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James’s tone was low and I really didn’t understand the things he was saying. His volume could of been way better because it was hard to hear him.
His pacing was bad because all his words were mixed together because he really did not take time between his words
Everything sounded the same to me
To be honest James reading was boring and monotone. It lacked life, it lacked spirit. It took me a lot of effort to even continue listening to his reading.
What I can learn from Baldwin’s reading is to always make sure that I add life to my reading.
His tone of voice very clear and nice, but it gets to the point where if he reads with that tone for the whole story, it’s going to be very difficult for people to keep paying attention to what he is reading.
Most of his words that should be happy are more of a sad tone
His voice is constant not happy just sad and soft