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黄丝带的故事


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1 这是发生在美国的真实故事。

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2 那是一个秋天的早晨, 一辆载满乘客的巴士上,三五个年轻人正弹着吉他,唱着轻快的流行歌曲,车上充满了欢声笑语。

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3 一个沉默的中年男子独自坐在车尾,显得格格不入。他频频望向窗外,脸上流露出忧郁的表情。 再过不久,就要到下一站了,中年男子的神情越发凝重。

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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 01 2017 10:01PM) : 为什么那位中年男子会显得“格格不入”?
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Weisong Goh Weisong Goh (Mar 02 2017 12:49AM) : 他不懂要几时才可以下车😜
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Student Liau Yu Heng Student Liau Yu Heng (Mar 02 2017 12:52AM) : 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
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Weisong Goh Weisong Goh (Mar 02 2017 12:55AM) : 谢谢
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Syntian Lai Syntian Lai (Mar 02 2017 12:50AM) : 因为他很担心他的家人不接受他犯过法
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Rayson Lee Rayson Lee (Mar 02 2017 12:50AM) : 他频频望向窗外,脸上流露出忧郁的表情。
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Syntian Lai Syntian Lai (Mar 02 2017 12:53AM) : 这和问题有什么关系
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李 政 李 政 (Mar 02 2017 12:51AM) : 因为他频频望向窗外,脸上流露出忧郁的表情。
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Shennan Sim Shennan Sim (Mar 02 2017 12:51AM) : 因为那位男子不能和别人一起唱歌
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Charway Ng Charway Ng (Mar 02 2017 12:54AM) : 你的回大 more

因为他不会唱歌

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E laine E laine (Mar 02 2017 12:55AM) : 格格不入代表不能和他们唱歌吗
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Shennan Sim Shennan Sim (Mar 02 2017 12:55AM) : ye s
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Charway Ng Charway Ng (Mar 02 2017 12:51AM) : 因为他在想他的家人不会原谅他
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Student Liau Yu Heng Student Liau Yu Heng (Mar 02 2017 12:51AM) : 因为他一直看出窗外,也和其他游客不说话。👌🏻
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barack Jason Poh barack Jason Poh (Mar 02 2017 12:52AM) : 那个人觉得从监狱释放后,他的家人们可能会觉得他不是一个好人,因此他不觉得他适合在家里。 more Tags: #chinese

没yo

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Student Zhou Enjie Student Zhou Enjie (Mar 02 2017 12:52AM) : 因为巴士上几个年轻人在弹吉他,唱着流行歌曲,车上充满欢声笑语。只 有那个沉默的中年男子举动跟大家不同,他一直望着窗外,脸上流露出忧郁的表情,想事情。 [Edited]
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Eve Lee Eve Lee (Mar 02 2017 12:53AM) : 因为他一直看着窗外,寻找黄丝带的踪迹。他也是没心情唱歌。
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E laine E laine (Mar 02 2017 12:53AM) : 因为他刚出狱,不知道他的妻子有没有接受犯错误的他。
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Jue Xi Lai Jue Xi Lai (Mar 02 2017 12:53AM) : 因为他不知道他的妻子会不会原谅他所做的行为
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Shawn Seah Shawn Seah (Mar 02 2017 12:53AM) : 因为他担心他的妻子是否会原谅他的过错,照他说绑黄丝带在树上
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Charway Ng Charway Ng (Mar 02 2017 12:56AM) : 不会
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Chin Junlong Student Chin Junlong Student (Mar 02 2017 12:55AM) : 他很不清楚是否该下车或留着
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Oscar Awards Oscar Awards Oscar Awards Oscar Awards (Mar 02 2017 12:55AM) : 因为他犯过错,做过牢,怕家人不放过他,不让他回家
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Dr Koh Boon Kiat Dr Koh Boon Kiat (Mar 02 2017 12:57AM) : 因为他不知道几时能回家了。
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Nicholas Chio Nicholas Chio (Mar 02 2017 12:57AM) : 因为他不喜欢听歌
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Rayson Lee Rayson Lee (Mar 02 2017 3:27AM) : 什么意思,请你将仔细一点。
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Neo Chen Swee Ian Neo Chen Swee Ian (Mar 02 2017 12:58AM) : 因为他要看到很多人在拍
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4 一个女孩走到他身边,关切地问:“嗨,您在哪里下车?您好像不是很开心,怎么啦?”

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5 中年男子抬起头,犹豫了一会儿,对女孩说: “我应该在下一站下车,可是我不知道……也许我还得继续坐下去……”

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6 “哦?为什么?”女孩好奇地问道。

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7 “其实……我三年没回家了。 当年,我开了一家商店,因为经营不善,欠了一大笔债,结果被判了刑。今天刑期刚满,我坐上这班巴士回家,下一站就到了。如果……我还有家可回……”

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8 他们的对话引起了其他乘客的注意。大家转过身来,静静地听这个满脸沧桑的中年男子的故事。

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9 “两个礼拜前,我写了一封信给我的妻子,告诉她我就要出狱了。可是,我不确定她是否能接受犯过错误的我。我在信上告诉她,如果她还能接受我的话,就在村口那棵最大的老橡树上绑一条黄丝带。如果我看到黄丝带,就知道她已经原谅了我,愿意让我回家;如果看不到,我就只好忘掉我们过去的一切……”

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10 大家都很感动,也开始担忧起来。车子离下一站越来越近,中年男子再也不敢向窗外看。其他乘客则不约而同地望向窗外,寻找黄丝带的踪迹。

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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 01 2017 10:02PM) : 如果你是车子里的其中一名乘客,看到外面的场景,你心里会有什么感受?
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Jiewee Loi Jiewee Loi (Mar 02 2017 12:52AM) : 我会替那名男子感到开心因为他的家人和村里的邻居都为他绑一条黄丝带也表示他们都原谅他了
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Rayson Lee Rayson Lee (Mar 02 2017 12:52AM) : 我心里会感到很感动。
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Chin Junlong Student Chin Junlong Student (Mar 02 2017 12:53AM) : 真是很感人
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Chin Junlong Student Chin Junlong Student (Mar 02 2017 12:52AM) : 我会被感到眼泪流个不停
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Shennan Sim Shennan Sim (Mar 02 2017 12:54AM) : 我会觉得很left out 因为别人在玩可是我在emo看外面
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Nicholas Chio Nicholas Chio (Mar 02 2017 12:54AM) : 感到很幸福-
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李 政 李 政 (Mar 02 2017 12:56AM) : 我会被感到眼泪流个不停
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Eve Lee Eve Lee (Mar 02 2017 12:56AM) : 如果我是车子里的其中一名乘客,我会替他开心也会感到很感动
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Jun Jie Ku Jun Jie Ku (Mar 02 2017 12:56AM) : 我会替他感到开心和感动因为他的家人和村里的人都原谅他,不会看不起他。
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Weisong Goh Weisong Goh (Mar 02 2017 12:58AM) : 说的好👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Weisong Goh Weisong Goh (Mar 02 2017 12:57AM) : 我会很感动
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barack Jason Poh barack Jason Poh (Mar 02 2017 12:57AM) : 我感到高兴,我已经离开了笼子 Tags: Chineseisawesome
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Jue Xi Lai Jue Xi Lai (Mar 02 2017 12:58AM) : 我会感到很感动也会替他很开心
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Dr Koh Boon Kiat Dr Koh Boon Kiat (Mar 02 2017 12:58AM) : 我会感觉兴奋,对他很开心。
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11 突然, 寂静无声的巴士上响起了欢呼声,大家兴奋地指着窗外叫中年男子看。他抬起头向窗外看去,眼前的情景令他激动不已:老橡树上绑满了黄丝带,代表着包容与原谅的黄丝带!他的妻子、儿女和全村的人都站在老橡树下,迎接他的归来。

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12 车上的,家里的,村里的,所有人都在拍手,在欢呼。 中年男子的视线模糊了,这感人的一幕令他潸然泪下……

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Miss Joycelyn Tan Miss Joycelyn Tan (Mar 01 2017 10:03PM) : 这篇课文传达了什么道理?
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Chin Junlong Student Chin Junlong Student (Mar 02 2017 12:52AM) : 转达了黄丝带代表对犯过错误的人的原谅
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Student Liau Yu Heng Student Liau Yu Heng (Mar 02 2017 12:55AM) : 传达了我们应该原谅别人,也传达了黄丝带的来源。谢谢。
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Student Zhou Enjie Student Zhou Enjie (Mar 02 2017 12:57AM) : 大家要懂的宽容别人。
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Syntian Lai Syntian Lai (Mar 02 2017 12:58AM) : 要给人家一个改过自新的机会
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Shennan Sim Shennan Sim (Mar 02 2017 12:58AM) : 这篇文章要传达的是每一个人都有一个机会中心开始
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