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In the epic of Gilgamesh, Gilgamesh meets the three requirements of a hero journey. Gilgamesh was a son of a king who was introduce to a different ordinary world. Gilgamesh is part man and also part king he was introduce as a stuck up person Gilgamesh left his comfort zone. In the story of the epic of Gilgamesh it demonstrates the 12 steps of the hero journey.

To start off with, the first was Gilgamesh being introduced to the ordinary world when Gilgamesh was introduced to Enkidu who is equal in power and strength as stated from the epic of Gilgamesh pg. 16 line 3-6 Gilgamesh left his customary range of familiarity soon as the divine beings made Enkidu, with experiencing Enkidu it was his equivalent and he has had a major effect in his life. The second step was the call to enterprise when Gilgamesh understood that he needed something for himself or detracted from him which is the Cedar Forest which controlled by Humbaba. The author also uses symbolization to help the power of Gilgamesh for example form paragragh 1 “ I shout the deeds of gilgamesh to the entire world “ this shows that Gilgamesh has power over his town and that he is also a part of a kingship.

However Gilgamesh starts Experiencing the Cedar Forest was prohibited, on his trip he strived to be the best pioneer and pick up popularity. Gilgamesh is stubborn and curies. The following stride was the refusal of the call when Gilgamesh is at last persuaded by Enkidu the Humbaba is something genuine and something that couldn’t be vanquished effectively as example from the text ‘Gilgamesh is a noble king”

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The hero myth established by Joseph Campbell works in the Epic Poem “Gilgamesh.” because The Epic displays separate motifs, symbols and themes to help connect the myth to the story. Campbell uses third person as the point of view to convey the characters’ thoughts and feelings. The epic of Gilgamesh displays a concept of heroism and the desire to be immortal.

The theme that help establish the hero myth is love inspires change. Enkidu went from wild being to civilized because of Gilgamesh. Gilgamesh and Enkidu became great friends instead of enemies. They came to love each other like brothers. Gilgamesh’s connection to Enkidu makes it possible for Gilgamesh to identify with his people’s interests.

Another way the hero myth established by Joseph Campbell works in the Epic Poem “Gilgamesh.” Is through motifs. A motif is basically a pattern. An example of this in Gilgamesh is baptism. Baptism occurs frequently throughout Gilgamesh, showing a sense of renewal or rebirth of some characters.

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In the epic of Gilgamesh, Gilgamesh meets the three requirements of a hero journey. Gilgamesh was a son of a king who was introduce to a different ordinary world. Gilgamesh is part man and also part king he was introduce as a stuck up person Gilgamesh left his comfort zone. In the story of the epic of Gilgamesh it demonstrates the 12 steps of the hero journey. To start off with, the first was Gilgamesh being introduced to the ordinary world when Gilgamesh was introduced to Enkidu who is equal in power and strength as stated from the epic of Gilgamesh pg. 16 line 3-6 Gilgamesh left his customary range of familiarity soon as the divine beings made Enkidu, with experiencing Enkidu it was his equivalent and he has had a major effect in his life. The second step was the call to enterprise when Gilgamesh understood that he needed something for himself or detracted from him which is the Cedar Forest which controlled by Humbaba. The author also uses symbolization to help the power of Gilgamesh for example form paragragh 1 “ I shout the deeds of gilgamesh to the entire world “ this shows that Gilgamesh has power over his town and that he is also a part of a kingship. However Gilgamesh starts Experiencing the Cedar Forest was prohibited, on his trip he strived to be the best pioneer and pick up popularity. Gilgamesh is stubborn and curies. The following stride was the refusal of the call when Gilgamesh is at last persuaded by Enkidu the Humbaba is something genuine and something that couldn’t be vanquished effectively as example from the text ‘Gilgamesh is a noble king”

Gilgamesh was afraid when he first started the fight because he knew no one was going to be there to help him. The following stride is meeting with the tutor in Gilgamesh case his coach was Utanapishhim he attempted to guide Gilgamesh to understanding that a human can not acquire everlasting status but rather despite everything he gave him so trust with the blossom of youth. At that point Gilgamesh crosses the line when he is about to approach humumba . The test of Humbaba some critical guardians of Gilgamesh of Enkidu like Ninsun and Shamash come to guide them. For example.......... Gilgamesh experiences tests and assistants, for example, the craftmen made the swords for Gilgamesh and Enkidu and the god Shamash help with making diverse winds that where like a fire to overcome Humbaba. Gilgamesh met all three requirements and also all 12 steps of a heros journey because he accomplished them steps. No matter what it was, Gilgamesh achieved and never let his droughts get the best of him. Throughout Gilgamesh he had different problems that he had to face.

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