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A Very Old Man With Enormous Wings

DMU Timestamp: May 12, 2017 15:53

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Nov 7

Jane White Jane White (Nov 07 2017 11:50PM) : I wonder why they killed so many crabs. It couldn't have been to eat, because Pelayo had to throw them out in to the sea.

Nov 10

Florence Paull Florence Paull (Nov 10 2017 2:54AM) : I think that the story implies that they had flooding in the house and they had to kill the crabs, almost like humans having to kill cockroaches when they get in the house. more

Mar 15

Aidan Young Aidan Young (Mar 15 2018 1:04AM) : That's a good point, maybe he just needed to kill them for selfdefense.

Mar 15

Aidan Young Aidan Young (Mar 15 2018 1:05AM) : I wonder who painted the art.

Nov 7

Jane White Jane White (Nov 07 2017 11:51PM) : The sea must have been far away, because the sky was dark when the Pelayo came back.

Jan 18

Dylan Perkins Dylan Perkins (Jan 18 2018 1:03AM) : Agreed because it first starts off with it big a rainy day and when Pelayo cam back it was dark

Feb 3

Bryn McCarthy Bryn McCarthy (Feb 03 2018 1:27AM) : That makes sense.

Nov 10

Brenda Paull Brenda Paull (Nov 10 2017 1:49AM) : Since it says "On the third day of rain...killed so many crabs inside the house" I can infer that flooding was bringing the crabs inside the house. more

Nov 10

Brenda Paull Brenda Paull (Nov 10 2017 1:51AM) : This shows that this is magical realism because it talks about the man's wings as if they were normal and commonplace. more

Nov 27

student Tycho Collins student Tycho Collins (Nov 27 2017 4:23PM) : I think the flooding brought the crabs into the house.

Nov 29

Student Kate Nelson Student Kate Nelson (Nov 29 2017 10:15PM) : Why would an angel want to take their baby? (A)

Nov 30

Brenda Paull Brenda Paull (Nov 30 2017 8:20PM) : Since the baby was sick they thought that he was sent to take the baby's soul away as in that the baby would die and he was an angel that took the dead up when their time came. more

It doesn’t make sense though because the baby got better after he came.

Dec 13

Mark Padgett Mark Padgett (Dec 13 2017 8:10AM) : How did the old man get his wing stuck in the mud? A

Dec 22

Olivia McNaughton Olivia McNaughton (Dec 22 2017 3:19AM) : Why did they have to kill all the crabs? Why couldn't they throw them back alive? A

Jan 20

Asiyah Herrera Asiyah Herrera (Jan 20 2018 12:54AM) : Maybe there were to many?

Dec 29

Jack Naglick Jack Naglick (Dec 29 2017 10:28PM) : In the real version, Marquez says that "The world had been sad since Tuesday." I really like this explanation, but it is not in this version. (S)

Jan 20

Asiyah Herrera Asiyah Herrera (Jan 20 2018 12:30AM) : I love this sentence

Jan 10

Karsyn Bierbaum Karsyn Bierbaum (Jan 10 2018 4:58AM) : I wonder why the people treated the angel so poorly, especially if they were religious.

Jan 10

Karsyn Bierbaum Karsyn Bierbaum (Jan 10 2018 5:00AM) : I wonder why the angel was there in the first place? And why could he have not left sooner?

Jan 30

Luke Ingermann Luke Ingermann (Jan 30 2018 11:05PM) : Comment 1 more

The start of the story was very intriguing.

Jan 30

Luke Ingermann Luke Ingermann (Jan 30 2018 11:06PM) : Why were the mans wings covered in mud?

Jan 30

Luke Ingermann Luke Ingermann (Jan 30 2018 11:07PM) : What's a rag picker?

Jan 30

Luke Ingermann Luke Ingermann (Jan 30 2018 11:07PM) : He seemed like he had gotten beat up or hurt by someone or something.

Jan 30

Luke Ingermann Luke Ingermann (Jan 30 2018 11:09PM) : Did the rain really knock someone down? [Edited]

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Dec 6

Hayden Anderson Hayden Anderson (Dec 06 2017 9:25PM) : I wonder why the they killed the crabs...

Jan 12

Isabel Arroyo Isabel Arroyo (Jan 12 2018 11:09PM) : I think this passage implies that there has been torrential rain for 3 days and there is so much water that it has flooded the house and lots of crabs have started to enter the house so the inhabitants are killing them, like how someone would kill bugs.

Jan 23

Damien NEZAR Damien NEZAR (Jan 23 2018 3:21PM) : . more

I think the rain was so bad that it was starting to cause miniature floods and cause leeks to start forming in the house which allowed water inside which then maybe the crabs were pulled in with the water into the house. (P)

Feb 16

Kate Southerland Kate Southerland (Feb 16 2018 12:56AM) : I am assuming that (in this case) the crabs are household pests, and that Pelayo and his wife are having to exterminate them. more

Jun 6

Jaden Klebba Jaden Klebba (Jun 06 2018 6:25AM) : Already the author is setting in the dynamic of the story. They live by the sea and they may not have the sturdiest house, or maybe it's in older times. Based on reading the biography of Gabriel Marquez, this is influenced by the times back then.

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Dec 6

Hayden Anderson Hayden Anderson (Dec 06 2017 9:26PM) : I would be frightened as well if i found a man with wings

Feb 3

Mason Kimball Mason Kimball (Feb 03 2018 12:10AM) : I would second that.

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Dec 14

Yerin Yang Yerin Yang (Dec 14 2017 9:08AM) : Here is the magical element of the story - an angel. C/S

Feb 5

Lauren Grover Lauren Grover (Feb 05 2018 1:57PM) : This is where the story transitions from realism to magical realism. C

Jun 5

Chia Chi Hsiao Chia Chi Hsiao (Jun 05 2018 8:39AM) : The way the author talks about the man's wings, it seems like it's very normal for someone to have wings.

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Dec 14

Yerin Yang Yerin Yang (Dec 14 2017 9:10AM) : I wonder why there were so many crabs inside the house in the first place. By "they" do they mean Pelayo and his family killing the crabs because they were stuck inside the house and had nothing else to do? A

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Dec 14

Yerin Yang Yerin Yang (Dec 14 2017 9:11AM) : The baby must have been dying, but was saved because of the old angel failing to come for him/her. S/P

Jan 10

Karsyn Bierbaum Karsyn Bierbaum (Jan 10 2018 5:00AM) : I agree, I wonder if the boy died after the angel left.

Jan 20

Asiyah Herrera Asiyah Herrera (Jan 20 2018 12:40AM) : Seems like boy was near death P

Jan 23

Damien NEZAR Damien NEZAR (Jan 23 2018 3:33PM) : In that era more

In those times especially in those European countries, they were very religious and believed in many things. There are 2 scenarios here, 1 is that it could be a real angel here to heal the child or 2 is that it is a mystical creature from somewhere beyond that coincidentally landed in the courtyard. (P)

Feb 5

Lauren Grover Lauren Grover (Feb 05 2018 2:00PM) : This is a good moment of suspense and tension in the story. When she says that the angel had come for the child, it makes me wonder what happened to the child, and if he or she was okay.

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Dec 22

Olivia McNaughton Olivia McNaughton (Dec 22 2017 3:26AM) : How would the smell make the baby sick? A

Jan 20

Asiyah Herrera Asiyah Herrera (Jan 20 2018 12:29AM) : Trigger/Hook? A

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Dec 22

Olivia McNaughton Olivia McNaughton (Dec 22 2017 3:29AM) : This must be the trigger for this story. [Edited]

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Jan 6

Tyler Bickham Tyler Bickham (Jan 06 2018 1:53AM) : It sounds like the neighbors do not like the angel.

Jan 18

Dylan Perkins Dylan Perkins (Jan 18 2018 1:05AM) : This sounds like everyone in their town either does not keep secrets or they tattle on each other.

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Jun 5

Chia Chi Hsiao Chia Chi Hsiao (Jun 05 2018 8:41AM) : Wht is a ragpicker? And how are they dressed?

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Jan 12

Michael Simutis Michael Simutis (Jan 12 2018 4:03AM) : This story begins in a completely ordinary manner, to emphasize the realistic situation the characters are originally in. S

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Jan 14

Elijah McMillin Elijah McMillin (Jan 14 2018 1:10AM) : It seems like some words are missing in this sentence.

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Jan 14

Elijah McMillin Elijah McMillin (Jan 14 2018 1:12AM) : I thought that it was hypothetical when they said wings.

Jan 28

Lilla Carroll Lilla Carroll (Jan 28 2018 2:44AM) : I love the unacknowledged absurdity of this piece! It makes the story almost humorous, despite its dark, unhappy tone. [Edited]

Feb 3

Mason Kimball Mason Kimball (Feb 03 2018 12:11AM) : True. The author acts like this is all normal!

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Jan 23

Damien NEZAR Damien NEZAR (Jan 23 2018 3:24PM) : Why did he kill? more

Why did the boy kill the crabs, did he eat? Why did he kill them if he was going to throw them in the sea anyway ? (A)

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Jan 23

Damien NEZAR Damien NEZAR (Jan 23 2018 3:29PM) : Kindness more

I like how the people ignored the wings of the old man, like even though the old man was different they decided to help him anyways, they took the difference away from the equation and helped him. Which I think people should be more like that in our world ©

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Feb 24

Aly Getty Aly Getty (Feb 24 2018 1:47AM) : The smell of what? The crabs?

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Feb 24

Aly Getty Aly Getty (Feb 24 2018 1:50AM) : Could this old man be an angel?

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Feb 24

Aly Getty Aly Getty (Feb 24 2018 1:52AM) : This answers my previous question, "Could he be an angel?"

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Jun 5

Chia Chi Hsiao Chia Chi Hsiao (Jun 05 2018 8:47AM) : why is it a wise decision to kill the angel?

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Jun 6

Jaden Klebba Jaden Klebba (Jun 06 2018 6:26AM) : I thought it would be an animal. What are these wings? Is it a blanket that looks like wings? Is it symbolizing something bigger?

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Jun 6

Jaden Klebba Jaden Klebba (Jun 06 2018 6:28AM) : I wonder how sick the baby is. How could the angel help?

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Nov 7

Jane White Jane White (Nov 07 2017 11:52PM) : Why would they club him to death?

Nov 7

Jane White Jane White (Nov 07 2017 11:53PM) : I don't think this man is the devil.

Feb 3

Mason Kimball Mason Kimball (Feb 03 2018 12:13AM) : I agree, the devil is supposed to look appealing to man, not some ugly old man with wings. Probably a good angel.

Nov 27

student Tycho Collins student Tycho Collins (Nov 27 2017 4:24PM) : They think he is a creature and just because he has wings he is not treated good.

Jan 14

Elijah McMillin Elijah McMillin (Jan 14 2018 1:38AM) : It may be one of those things like the way people were treated several hundred years ago if they were believed to be witches.

Jun 7

Chia Chi Hsiao Chia Chi Hsiao (Jun 07 2018 7:04AM) : Because they thought he was here to take the child away.

Nov 10

Brenda Paull Brenda Paull (Nov 10 2017 1:59AM) : If they thought that he was an angel, how did they explain his dirty and miserable appearance which would be the exact opposite of an angel. more

Nov 29

Student Kate Nelson Student Kate Nelson (Nov 29 2017 10:19PM) : They said he fell out of the sky because of the rain and that he was so old. I do see your point, though, because he wanted to take their child. I don't understand why an angel would do that.

Feb 3

Mason Kimball Mason Kimball (Feb 03 2018 12:14AM) : Actually that's not exactly true. Angels aren't supposed to be aesthetically pleasing. This could very well be an angel.

Nov 10

Florence Paull Florence Paull (Nov 10 2017 2:42AM) : I wonder how Pelayo and Elisenda didn't feel bad that they decided to take advantage of the old man because they could make money out of it. It only seems like common sense to help someone in need, not use them. more

Nov 10

Florence Paull Florence Paull (Nov 10 2017 2:45AM) : These "most unfortunate and sick people on earth" must have been part of 'Magical Realism' because they aren't a normal kind of sick in our world. [Edited] more

Dec 13

Mark Padgett Mark Padgett (Dec 13 2017 9:37AM) : Why would the people want to club him to death? A

Dec 22

Olivia McNaughton Olivia McNaughton (Dec 22 2017 3:45AM) : I don't understand why they would club him to death.

Dec 29

Jack Naglick Jack Naglick (Dec 29 2017 10:18PM) : It's odd that they don't have the heart to club him to death but they treat him like a prisoner. (S) [Edited]

Dec 29

Jack Naglick Jack Naglick (Dec 29 2017 10:20PM) : Even though people are treating the angel like a circus animal, they think that he should be made mayor of the world or a five-star general. If they truly thought this, wouldn't they show more respect? (A)

Jan 10

Karsyn Bierbaum Karsyn Bierbaum (Jan 10 2018 5:04AM) : I think the people were afraid of the angel and did not like the unknown, so they thought it was better if he was killed. I think that's why the woman was happy that he left in the end and did not try to stop him.

Jan 12

Isabel Arroyo Isabel Arroyo (Jan 12 2018 11:19PM) : I don't think that they actually know what an angel looks like and they are just assuming. You can also clearly tell that he needs help and is not getting any, and they should try to help him understand what is going on.

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Nov 30

Asher Merchent Asher Merchent (Nov 30 2017 10:56PM) : By comparing the angel a "circus animal", we get a real sense of how the people viewed and treated him.

Dec 13

Mark Padgett Mark Padgett (Dec 13 2017 9:34AM) : They seem to treat him very poorly. People did not care about him at all. C

Jan 10

Karsyn Bierbaum Karsyn Bierbaum (Jan 10 2018 5:06AM) : The people seem to treat anyone who is different or unlike them poorly or like they are just there for their entertainment.

Jan 12

Isabel Arroyo Isabel Arroyo (Jan 12 2018 11:13PM) : I think that the neighbors and family will soon be punished for their actions of not being kind to the angel. I also think that it is going to a lesson that just because someone looks different doesn't mean you should treat them differently.

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Dec 6

Hayden Anderson Hayden Anderson (Dec 06 2017 9:28PM) : That is sad...

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Dec 14

Yerin Yang Yerin Yang (Dec 14 2017 9:13AM) : I feel terribly sorry for the angel. The simile powerfully describes how he was treated in the story. C

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Jan 6

Tyler Bickham Tyler Bickham (Jan 06 2018 1:56AM) : Why did he speak Latin?

Jan 12

Michael Simutis Michael Simutis (Jan 12 2018 4:04AM) : Latin is the official language of the Catholic Church, so it makes sense an angel on earth would speak it. L

Jan 18

Dylan Perkins Dylan Perkins (Jan 18 2018 1:23AM) : well since he is an angel you would think he would speak every language.

Jan 23

Damien NEZAR Damien NEZAR (Jan 23 2018 3:41PM) : I never knew that. more

I never knew that, I was wondering why they called him a fake when he couldn’t speak latin. Thanks for the info. ©

Feb 5

Lauren Grover Lauren Grover (Feb 05 2018 2:01PM) : It's interesting that the priest does not think that the man seemed like an angel. I wonder what he thinks an angel would be like. A

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Jan 6

Tyler Bickham Tyler Bickham (Jan 06 2018 2:06AM) : This sounds like Jesus healing the blind man.

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Jan 12

Michael Simutis Michael Simutis (Jan 12 2018 4:08AM) : This is a clear example of opportunism, where you take advantage of the situation no matter what it is. C

Jan 28

Lilla Carroll Lilla Carroll (Jan 28 2018 2:51AM) : I think that this is a comment on people's willingness to cause another harm in search of personal gain.

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Jan 12

Isabel Arroyo Isabel Arroyo (Jan 12 2018 11:16PM) : I think it's very important that the author chose to use the word prisoner and pitiful to describe the angle. This further shows that he is being treated unfairly and needs to be helped and treated better.

Jan 23

Damien NEZAR Damien NEZAR (Jan 23 2018 3:39PM) : I agree more

I agree with you, at first they believed it was an angel but then they treated hi badly and poorly. (S)

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Jan 18

Dylan Perkins Dylan Perkins (Jan 18 2018 1:21AM) : The passage here shows the Pelayo and Elisenda are trying to help the angel. So they gave him a raft some fresh food and water.

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Feb 3

Bryn McCarthy Bryn McCarthy (Feb 03 2018 1:28AM) : I was confused on why they didn't just trust him.

Mar 15

Aidan Young Aidan Young (Mar 15 2018 1:07AM) : Maybe because he's a man with wings and he just fell out of the sky.

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Feb 24

Aly Getty Aly Getty (Feb 24 2018 1:56AM) : I wonder if this is foreshadowing?

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Jun 6

Jaden Klebba Jaden Klebba (Jun 06 2018 6:30AM) : I feel bad for the old man! He was only there to help. Pelayo was negatively influenced by the majority's judgment. I wonder why the consequence of having an angel in your house would be death.

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Nov 7

Jane White Jane White (Nov 07 2017 11:57PM) : I feel that since so many people seem to revere him, they should give him a better place to stay. Keeping him in the chicken coop seems harsh.

Nov 10

Brenda Paull Brenda Paull (Nov 10 2017 1:55AM) : I agree. People can really be cruel. If they thought that he was an angel I would have thought that they would try to treat him well so as not to anger him.

Nov 17

Andrew Bailey Andrew Bailey (Nov 17 2017 8:02PM) : They burnt his side with an iron!!

Nov 30

Asher Merchent Asher Merchent (Nov 30 2017 11:21PM) : A lot of the words and actions reminded me of how people would treat an animal they did not care about. They caged him in, branded him, and fed him things no human would eat. It was like they were running a zoo, charging people to come see him.

Nov 10

Florence Paull Florence Paull (Nov 10 2017 2:33AM) : What does the illustration have to do with the story? more

Nov 17

Andrew Bailey Andrew Bailey (Nov 17 2017 7:43PM) : That must have been a lot of money if they had filled their rooms.

Nov 27

student Tycho Collins student Tycho Collins (Nov 27 2017 4:21PM) : Why was he treated so badly?

Nov 29

Student Kate Nelson Student Kate Nelson (Nov 29 2017 10:26PM) : I think that the "wise neighbor" isn't really that wise. The story doesn't say much about him/her and he/she. Why would angels eat mothballs any way? (P) (A)

Dec 13

Mark Padgett Mark Padgett (Dec 13 2017 9:41AM) : It is kind of shocking how even the nice, kind people would throw rocks at the old man. C

Jan 12

Isabel Arroyo Isabel Arroyo (Jan 12 2018 11:24PM) : I think it is important that even kind people threw rocks at him, this shows how when things happen people act out of their nature for some reason. I also think its despicable that people tried to make money off of him.

Jan 20

Asiyah Herrera Asiyah Herrera (Jan 20 2018 12:41AM) : Situations can change people. Sometimes a kind person may do something evil when the situation calls for it.

Jan 28

Lilla Carroll Lilla Carroll (Jan 28 2018 2:48AM) : Do you think there is any connection between the old man appearing and the sick child waking up without a fever?

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Dec 14

Yerin Yang Yerin Yang (Dec 14 2017 9:15AM) : This shows how terrible and cruel humans can be when they want to get something. C

Feb 3

Mason Kimball Mason Kimball (Feb 03 2018 12:18AM) : That's true, people are cruel.

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Jan 6

Tyler Bickham Tyler Bickham (Jan 06 2018 2:09AM) : Why did people treat the angel this way?

Mar 15

Aidan Young Aidan Young (Mar 15 2018 1:07AM) : Maybe because they weren't used to angles

Jan 18

Dylan Perkins Dylan Perkins (Jan 18 2018 1:26AM) : They treated the angel that way because the angel represents in the story Jesus and they didnt the same exact thing to Jesus as they did here. And this is not unusual to do back then because if anyone had something different then anyone they would punish

Mar 15

Aidan Young Aidan Young (Mar 15 2018 1:06AM) : Why are there so many weird pictures?

Jan 28

Lilla Carroll Lilla Carroll (Jan 28 2018 2:55AM) : Again, this story shows how humans can become selfish and take advantage of their power when they want something for themselves. more

The fact that they were picking his feathers out in hopes that they might be healed is a prime example. Throwing rocks and burning him when he sleeps also shows how people think that everything is responsible for their happiness and entertainment.

Feb 3

Mason Kimball Mason Kimball (Feb 03 2018 12:20AM) : That is a very good statement on humanity, I think literally everybody should see that comment.

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Bryn McCarthy Bryn McCarthy (Feb 03 2018 1:29AM) : I didn't understand this image and how it fit into the story

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Feb 16

Kate Southerland Kate Southerland (Feb 16 2018 1:00AM) : He is being treated inhumanely, and viewed by people as if he was part of a circus. more

Mar 10

Erin Coleman Erin Coleman (Mar 10 2018 12:03AM) : This is so sad. Why would people do such a thing? These "kind" people showed who they really were during this moment.

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Feb 24

Aly Getty Aly Getty (Feb 24 2018 1:59AM) : This is sad to read. It's hard to believe how inconsiderate and selfish people are.

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Jun 6

Jaden Klebba Jaden Klebba (Jun 06 2018 6:43AM) : So far, the angel has done nothing to harm. It's weird that the neighbor and priest knew so much about angels yet everyone was so amazed. Maybe it was a common legend or tale told in their town.

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Nov 7

Jane White Jane White (Nov 07 2017 11:59PM) : I can see how this is magical realism. This story is making having wings and other seemingly magical things happen seem normal.

Nov 10

Brenda Paull Brenda Paull (Nov 10 2017 2:02AM) : Is the story trying to suggest that he was a real angel? more

Nov 10

Florence Paull Florence Paull (Nov 10 2017 2:47AM) : This woman who was changed into a spider is also Magical Realism.

Nov 10

Florence Paull Florence Paull (Nov 10 2017 2:49AM) : How long did this take place if they had the time to build a mansion? more

Nov 17

Andrew Bailey Andrew Bailey (Nov 17 2017 7:45PM) : They put bars on the windows so the angels wouldnt get in....

Nov 29

Student Kate Nelson Student Kate Nelson (Nov 29 2017 10:31PM) : I am confused on whether he is an angel or not because his miracles don't seem that real. (A)

Dec 22

Olivia McNaughton Olivia McNaughton (Dec 22 2017 3:47AM) : I understand why they categorize this story as Magical Realism.

Dec 29

Jack Naglick Jack Naglick (Dec 29 2017 10:41PM) : Pelayo and Elisenda are spending their money frivolously on themselves. Will they help the angel? (A)

Jan 28

Lilla Carroll Lilla Carroll (Jan 28 2018 2:58AM) : This line, "Maybe he is just a Norwegian with wings?" is a perfect example of Magical realism. more

The author has taken a realistic setting and very real human behaviors and paired it with fantasy.

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Dec 6

Hayden Anderson Hayden Anderson (Dec 06 2017 9:32PM) : That in fairness should not mean anything... nobody should be persecuted for having no belly button. Very petty

Feb 3

Bryn McCarthy Bryn McCarthy (Feb 03 2018 1:31AM) : I very much agree.

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Jan 12

Michael Simutis Michael Simutis (Jan 12 2018 4:13AM) : The owners do not care about the angel. That is why there is no mention of them being sad at the end, because they do not care. C

Feb 5

Lauren Grover Lauren Grover (Feb 05 2018 2:03PM) : I didn't make this connection before reading your comment. Thanks for pointing that out. C

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Feb 16

Kate Southerland Kate Southerland (Feb 16 2018 1:02AM) : Why does this version of the text include these annotations/analyzations on the side? Is this an excerpt from a textbook? more

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Mar 10

Erin Coleman Erin Coleman (Mar 10 2018 12:54AM) : This is a good lesson for us to not lie. I wouldn't want to be a tarantula as big as a ram!

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Mar 10

Erin Coleman Erin Coleman (Mar 10 2018 12:55AM) : I wonder why the angel performed such strange miracles?

Jun 6

Jaden Klebba Jaden Klebba (Jun 06 2018 6:48AM) : I think the message here is that even though we all have certain troubles, there are other things that we should be grateful for, even if it's not the answer to our main problem. more

Or that everyone has something that disables them from happiness, but there are other things that you should be grateful for to overcome that disability.

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Nov 8

Jane White Jane White (Nov 08 2017 12:01AM) : If he's an angel, why are they treating him so badly.

Nov 17

Andrew Bailey Andrew Bailey (Nov 17 2017 7:46PM) : The people did not know if he was a hoax or not. So they, being ignorant human beings, decided to mistreat him.

Dec 13

Mark Padgett Mark Padgett (Dec 13 2017 9:42AM) : It's really sad. C

Nov 17

Andrew Bailey Andrew Bailey (Nov 17 2017 8:03PM) : The people wouldnt treat a dog like this.

Nov 30

Asher Merchent Asher Merchent (Nov 30 2017 11:26PM) : I think you are right about that. It seems strange to treat something holy with such disregard. They seemed to treat themselves and their child well. They didn't even clean the coop for the angel's benefit, only so they wouldn't have to smell it.

Dec 29

Jack Naglick Jack Naglick (Dec 29 2017 10:42PM) : I think that they may have been scared of the angel. Perhaps they thought that the angel would take their child. (P)

Feb 3

Mason Kimball Mason Kimball (Feb 03 2018 12:23AM) : Remember, these are likely Christian people, meaning they believe in angels, but they also believe in demons, demons are supposed to be deceitfully angel - like, so I wouldn't judge them too harshly for treating this being the way they treated it.

Nov 27

student Tycho Collins student Tycho Collins (Nov 27 2017 4:22PM) : This story shows that even the man that brought the family wealth was treated so disrespectfully.

Mar 10

Erin Coleman Erin Coleman (Mar 10 2018 1:17AM) : I thought the same thing. This shows that the family didn't care about or appreciate the angel.

Nov 27

student Tycho Collins student Tycho Collins (Nov 27 2017 4:25PM) : I wonder what happened after since it is a mystery at the end that people wanna know "life but an imaginary dot over the sea".

Nov 29

Student Kate Nelson Student Kate Nelson (Nov 29 2017 10:35PM) : Why is the family bothering to keep him somewhere if he is an annoyance? If they are going to treat him badly, they should give him to someone else who will treat him kindly. (A)

Feb 16

Kate Southerland Kate Southerland (Feb 16 2018 1:04AM) : This is a truly despicable way to treat anyone, let alone an angel. The characters in the story must have somehow "taught him a lesson" about patience (again, in an awful way) and that is how he is supposedly retiring to heaven/flying away. more

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Nov 30

Asher Merchent Asher Merchent (Nov 30 2017 11:13PM) : These lines really sum up the concept of magical realism, the idea that there is something logical and natural (the design of his wings) mixed with something fantastic (that a man would even have wings).

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Nov 30

Asher Merchent Asher Merchent (Nov 30 2017 11:17PM) : Maybe the angel had come to Earth as part of his punishment. It had been mentioned earlier that he might be a fallen angel. His endurance and patience may have been enough to earn his place back in Heaven.

Feb 3

Mason Kimball Mason Kimball (Feb 03 2018 12:25AM) : This doesn't happen, once an angel falls it's condemned to hell for eternity, however, since this isn't based on real-life, it could happen here.

Feb 5

Lauren Grover Lauren Grover (Feb 05 2018 2:05PM) : This could be the case, but with magical realism, there are an infinite number of possibilities. The concept of this genre is so interesting to me, because it offers so many possibilities.

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Dec 6

Hayden Anderson Hayden Anderson (Dec 06 2017 9:35PM) : Probably an angel that came to earth as a punishment for something he had done...

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Jan 6

Tyler Bickham Tyler Bickham (Jan 06 2018 2:20AM) : It sounds like the other angels forgave him.

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Jan 12

Michael Simutis Michael Simutis (Jan 12 2018 4:14AM) : No one is this story actually did the right thing, they all just treated him inhumanely, but in different ways. C

Jan 14

Elijah McMillin Elijah McMillin (Jan 14 2018 2:37AM) : I know it's horrible how they treated him like in the beginning when they clubbed him.

Feb 3

Bryn McCarthy Bryn McCarthy (Feb 03 2018 1:30AM) : I'm not validating at all what they did, but in the back of their minds, they were probably scared and had no idea how to handle the situation.

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Jan 14

Elijah McMillin Elijah McMillin (Jan 14 2018 2:35AM) : I never fully understood, but is the guy a angel because the doctor doesn't understand it.

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Mar 10

Erin Coleman Erin Coleman (Mar 10 2018 12:57AM) : I feel very bad for the angel. They knew he was very old, so why did they neglect him like that?

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Jun 5

Chia Chi Hsiao Chia Chi Hsiao (Jun 05 2018 9:05AM) : why wasn't she surprised to see the angel fly after all this time?

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Jun 5

Chia Chi Hsiao Chia Chi Hsiao (Jun 05 2018 9:07AM) : Why did she think of him as a annoyance? he didn't do anything to them but actually made them rich.

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Jack Naglick Jack Naglick (Dec 29 2017 10:45PM) : I found the real version of this online. The language is a lot more descriptive. I would highly recommend it. (C)

Feb 16

Kate Southerland Kate Southerland (Feb 16 2018 12:57AM) : I too had to find another version, as I was unable to read this one (too many annotations.) more

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