intellectual writing is almost always composed in response to others’ texts.” These statements echo the ideas of rhetorical theorists like Kenneth Burke, Mikhail Bakhtin, and Wayne Booth as well as recent composition scholars like David Bartholomae, Patricia Bizzell, Peter Elbow, Joseph Harris, Andrea Lunsford, Elaine Maimon, Gary Olson, Tilly Warnock, Mike Rose, and others who argue that writing well means engaging the voices of others and letting them in turn engage us.

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Yet despite this growing consensus that writing is a social, conversational act, helping student writers actually “enter a conversation about ideas” remains a formidable challenge. This book aims to meet that challenge. Its goal is to demystify academic writing by isolating its basic moves, explaining them clearly, and representing them in the form of templates. In this way, we hope to help students become active participants in the important conversations of the academic world and the wider public sphere.

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Student Ashlyn Matthews Student Ashlyn Matthews (Sep 07 2016 7:00AM) : I'm very confused on why the title and the text don't match w/ the point he's trying to make.
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Student Ashlyn Matthews Student Ashlyn Matthews (Sep 07 2016 7:03AM) : This is kinda our guidelines on how to express our own ideas
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Natalie Parrott Natalie Parrott (Sep 07 2016 8:17PM) : I think this book could be helpful at times.
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Paige Hickam Paige Hickam (Sep 06 2016 10:32PM) : While reading this sentence popped out to me because It sort of says that they will be helping us with these things and coming up with our own ideas.
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HIGHLIGHTS

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Shows that writing well means entering a conversation, summarizing others (“they say”) to set up one’s own argument (“I say”).

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Demystifies academic writing, showing students “the moves that matter” in language they can readily apply.

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Provides user-friendly templates to help writers make those moves in their own writing.

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HOW THIS BOOK CAME TO BE

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The original idea for this book grew out of our shared interest in democratizing academic culture. First, it grew out of arguments that Gerald Graff has been making throughout his career that schools and colleges need to invite students into the conversations and debates that surround them. More specifically, it is a practical, hands-on companion to his recent book, Clueless in Academe: How Schooling Obscures the Life of the Mind, in which he looks at such conversations from the perspective of those who find them mysterious and proposes ways in which such mystification can be overcome. Second, this book grew out of writing templates that Cathy Birkenstein developed in the 1990s, for use in writing and literature courses she was teaching. Many students, she found, could readily grasp what it meant to summarize an author, to support a thesis with evidence, to entertain a counterargument, or to identify a textual contradiction, but they often had trouble putting these concepts into practice in their own writing. When Cathy sketched out templates on the board, however, giving her students some of the language and patterns that these sophisticated moves require, their writing—and even their quality of thought—significantly improved.

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Mekenna Vaughan Mekenna Vaughan (Sep 07 2016 9:03AM) : this is an interesting paragraph because its shows the background on the book and how it all started.
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Natalie Parrott Natalie Parrott (Sep 07 2016 8:15PM) : I liked this part because it gave me an idea of the how the book came about.
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Terry Elliot Ryan Schmitt Terry Elliot Ryan Schmitt (Sep 07 2016 12:13AM) : The idea of giving students a template to recognize would be ideal for the right purpose. Templates would help to grasp the meaning of something after seeing it. [Edited]

This book began, then, when we put our ideas together and realized that these templates might have the potential to open up and clarify academic conversation. We proceeded from the premise that all writers rely on certain stock formulas that they themselves didn’t invent—and that many of these formulas are so commonly used that they can be represented in model templates that students can use to structure and even generate what they want to say.

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Mekenna Vaughan Mekenna Vaughan (Sep 07 2016 9:04AM) : i liked how they used an example from UIC of how they developed the draft of this book.
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Natalie Parrott Natalie Parrott (Sep 07 2016 8:20PM) : I liked how they used things that they learned from UIC students.
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As we developed a working draft of this book, we began using it in first-year writing courses that we teach at UIC. In classroom exercises and writing assignments, we found that students who otherwise struggled to organize their thoughts, or even to think of something to say, did much better when we provided them with templates like the following:

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In discussions of _______, a controversial issue is whether ________. While some argue that ________, others contend that _________.

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Terry Elliot Ryan Schmitt Terry Elliot Ryan Schmitt (Sep 07 2016 12:18AM) : Using such templates would easily help a student who struggles in the formation of a paper. I have struggled with Writing papers my entire life. Each time I began to write I wouldn't know how to form the words to start.
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This is not to say that ________.

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One virtue of such templates, we found, is that they focus writers’ attention not just on what is being said, but on the forms that structure what is being said. In other words, they help students focus on the rhetorical patterns that are key to academic success but often pass under the classroom radar.

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THE CENTRALITYOF “THEYSAY/ ISAY”

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The central rhetorical move that we focus on in this book is the “they say / I say” template that gives our book its title. In our view, this template represents the deep, underlying structure, the internal DNA as it were, of all effective argument. Effective persuasive writers do more than make well-supported claims (“I say”); they also map those claims relative to the claims of others (“they say”).

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Danny Zeidan Danny Zeidan (Sep 05 2016 5:07AM) : I have a feeling that this part is judging us for being judgmental. Or am I just feeding the title of this book?
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Paige Hickam Paige Hickam (Sep 06 2016 10:30PM) : I agree. I am not exactly sure why it is judging us for us being judgmental but isn't that kind of contradicting itself?
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Terry Elliot Ryan Schmitt Terry Elliot Ryan Schmitt (Sep 07 2016 12:08AM) : Judging the audience for being judgmental, talk about hypocritical.
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Student Ashlyn Matthews Student Ashlyn Matthews (Sep 07 2016 6:59AM) : A lot of people judge people for judging other people😂
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Mekenna Vaughan Mekenna Vaughan (Sep 07 2016 9:06AM) : a lot of people do judge people of judging people I'm sure everyone is guilty of that
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Here, for example, the “they say / I say” pattern structures a passage from a recent essay by the media and technology critic Steven Johnson.

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For decades, we’ve worked under the assumption that mass culture follows a path declining steadily toward lowest-common-denominator standards, presumably because the “masses” want dumb, simple pleasures and big media companies try to give the masses what they want. But…the exact opposite is happening: the culture is getting more cognitively demanding, not less. STEVEN JOHNSON, “Watching TV Makes You Smarter”

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In generating his own argument from something “they say,” Johnson suggests why he needs to say what he is saying: to correct a popular misconception.

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Even when writers do not explicitly identify the views they are responding to, as Johnson does, an implicit “they say” can often be discerned, as in the following passage by Zora Neale Hurston.

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I remember the day I became colored.

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ZORA NEALE HURSTON, “How It Feels to Be Colored Me”

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In order to grasp Hurston’s point here, we need to be able to reconstruct the implicit view she is responding to: that racial identity is an innate quality we are simply born with. On the contrary, Hurston suggests, our race is imposed on us by society —something we “become” by virtue of how we are treated.

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As these examples suggest, the “they say / I say” model can improve not just student writing, but student reading comprehension as well. Since reading and writing are deeply reciprocal activities, students who learn to make the rhetorical moves represented by the templates in this book figure to become more adept at identifying these same moves in the texts they read.And if we are right that effective arguments are always in dialogue with other arguments, then it follows that in order to understand the types of challenging texts assigned in college, students need to identify the views to which those texts are responding.

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Working with the “they say / I say” model can also help with invention, finding something to say. In our experience, students best discover what they want to say not by thinking about a subject in an isolation booth, but by reading texts, listening closely to what other writers say, and looking for an opening in which they can enter the conversation. In other words, listening closely to others and summarizing what they have to say can help writers generate their own ideas.

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THE USEFULNESS OF TEMPLATES

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Our templates themselves have a generative quality, prompting students to make moves in their writing that they might not otherwise make or even know they should make. The templates in this book can be particularly helpful for students who are unsure about what to say, or who have trouble finding enough to say, often because they see their own beliefs as so self-evident that they need not be argued for. Students like this are often helped, we’ve found, when we give them a simple template like the following one for entertaining a counterargument (or planting a naysayer, as we call it in Chapter 6).

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Collin Kryger Collin Kryger (Sep 01 2021 8:00PM) : If my beliefs are self-evident I struggle getting them written down more

I have found this true in my writings, I really have to think about why I believe what I do. I can see the benefits that a template would provide. It would allow me to get my thoughts down without worrying about the sentence structure

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Of course some object that ______. Although I concede that _________, I still maintain that__________.

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What this particular template helps students do is make the seemingly counterintuitive move of questioning their own beliefs, of looking at them from the perspective of those who disagree. In so doing, templates can bring out aspects of students’ thoughts that, as they themselves sometimes remark, they didn’t even realize were there. Other templates in this book will help writers make a whole host of sophisticated moves that they might not otherwise make: summarizing what someone else says, framing a quotation in their own words, indicating the view that the writer is responding to, marking the shift from a source’s view to the writer’s own view, offering evidence for that view, entertaining and answering counterarguments and explaining what is at stake in the first place. In showing students how to make such moves, templates do more than organize students’ ideas; they help bring those ideas into existence.

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OKAY, BUT TEMPLATES?

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We are aware, of course, that some instructors may have reservations about templates. Some, for instance, may object that such formulaic devices represent a return to prescriptive forms of instruction that encourage passive learning or lead students to put their writing on automatic pilot.

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This is an understandable reaction, we think, to kinds of rote instruction that have indeed encouraged passivity and drained writing of its creativity and dynamic relation to the social world. The trouble is that many students will never learn on their own to make the key intellectual moves that our templates represent. While seasoned writers pick up these moves unconsciously through their reading, many students do not. Consequently, we believe, students need to see these moves represented in the explicit ways that templates provide.

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The aim of the templates, then, is not to stifle critical thinking but to be direct with students about the key rhetorical moves that comprise it. Admittedly, no teaching tool can guarantee that students will engage in hard, rigorous thought. Our templates do, however, provide concrete prompts that can stimulate and shape such thought: What do “they say” about my topic? What would a naysayer say about my argument? What is my evidence? Do I need to qualify my point? Who cares?

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In fact, templates have a long and rich history. Public orators from ancient Greece and Rome through the European Renaissance studied rhetorical topoi or “commonplaces,” model passages and formulas that represented the different strategies available to public speakers. In many respects, our templates echo this classical rhetorical tradition of imitating established models.

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In our own day, the journal Nature offers aspiring contributors a templatelike guideline for the opening page of their manuscripts: “Two or three sentences explaining what the main result [of their study] reveals in direct comparison with what was thought to be the case previously, or how the main result adds to previous knowledge.”

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In the field of education, a form designed by the education theorist Howard Gardner asks postdoctoral fellowship applicants to complete the following template:

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“Most scholars in the field believe ___________. As a result of my study, _________.”

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That these two examples are geared toward postdoctoral fellows and advanced researchers shows that it is not only struggling undergraduates who can use help making these key rhetorical moves, but experienced academics as well.

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Templates have even been used in the teaching of personal narrative. The literary scholar Jane Tompkins devised the following template to help student writers make the often difficult move from telling a story to explaining what it means:

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“X tells a story about _________to make the point that ________. My own experience with ______yields a point that is similar/different/both similar and different. What I take away from my own experience with _________is ________. As a result, I conclude _________.”

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We especially like this template because it suggests that “they say / I say” argument need not be mechanical, impersonal, or dry, and that telling a story and making an argument are more compatible activities than many think.

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WHYTHE “I” TABOO IS MISTAKEN

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But wait—“as a result, I conclude”? “They say/I say”? How can we so flagrantly encourage the use of the first-person pronoun? Aren’t we aware that many English teachers prohibit their students from using “I” or “we,” on the grounds that these pronouns encourage ill-considered, subjective opinions rather than objective and reasoned arguments? Yes, we are aware of this line of reasoning, but we think it has serious flaws. First, expressing ill-considered, subjective opinions is not necessarily the worst sin beginning writers can commit; it might be a starting point from which they can move to more reasoned, less self-indulgent perspectives. Second, prohibiting students from using “I” is simply not an effective way of curbing student subjectivity, since one can offer poorly argued, ill-supported opinions just as easily without it. Third and most important, prohibiting the first person tends to hamper students’ ability not only to take strong positions, but to differentiate their own positions from those of others, as we point out in Chapter 5. To be sure, writers can resort to various circumlocutions—“it will here be argued,” “the evidence suggests,” “the truth is”—and these may be useful for avoiding a monotonous series of “I believe” sentences. But except for avoiding such monotony, we see no good reason why “I” should be set aside in persuasive writing.

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HOW THIS BOOK IS ORGANIZED

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Because of its centrality, we have allowed the “they say / I say” format to dictate the structure of this book. So while Part 1 addresses the art of listening to others, Part 2 addresses how to offer one’s own response. Part 1 opens with a chapter on “Starting with What Others Are Saying” that explains why it is generally advisable to begin a text by citing others rather than plunging directly into one’s own views. Subsequent chapters take up the arts of summarizing and quoting what these others have to say. Part 2 begins with a chapter on different ways of responding, followed by chapters on marking the shift between what “they say” and what “I say,” on introducing and answering objections, and on answering the all-important questions “so what?” and “who cares?” Part 3 offers strategies for “Tying It All Together,” beginning with a chapter on connection and coherence; followed by a chapter on style, arguing that academic discourse is often perfectly compatible with the informal language that students use outside of school; and concluding with a chapter on the art of metacommentary, showing students how to guide the way readers understand their text. At the end of the book we include an appendix suggesting how the “they say / I say” model can improve classroom discussions, three model essays that we refer to in various chapters, and finally an Index of Templates.

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WHAT THIS BOOK DOESN’T DO

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There are some things that this book does not try to do. We do not, for instance, cover logical principles of argument such as syllogisms, warrants, logical fallacies, or the differences between inductive and deductive reasoning. Although such concepts can be useful, we believe most of us learn the ins and outs of argumentative writing not by studying logical principles in the abstract, but by argumentative writing not by studying logical principles in the abstract, but by plunging into actual discussions and debates, trying out different modes of response, and in this way getting a sense of what works to persuade different audiences and what doesn’t. In our view, people learn more about arguing from hearing someone say, “You miss my point. What I’m saying is not _________, but _____________,” or, “I agree with you that _________, and would even add that ________,” than they do from studying the differences between inductive and deductive reasoning. Such formulas give students an immediate sense of what it feels like to enter a public conversation in a way that studying abstract warrants and logical fallacies does not.

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Hannah Reardon Hannah Reardon (Sep 07 2016 7:36PM) : I like the title of this section because it seems honest and tells the different concepts not covered in this book so you know going into it.
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Natalie Parrott Natalie Parrott (Sep 07 2016 8:12PM) : I like how it gives you an idea on what to expect.
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Danny Zeidan Danny Zeidan (Sep 05 2016 5:09AM) : This book isn't exactly about common sense, but expecting you to have it coming in. That's what I'm getting from this.
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Paige Hickam Paige Hickam (Sep 06 2016 10:31PM) : It doesn't really explain anything about common sense but they do kind of go over that they expect you to come in with it. But if someones doesn't really understand what they are covering doesn't that kind of just hurt the student?
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Terry Elliot Ryan Schmitt Terry Elliot Ryan Schmitt (Sep 07 2016 12:20AM) : The title is very misleading, however they do give some information about what is expected of you.
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Mekenna Vaughan Mekenna Vaughan (Sep 07 2016 9:07AM) : I agree with the title being misleading. i wonder what other title options they had in mind.
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Danny Zeidan Danny Zeidan (Sep 12 2016 9:31AM) : I kind of thought that at first. Active reading is definitely needed when looking at this book.
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Hannah Reardon Hannah Reardon (Sep 07 2016 7:34PM) : That's how I took it as I read it. Having common sense is key.
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Jimena Velasquez Jimena Velasquez (Sep 01 2021 5:47AM) : This Information seems very helpful, it seems to give you a start off with these templates

We also do not cover the various modes of writing like description, definition, narrative, and comparison/contrast. Nor do we cover the different conventions of writing in the disciplines. It is our belief, that the “they say / I say” pattern cuts across different disciplines and genres of writing, including creative writing. Although students must eventually master the specific writing conventions of their majors, we believe that there is no major or discipline that does not require writers to frame their own claims as a response to what others before them have said. Indeed, students who master the elemental moves prompted by the templates in this book should actually become better able to appreciate the differences between disciplines and genres.

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Elijia Powell Elijia Powell (Sep 01 2021 9:57PM) : I appreciate that they let you know in the beginning what they are not going to be addressing in the book, essentially telling you these are the things that you should already know.
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ENGAGING THE VOICE OF THE OTHER

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A major virtue of the “‘they say / I say’” model is that it returns writing to its social, conversational base. Although writing does require some degree of solitude, the “they say / I say” model shows students that they can best develop their arguments not just by looking inward, but also by looking outward, listening carefully to other views, and engaging the voice of the other. As a result, this approach to writing has an ethical dimension: it asks students not simply to keep proving and reasserting what they already believe, but to stretch what they believe by putting it up against the beliefs of our increasingly diverse, global society, to engage in the reciprocal exchange that characterizes true democracy.

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Hannah Reardon Hannah Reardon (Sep 07 2016 7:39PM) : I agree with the points made in this section. Especially when it talks about how this model shows how to correctly develop an argument by not only look inward but outward as well listening to the different points others may have on a topic.
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Paige Hickam Paige Hickam (Sep 06 2016 10:36PM) : I think this explained a lot to me and helped me open my eyes that we don't always have to argue/judge what is around us at the time but can also judge/argue with what is further away from us and something we might not know about 100%.
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Student Ashlyn Matthews Student Ashlyn Matthews (Sep 07 2016 6:59AM) : I agree. It made me see that as well.
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Hannah Reardon Hannah Reardon (Sep 07 2016 7:28PM) : This really opened my eyes as well after reading it!
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Danny Zeidan Danny Zeidan (Sep 12 2016 9:30AM) : Same here! Definitely shows different kinds of views!
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Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein

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