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第六课 送汤


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第六课 送汤

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爸爸有一个星期没有来送汤了。真搞不懂他,已经退休了,又没事做,煮点汤有什么难的?好不容易等到他给我送汤,却不是出来的“好东西”。有时连肉块都省了,和以前那厚的味道比起来,真是天之别!

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我已经喝惯了爸爸煮的汤。他第一次为我煮汤,是在妈妈离家的那一天。我当时不知道妈妈为何要离家出走,后来才明白她是认为爸爸没出息。为什么她这么残忍,她可以不要爸爸,怎么可以不要我呢?

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自妈妈离开后,爸爸一有机会就再三叮咛,提醒我一定要好好照顾身体,不要等到出了毛病才去补救。我还这么年轻,病魔怎么会找上我?由于啰唆,我坚持搬出来住。

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说也奇怪,自从我搬出来后,一个叫双姨的女人就成了家里的常客。她是爸爸常去的诊所的护士,听说还没结婚。好友笑说或许爸爸早就该再找个伴了,是我妨碍了他。现在好啦,我搬出来,成全了他,也算做了一件“孝顺”的事。

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爸爸最近爱往诊所钻,问他什么事,他总是摇摇头。那天,他又问我想喝什么汤,他去煮。我心想:我不是刚说过要喝胡猪肚汤吗,他怎么又忘了?爸爸近来根本没把我的话放在心上。

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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Feb 26 2017 11:58PM) : 这段的心理描写有什么作用?
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SiJie Weng SiJie Weng (Mar 02 2017 7:35PM) : 这段心理描写凸现出了女儿内心对父亲的不满,觉得父亲根本不关心自己, [Edited]
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BIG bird (Mar 02 2017 7:35PM) : 这段心理描写说明了‘我’对健忘的父亲感到厌烦。
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Trevyen Darukhanawalla Trevyen Darukhanawalla (Mar 02 2017 7:36PM) : 这段的心里描写表示作者觉得爸爸很麻烦而也不明白为什么爸爸没有记得他说的话。
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Dr Tan Yu Hern Dr Tan Yu Hern (Mar 02 2017 7:36PM) : 这段的心理描写作用是来表达‘我’对父亲的不满
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If not now, then when?

Mar 2
陈 文轩

If not now, then when?

陈 文轩 (Mar 02 2017 7:36PM) : 他不满意这个父亲的健忘,因此感到失望
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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:37PM) : 这个父亲的健忘?语句有些不通顺
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Why are you reading this?

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Aubrey Neo

Why are you reading this?

Aubrey Neo (Mar 02 2017 7:36PM) : 这段心理描写表达了我对爸爸的因为忘记了我说的话的不满。
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LEM JING JIE LEM JING JIE (Mar 02 2017 7:37PM) : "我"的父亲忘了我想喝胡椒猪胃汤,因为这表明他不在乎"我" , 让"我"感到非常伤心 [Edited]
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Wayne Ng Xu Zhe Wayne Ng Xu Zhe (Mar 02 2017 7:47PM) : 不错不错,但只有伤心吗?
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LEM JING JIE LEM JING JIE (Mar 02 2017 7:49PM) : 不仅带来悲伤,它让我体验绝望和失望
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Prof NOOR ASYIQ HEAH JIA YUH Prof NOOR ASYIQ HEAH JIA YUH (Mar 02 2017 7:38PM) : 表达作者对父亲的不满和阿不耐烦。
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Steven Lee Steven Lee (Mar 02 2017 7:39PM) : 它的作用凸显出父亲越来越不关心“我",觉得不耐烦。
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Dr Xi Le Cheah Dr Xi Le Cheah (Mar 02 2017 7:39PM) : 这段的心理描写是女儿对爸爸不满。
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Wayne Ng Xu Zhe Wayne Ng Xu Zhe (Mar 02 2017 7:39PM) : 作用是说明我因为不知道爸爸的健康问题,而对爸爸产生了误解,所以我对他感到不耐烦。
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LEM JING JIE LEM JING JIE (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 很好
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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:42PM) : 这时她还不知道爸爸的病吧?
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Lin Yang Rong Aloysius Lin Yang Rong Aloysius (Mar 02 2017 7:40PM) : 这段的心理描写表达了作者对父亲的责怪和不满,让作者感到很不耐烦。
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YANG XUAN LIN ELIZA YANG XUAN LIN ELIZA (Mar 02 2017 7:40PM) : 这段心理描写表现了“我”对父亲感到不耐烦的心情,觉得父亲根本不在乎“我”,把“我”的话当耳边风。
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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:42PM) : 好!很完整!
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Student Clemente Hannah Fraga Student Clemente Hannah Fraga (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 心理描写表现“我”觉得又失望又伤心因为“我”想爸爸觉得我不是重要的。
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Tan Hui Xin Sharlynn Tan Hui Xin Sharlynn (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 这段心理描写表现了"我"对爸爸的失望和不满因为我以为爸爸不把我放在心上。
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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:43PM) : 好!完整!
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Yong mun hong (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 这句话说明了“我”对爸爸的不满,觉得爸爸没有关心她。
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If not now, then when?

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陈 文轩

If not now, then when?

陈 文轩 (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 作者对他父亲忘了他想要的汤的事实感到懊恼
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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:43PM) : 为什么“懊恼”这个字?
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LEE ZHAO RUI LEE ZHAO RUI (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 这段的心理描写说明了作者怀疑爸爸没有把作者的话放在眼里,因为作者刚刚对爸爸说她想喝什么汤,爸爸却忘了。
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BRAY Den BRAY Den (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 表现了我对爸爸的不满意
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teo jun kai teo jun kai (Mar 02 2017 7:43PM) : 不满意,可以多解释你的答案吗?
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BRAY Den BRAY Den (Mar 02 2017 7:44PM) : 不可以
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teo jun kai teo jun kai (Mar 02 2017 7:45PM) : ??
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BRAY Den BRAY Den (Mar 02 2017 7:47PM) : ?
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teo jun kai teo jun kai (Mar 02 2017 7:42PM) : 这个心理描写表现了作者对父亲的不解和不满。她没有知道她父亲有失智症,所以凸出了这个心理表达。
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Why are you reading this?

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Aubrey Neo

Why are you reading this?

Aubrey Neo (Mar 02 2017 7:46PM) : 为什么会有不解?请多以解释。
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Ryan Koh Ryan Koh (Mar 02 2017 7:42PM) : 这段心理描写说明了爸爸不把儿子的话放在心上,而儿子感到有点不耐烦和生气
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President Donald J. Trump Jasper Wong President Donald J. Trump Jasper Wong (Mar 02 2017 7:42PM) : 这段代表“我”对爸爸的不满,因为“我”以为爸爸开始不关心我了。 [Edited]
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Zi Cheng Foong Zi Cheng Foong (Mar 02 2017 7:43PM) : 步步高升 [Edited]
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teo jun kai teo jun kai (Mar 02 2017 7:46PM) : 可以仔细的解释吗?
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Sir Max Lee Sir Max Lee (Mar 02 2017 7:44PM) : 这表现出了女儿对爸爸的不满,因为女儿觉得爸爸没把她的话放在心上。
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Yee Ze Kai Yee Ze Kai (Mar 02 2017 7:44PM) : 这代表了女儿对爸爸忘了她要喝的汤感到不满
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Tang Dan Cheng Tang Dan Cheng (Mar 02 2017 7:44PM) : 这段的心理理描写表示了作者的爸爸很糊涂因为爸爸忘了我的要求。
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Ms Michelle Tan Ms Michelle Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:45PM) : 这段的心理描写表现了作者对爸爸忘级她想喝的汤的不满,觉得爸爸不理她。
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Zi Cheng Foong Zi Cheng Foong (Mar 02 2017 7:45PM) : 招财进宝 [Edited]
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jjin qin jjin qin (Mar 02 2017 7:47PM) : 这段的心理描写说明了“我”对父亲的不满和懊恼因为父亲忘了“我”要喝什么汤。“我”也觉得父亲没有把“我”的话放在心上因此感到厌烦。
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Prof GOH GUO JUN Jayvier Prof GOH GUO JUN Jayvier (Mar 02 2017 7:47PM) : 这段话说明了作者对父亲没把他的话放在心上感到不满
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min kai min kai (Mar 02 2017 7:49PM) : 这段的心理描写表现了作者对爸爸把她说的话给忘了,作者以为他的爸爸把他的话给忘了,而感到不满。
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已经过了一个星期了,我忍不住打个电话回家,接电话的竟然是双姨。

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“我要找爸爸。”我的语气异常冷

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“你爸爸不是给你送汤去了吗?”对方温婉地说。

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“送汤?他已经一个星期没来了!”

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“……有些事情我不知道该不该跟你说……”

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难道他们要结婚了?爸爸以后不再给我送汤了?

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“你爸爸得了老人失智,他不让我告诉你……他煮了汤说要给你送去,我叫他不要去……他说你的家他一定会记得。”

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我不知道自己是怎样奔下楼的。我只知道自己拼命地跑,去寻找一个正渐渐失去记忆的老人。他或许已记不起去他女儿家的路……

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在一条马路的分界上,一个老人手里提着汤罐,焦急地徘徊着。是爸爸!

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我急忙上前把爸爸带到附近的公园坐下。爸爸把汤递了给我,他出门已有一段时间,汤早就凉了。我喝着汤,却感觉它还透着丝丝热气。

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“爸,这汤真好喝!”

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“好喝,我明天再给你送……”爸爸开始喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种然,仿佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。

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“不用了,爸,我以后不再叫你送汤了!”我坚决地说。

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“你……你不要喝我煮的……汤了?”

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“不是,我搬回家住,好吗?”

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爸爸怔怔地望着我。我知道总有一天,他连我是谁都会忘记。

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我决定学煮汤,煮一辈子的汤给爸爸喝。

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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Feb 27 2017 12:01AM) : 第17-21段对“我”的语言描写有什么作用?
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Tan Yu Xuan Tan Yu Xuan (Mar 02 2017 7:38PM) : 这段语言描写表达了作者对爸爸感到很抱歉因为他错怪了爸爸,以为他跟别的女人在一起,但他其实是得了失智症。
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Prof NOOR ASYIQ HEAH JIA YUH Prof NOOR ASYIQ HEAH JIA YUH (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 要标出作者记着要找父亲的心情。因为作者刚刚才知道父亲得了老人痴呆症。一个星期没有回家了。
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CHEN PEIYU CHEN PEIYU (Mar 02 2017 7:42PM) : 这体现了作者对自己之前的想法和行为感到懊恼,并想弥补自己之前对父亲的不感恩。作者也想像爸爸照顾她一样,留在父亲身边照顾他。
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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:45PM) : 完整!
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Yilin Fan Yilin Fan (Mar 02 2017 7:44PM) : 这段描写的作用是为了表现作者在发现了父亲得了失智症后,为自己之前对父亲的冷漠的不满感到十分后悔。而且作者决定弥补父亲,所以搬回家住。
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BIG bird (Mar 02 2017 7:44PM) : 第17-21段对“我”的语言描写说明了“我”感到很惭愧,想对自己的过错做些弥补。
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Dr Tan Yu Hern Dr Tan Yu Hern (Mar 02 2017 7:44PM) : 第17-21段对“我”的语言描写表示‘我’后悔以前误会了爸爸为什么回忘记煮汤给我喝
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TIMOTHY LIOW TIMOTHY LIOW (Mar 02 2017 7:45PM) : 第17-21段对“我”的语言描写的作用是我告诉爸爸我搬回家住,原来要学煮汤给爸爸喝。 [Edited]
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LEM JING JIE LEM JING JIE (Mar 02 2017 7:45PM) : 那段表明父亲感到悔恨.
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SiJie Weng SiJie Weng (Mar 02 2017 7:46PM) : 这几段对‘我’的语言描写,凸现出了‘我’的醒悟并表达出了内心里对父亲的歉意与内疚,以及想要对父亲做出补偿的心理
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Tang Jia Wen Tang Jia Wen (Mar 02 2017 7:47PM) : 这个作用是要让读者知道作者很后悔,因为父亲老人失智症,但是还每天都会送汤给我。
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Dr Tan Yu Hern Dr Tan Yu Hern (Mar 02 2017 7:48PM) : “自妈妈离开后,爸爸一有机会就再三叮咛,提醒我一定要好好照顾身体,不要等到出了毛病才去补救",可以看出爸爸非常疼爱“我”.
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teo jun kai teo jun kai (Mar 02 2017 7:48PM) : 作者记着要找父亲的心情。因为作者刚刚才知道父亲得了老人痴呆症,对自己之前的想法和行为感到懊恼,并想弥补自己之前对父亲的不感恩。
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HELLO :)

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CHOONG HUI XUAN

HELLO :)

CHOONG HUI XUAN (Mar 02 2017 7:49PM) : 这段描写表达了作者感到愧疚,因为她没有关心父亲,还一直责怪父亲,埋怨他为什么再也没有送汤去了而现在想要去关心,陪他。
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If not now, then when?

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陈 文轩

If not now, then when?

陈 文轩 (Mar 02 2017 7:49PM) : 作家对他父亲的痛苦感到非常沮丧,并试图通过使生活更容易为他做一些事情。他理解他的残疾,知道是他的时间照顾他的父亲,爱是永远关心一个。
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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Feb 27 2017 12:02AM) : 从哪里可以看出爸爸非常疼爱“我”?
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Why are you reading this?

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Aubrey Neo

Why are you reading this?

Aubrey Neo (Mar 02 2017 7:32PM) : 从‘“好喝,我明天再给你送……”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,仿佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。‘, 看得出爸爸对我的关心。
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teo jun kai teo jun kai (Mar 02 2017 7:34PM) : 在第三段里,作者提出了父亲提醒她要好好照顾身体。这是父亲对奴儿的关系。
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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:34PM) : 奴儿?!是女儿吧。
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Dr Xi Le Cheah Dr Xi Le Cheah (Mar 02 2017 7:40PM) : 从“好喝,我明天再给你送......“爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过了一种茫然,彷佛在寻找管我们的记忆,却遍寻不获,” 可以看出爸爸的绝望。
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LEE ZHAO RUI LEE ZHAO RUI (Mar 02 2017 7:34PM) : 从““好喝,我明天再给你送……”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,仿佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。"可以看出爸爸很疼“我”。
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Yilin Fan Yilin Fan (Mar 02 2017 7:37PM) : 从文章里父亲得了老人失智症,但是还是要坚持为我送汤。父亲为了我的健康,一直坚持为我送汤。尽管父亲有可能会迷路,有可能会发生危险,可以看出父亲十分疼爱“我’’
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CHEN PEIYU CHEN PEIYU (Mar 02 2017 7:38PM) : 虽然爸爸得了老年失智症,他还是坚持为作者煲汤。爸爸也不想让作者为他的病而担心,所以始终没有告诉作者他的病情。
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Yong mun hong (Mar 02 2017 7:38PM) : 从爸爸得了老人痴呆症,为了给我送汤,冒着会走失的风险,坚持要自己为我送汤,可以看出爸爸非常疼爱我。
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Mar 2
Ryan Koh Ryan Koh (Mar 02 2017 7:39PM) : 从“好喝,我明天再给你送.....”说明了虽然爸爸有老人失智症,但是还是想不顾一切地送汤给“我” 喝,因为“我”说汤好喝,父亲因为疼爱我,想要给我最好的。
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Mar 2
President Donald J. Trump Jasper Wong President Donald J. Trump Jasper Wong (Mar 02 2017 7:39PM) : 从“好喝,我明天再给你送......“爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过了一种茫然,彷佛在寻找管我们的记忆,却遍寻不获,” 可以看出爸爸的绝望。
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Mar 2
jjin qin jjin qin (Mar 02 2017 7:40PM) : 从:“我明天再给你送.....,”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,仿佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。”可以看出爸爸非常疼爱“我”。
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HELLO :)

Mar 2
CHOONG HUI XUAN

HELLO :)

CHOONG HUI XUAN (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 从“我”搬家之后,爸爸退休之后经常送汤给“我”到他得了老人痴呆但是还坚持要送汤给“我”喝可以看出爸爸非常疼爱我。
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Mar 2
Trevyen Darukhanawalla Trevyen Darukhanawalla (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : “自妈妈离开后,爸爸一有机会就再三叮咛,提醒我一定要好好照顾身体,不要等到出了毛病才去补救",可以看出。
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Mar 2
Steven Lee Steven Lee (Mar 02 2017 7:41PM) : 从“好喝,我明天再给你送……”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,仿佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。"可以看出。
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Mar 2
Fum Yu En Fum Yu En (Mar 02 2017 7:42PM) : 从‘“好喝,我明天再给你送....”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,彷佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。’可以看出来爸爸非常疼爱‘我’。
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Mar 2
Tan Yu Xuan Tan Yu Xuan (Mar 02 2017 7:43PM) : 从文章可以看出虽然爸爸失智,但他不想让作者担心,还想要给他送汤,表达了爸爸对作者的疼爱。
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Mar 2
Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:47PM) : 好!
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Mar 2
LEM JING JIE LEM JING JIE (Mar 02 2017 7:46PM) : 从“好喝,我明天再给你送……”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,仿佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。"可以看出爸爸很疼“我”。
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Big bird EW

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BIG bird

Big bird EW

BIG bird (Mar 02 2017 7:48PM) : 虽然爸爸得了老年失智症,他还是坚持为作者煲汤。爸爸也不想让作者为他的病而担心,所以始终没有告诉作者他的病情。
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Mar 2
Ms Michelle Tan Ms Michelle Tan (Mar 02 2017 7:48PM) : 从‘“好喝,我明天再给你送....”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,彷佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。’可以看出来爸爸非常疼爱‘我’。
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Mar 2
Dianne Omandam Dianne Omandam (Mar 02 2017 7:48PM) : 从“好喝,我明天再给你送……”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,仿佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。”可以看出爸爸非常疼爱“我”。
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Mar 2
samuel xd samuel xd (Mar 02 2017 7:49PM) : 从‘“好喝,我明天再给你送……”爸爸开始喃喃自语。他的眼睛里闪过一种茫然,仿佛在寻找有关我们的记忆,却遍寻不获。‘, 可以看得出
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Mar 2
Tang Dan Cheng Tang Dan Cheng (Mar 02 2017 7:49PM) : 从爸爸得了老人失智症也要送汤可以看出爸爸非常疼爱“我 [Edited]
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Mar 2
Lin Yang Rong Aloysius Lin Yang Rong Aloysius (Mar 02 2017 7:49PM) : 从“好喝,我明天再给你送。。。。。。“爸爸开始喃喃自语。他出门已有一段时间,汤早就凉了。“
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Mar 2
Tang Jia Wen Tang Jia Wen (Mar 02 2017 7:50PM) : 从文章可以看出虽然爸爸有老人失智症,但他不想让作者担心,还每天都给他送汤去,表达了爸爸爱‘我’。
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TIMOTHY LIOW TIMOTHY LIOW (Mar 02 2017 7:50PM) : 从“”好喝,我明天再给你送......"爸爸开始喃喃自语。:可以看出爸爸非常疼爱我。
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