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Native American Mascots: Pride or Prejudice


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Native American mascots: Pride or prejudice?

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By Moni Basu, CNN

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(CNN) – Suzan Shown Harjo remembers when she walked into a store with her grandfather in El Reno, Oklahoma. She wanted to get something cool to drink on a summer day. It was the early 1950s and the storekeepers told the 6-year-old she had to leave.

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Chloe Byrom Chloe Byrom (Sep 12 2017 3:06PM) : in this paragraph she uses pathos to make you feel sad that as a young 6 year old girl she couldnt even get a cold drink
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Tyniah Wilson Tyniah Wilson (Sep 12 2017 3:24PM) : I agree
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Emily Olivieri Emily Olivieri (Sep 12 2017 3:11PM) : This paragraph is showing Pathos. more

This paragraph is showing pathos because it is including that the store walker had said that awful thing to a “6 year old”. Obviously when you include how young the child is you’re going to show sympathy for them.

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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 5:11PM) : I agree. I believe she may have added the age to get more sympathy from readers.
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Joshua Lazenby Joshua Lazenby (Sep 12 2017 8:49PM) : In paragraphs 1,2 and 3 Harjo talks about how she was discriminated against at a store. more

This is an example of pathos because she uses her experience as a little girl to make the reader feel sympathy for her. It helps even more since this is at the beginning of the article before any claims are made.

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β€œNo black redskins in here,” they said.

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Peyton Player Peyton Player (Sep 12 2017 3:07PM) : In this paragraph, the storekeeper is saying that no dark-skinned Native Americans in the store. more

The author is using pathos in this paragraph by provoking anger in the reader against racism. This sentence is basically the forefront of the authors argument.

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Julie Hilliard Julie Hilliard (Sep 12 2017 3:25PM) : i agree the author is using pathos
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Mary Robinson Mary Robinson (Sep 12 2017 3:29PM) : yeah. πŸ‘
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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:19PM) : Agree more

I agree

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At that moment, Harjo felt small, unsafe, afraid. Because she was a dark-skinned Native American – Cheyenne and Hodulgee Muscogee – she was being identified by just her coloring. She wasn’t even a whole human being. Not even her grandpa, whom she saw as all-powerful, could do anything to protect her.

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Tyniah Wilson Tyniah Wilson (Sep 12 2017 3:19PM) : This paragraph makes the reader feel bad for the little 6 year old girl which means it is using pathos. more
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Chloe Byrom Chloe Byrom (Sep 12 2017 3:28PM) : i agree they use pathos
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Kailyn Hyman Kailyn Hyman (Sep 12 2017 3:26PM) : this is an polsydenton more

This is an example of a polysyndenton. It shows that serious the matter of the situation was.

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Emma Gutshall Emma Gutshall (Sep 13 2017 9:09PM) : polysyndeton more

Polysyndeton means: "Repetition of conjunctions in close succession, especially when most of them could be replaced with a comma.

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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:12PM) : Disagree more

I politely disagree because there isn’t any FANBOYS

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Emma Gutshall Emma Gutshall (Sep 12 2017 3:28PM) : Pathos more

The author used pathos to make us feel bad for the poor 6 year old who felt worthless at the time.

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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:08PM) : Pathos more

This makes the reader feel bad for the reader because she was discriminated against when she was so young

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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:26PM) : Asyndeton more

In the first sentence there is ayndeton because there is no conjunctions.

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Caroline Estridge Caroline Estridge (Sep 12 2017 3:26PM) : Polysendenton more

This is an example of a polysendenton because there is no conjunctions in the sentence where it could have added the conjunction “and”.

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Zachary Brown Zachary Brown (Sep 12 2017 4:21PM) : Basu is using the real life story of a little girl to show the prejudice toward Native Americans. more

This real life account shows the struggle Native American people have to experience. This shows logos because the author is using quotations,and opinions from experts.

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Later in her life, that incident made her angry. Angry enough for Harjo to launch a lifelong mission to protect her people.

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Julie Hilliard Julie Hilliard (Sep 12 2017 3:04PM) : the author is using Ethos to show her passion for protecting people and their beliefs.
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Julie Hilliard Julie Hilliard (Sep 12 2017 3:15PM) : she is expressing how mad she was after being identified only as a color. more

the author is using Ethos to show her passion for protecting people and their beliefs

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Part of her work took aim at sporting teams that use Native Americans as mascots. With the start of the baseball season this week, some of those teams have been front and center. The Cleveland Indians, for instance, feature a smiling Indian dubbed Chief Wahoo, criticized by Native Americans as a racist caricature.

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The most offensive example of a mascot, says Harjo, is the one used by Washington’s football team. She has been fighting for years to get the Redskins to change their name.

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Julie Hilliard Julie Hilliard (Sep 12 2017 3:07PM) : The topic is how the redskins is a horrible mascot. And how the word redskins is very offensive and should be avoid being used. [Edited] more

This logos because it is a recent topic and also many other people have shared their opinion about the mascot

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Mary Robinson Mary Robinson (Sep 12 2017 3:28PM) : I agree.
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Chloe Byrom Chloe Byrom (Sep 12 2017 3:29PM) : this is using logos
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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 5:06PM) : This would be an appeal to emotion because she is attempting to persuade readers to feel the same as she does by telling them how offensive it is. [Edited]
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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 5:09PM) : If you were to say that it was logos, it would be because "Redskins" is their actual team name. However, I think this is more pathos because she's stating the way she feels in an attempt to get others to feel the same.
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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:14PM) : Agree more

I agree

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The R-word – she can’t even bring herself to say it – is the same as the N-word, says Harjo, president of Morning Star Institute, a national Native American rights organization.

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Jordan Smith Jordan Smith (Sep 12 2017 3:08PM) : Pathos more

Moni uses pathos because many people can relate to the feeling of being called something degrading, like the N word, thus making people understand what she is going through.

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Caroline Estridge Caroline Estridge (Sep 12 2017 3:28PM) : @JordanSmith more

I agree but i also feel that this could also be an example of parallelism because it shows the similarity in both words

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Emma Gutshall Emma Gutshall (Sep 13 2017 8:54PM) : Agree more

I agree with your comment.

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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:15PM) : Agree more

I agree

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Chloe Byrom Chloe Byrom (Sep 12 2017 3:12PM) : shes uses a common word heard today that is derogatory to compare so you understand how hurtful it is and pathos is used because it makes you mad that the offensive word is still being used
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Caroline Estridge Caroline Estridge (Sep 12 2017 3:14PM) : @ChloeByrom more

I agree with this.

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Joshua Lazenby Joshua Lazenby (Sep 12 2017 3:13PM) : In this paragraph Harjo is stating that the "r-word" is as offensive to Native Americans as the "n-word" is to African Americans more

This is an example of ethos because the speaker is Native American which makes her an authority on what is offensive to Native Americans because she is one.

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Julie Hilliard Julie Hilliard (Sep 12 2017 3:21PM) : i agree that this is ethos and it gives her authority to speak on this topic
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Emily Olivieri Emily Olivieri (Sep 12 2017 3:14PM) : This paragraph is using parallelism more

This paragraph shows parallelism because it is putting the R word and the N word close together to show the reader how awful they both are.

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Jordan Smith Jordan Smith (Sep 12 2017 3:16PM) : parallelism more

I agree.

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Peyton Player Peyton Player (Sep 13 2017 10:48AM) : I agree that this is an example of parallelism.
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Emma Gutshall Emma Gutshall (Sep 12 2017 3:19PM) : In this paragraph she uses ethos because she states her position, president of Morning Star Institute, to show that she knows what she is talking about.
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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:28PM) : Pathos more

She is making you mad and telling you how R word is like saying the N word to native Americans

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She finds it unbelievable that more than half a century after she was told to get out of that El Reno store, after decades of civil rights struggles and progress on race relations, Americans have no problem with rooting for a team called the Redskins.

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Caroline Estridge Caroline Estridge (Sep 12 2017 3:08PM) : Pathos more

This is an appeal to the emotions so this would be a rhetoric example of pathos. She explains that after America has made so many strides toward racial equality there’s still a team named after a culturally offensive term many people arn’t bothered by but should be.

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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 5:03PM) : I agree. The author wants readers to realize how offensive it is.
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Jordan Smith Jordan Smith (Sep 12 2017 3:14PM) : Ethos more

Moni uses ethos to show what has happened to her and her people and how America does not make a big deal out of it because we root for a team called the Redskins.

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Ari McNeal Ari McNeal (Sep 12 2017 3:15PM) : She uses the fact that she was kicked out of a store for being Red Skinned, but that can be the name of a football team [Edited] more

. This is logos because it is showing real life examples and giving factual data. It gives the audience the perception of either, “That makes sense” or " That doesn’t mean anything"

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Mary Robinson Mary Robinson (Sep 12 2017 3:27PM) : good point
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Peyton Player Peyton Player (Sep 13 2017 10:50AM) : I don't think that this is logos because there is no statistics or numbers.
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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 3:18PM) : In paragraph 9 the author uses pathos to help the reader understand how derogatory that name is towards the Native Americans.
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Chloe Byrom Chloe Byrom (Sep 12 2017 3:30PM) : i agree
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Peyton Player Peyton Player (Sep 13 2017 10:51AM) : I agree. It makes the reader feel some type of sympathy for the little girl.
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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:30PM) : Pathos more

She is trying to work you up by telling you how long since its been the first racial discrimination incident.

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Fans say the name is an honorific. But the Merriam-Webster dictionary says this: β€œThe word redskin is very offensive and should be avoided.” And to many Native Americans, nothing could be more derogatory than the use of that word.

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Caroline Estridge Caroline Estridge (Sep 12 2017 3:19PM) : Allusion more

This can apply to allusion because she id referencing Merriam-Webster which is a well-known published dictionary to prove her point that the word is “very offensive and should be avoided”, contrary to the fan’s opinion.

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Emma Gutshall Emma Gutshall (Sep 13 2017 9:03PM) : agree more

I agree with this comment but when I looked up the word “redskin” it only said “usually offensive”.

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Emma Gutshall Emma Gutshall (Sep 12 2017 3:23PM) : Logos more

I think that she uses logos in this paragraph by quoting the definition of redskin from the Merriam-Webster dictionary.

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Tyniah Wilson Tyniah Wilson (Sep 12 2017 3:26PM) : I agree
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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 3:24PM) : Harjo is using logos to show readers that this word really is offensive to Native Americans and prove the point that it should be avoided.
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β€œThe Washington team – it’s the king of the mountain,” Harjo says. β€œWhen this one goes, others will.”

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The controversy over Native American names in sports is longstanding and surfaces in headlines now and then, as it did in December when the Atlanta Braves baseball team was reportedly considering bringing back a dated β€œscreaming Indian” logo for batting practice caps.

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Zachary Brown Zachary Brown (Sep 12 2017 4:29PM) : The author is showing that the problem of racist names in sports is a major issue, but is making it seem like something that just passes in the news. more

This sentence is an example of a paralipsis. Basu’s whole article is about the effect of racist names used in sports. However, this sentence portrays the issue as a minor problem. Also, this paragraph shows why the racist sports movement can’t fully get off the ground, not enough support.

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Zachary Brown Zachary Brown (Sep 12 2017 5:01PM) : Basu shows the problems involving the "Anti Racist Team" movement, lack of support. She then uses an example to stress her point. more

The author uses an allusion in this paragraph. The example of the Braves old logo is a reference to a historical event that changed the use of logos in sports.

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Or when Amanda Blackhorse, a 31-year-old Navajo social worker, went to Washington last month to attend a hearing of the Trademark Trial and Appeal Board. She has petitioned to cancel the Redskins trademark on grounds that the name is racist. Harjo filed a similar petition in 1992 and won, but she later lost in the appeals process.

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Harjo was defeated in the courts, but public opinion has been shifting steadily on the matter.

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In March, several lawmakers introduced a bill in Congress that would amend the Trademark Act of 1946 to ban the term β€œredskin” in a mark because it is disparaging of native people. Among the sponsors of the bill is civil rights activist Rep. John Lewis, D-Georgia.

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Robert Rachals Robert Rachals (Sep 12 2017 3:27PM) : Pathos more

This is pathos because “it is disparaging of native people” and convinces the reader it is racist.

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Harjo says she hopes the legislation will accomplish what litigation has failed to do so far.

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If passed, the bill would force the Washington football team to discard its trademarked name and ban the use of any offensive term in any future trademarks.

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Proponents believe that Native American mascots pay homage to the people and help promote a better understanding of those who dominated America before Europeans landed.

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Mary Robinson Mary Robinson (Sep 12 2017 3:23PM) : In this image you see a common racist stereotype. more

The mascot of the Cleveland Indians is characterized by the author as a racist caricature. It’s blatantly red skin and feather headband are “racially insensitive”.

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Trevor Valentine Trevor Valentine (Sep 13 2017 9:20PM) : Agree more

I agree

The Cleveland Indians mascot, Chief Wahoo, has been criticized as a racist caricature.

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Emily Olivieri Emily Olivieri (Sep 12 2017 3:19PM) : This paragraph could show imagery more

This paragraph could show imagery because it is describing the racist caricature of the cheif.

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But opponents say the mascots perpetuate stereotypes that are void of context and history. They argue that even if the mascots themselves are not racially insensitive, they portray native people as one-dimensional.

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Zachary Brown Zachary Brown (Sep 12 2017 3:29PM) : In this paragraph, the author is stating that even if the mascots of sports teams are not racist, they paint a shallow picture of Native American culture. [Edited] more

This paragraph illustrates the power of perception. Depending on how a spectator perceives the mascot will influence how the world sees it. If people see the mascots as racist, then the rest of the world will see it as racist. Basu uses pathos to connect to the audience. By inserting the idea of perspective, she allows the audience to think about the different arguments.

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β€œA good many Americans don’t know any Indians,” says Kevin Gover, who heads the Smithsonian Institution’s National Museum of the American Indian.

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β€œThe Indian you see most often in Washington, D.C., is at a football game – at the expense of real Indians, real history, real culture. The petty stereotype has become expected.”

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Emily Olivieri Emily Olivieri (Sep 12 2017 3:17PM) : This paragraph is showing Pathos more

This paragraph is showing Pathos because it says “the petty stereotype has become expected”. That makes me feel sympathy for indians because their culture is obviously very important to them and people are just throwing their feathers and cultural costumes around for fun.

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Julie Hilliard Julie Hilliard (Sep 12 2017 3:24PM) : i agree that this is pathos
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Julie Hilliard Julie Hilliard (Sep 12 2017 3:19PM) : He is saying that the most common Indian you see is in Washington dc at a football game more

He is using logos because most people just root for the team because it is there home team or they like the mascot. But he is saying if you are going to root for a team you need to know the background of the team.

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In February, the Smithsonian museum hosted a symposium on racist stereotypes and cultural appropriation in American sports. The idea was to make people think about how these stereotypes can be damaging to Indians.

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β€œKids grow up and think it’s OK,” Gover says. β€œIt’s not OK.”

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There used to be more than 3,000 teams with Native American names and mascots. That’s down to about 900 now – but that’s still 900 too many for Gover.

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Robert Rachals Robert Rachals (Sep 12 2017 3:22PM) : Logos more

This is an example of logos because it uses factual data to persuade the reader that there are too many racist Native American names and they need to be changed.

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Collin Spirek Collin Spirek (Sep 12 2017 3:26PM) : in this paragraph the reader uses logos by using stats to get her point across.
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He grew up, also in Oklahoma, and recalled how the University of Oklahoma became the first collegiate team to drop its unofficial mascot, Little Red, a student who dressed as an Indian chief and danced on the sidelines during football games.

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Collin Spirek Collin Spirek (Sep 14 2017 8:39AM) : in this paragraph the reader uses ethos because she gives her side of the argument using her belifs
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Protests on campus forced the demise of Little Red. In 2005, Oklahoma adopted two costumed horses, Boomer and Sooner, as mascots who represented the real horses that pulled the Sooner Schooner. But many students didn’t take to them.

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One of them was Royce Young, who wrote about the university’s β€œmascot crisis” in an online forum in 2007:

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β€œBut why can’t OU bring back Little Red? Oklahoma prides itself on being β€˜Native America.’ American Indian heritage is something that is more prevalent in this state than any other in the nation. Would it be so wrong to have Native American imagery representing β€˜Native America?’ "

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Peyton Player Peyton Player (Sep 12 2017 3:18PM) : In this paragraph, a student from the University of Oklahoma is describing how he wants the old mascot back and that he doesn't understand why it was wrong to have this imagery and this mascot. more

In this paragraph, the student is using a rhetorical question to support his claim that there is nothing wrong with having Native American mascots. He is putting the reader in his shoes by stating that the former OU mascot, Little Red, is just showing pride for its heritage. He goes on to wonder why having a mascot showing Native America is wrong when it is representing Native America.

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Caroline Estridge Caroline Estridge (Sep 12 2017 3:21PM) : @PeytonPlayer more

I agree

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Mary Robinson Mary Robinson (Sep 12 2017 3:26PM) : Hey, it's a rhetorical question! more

She uses the rhetorical question method to invite the reader to ask themselves if ‘Native American imagery represent Native America’

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Young, 27, and a writer for CBS Sports, said he now believes he would have written a more educated post after having discussed the mascot issue with Native Americans.

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Julie Hilliard Julie Hilliard (Sep 12 2017 3:24PM) : Young says that now looking back he would have gotten a more in depth review from native americans. more

He is using ethos being the author and saying that he should have gotten more information about the situation from the actual people it was affecting.

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"I wouldn’t say I regret writing it,” he said. β€œBut I’d be much more sensitive of understanding why Little Red was insensitive to some instead of saying, β€˜What’s the big deal?’ ”

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Robert Rachals Robert Rachals (Sep 13 2017 12:27PM) : This is logos because it is a quote.
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Royce said he saw nothing wrong with Oklahoma honoring its native people, but not with a tasteless mascot.

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Chloe Byrom Chloe Byrom (Sep 12 2017 3:23PM) : Royce uses logos by stating that its not the problem that we have the native american mascots but its the way we portray them as crazy or just negatively instead of honoring them correctly
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Joshua Lazenby Joshua Lazenby (Sep 12 2017 9:08PM) : I agree. That is also an interesting viewpoint on the issue that I hadn't seen until now.
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Several college teams followed Oklahoma’s footsteps and dropped Native American mascots – Stanford and Syracuse among them.

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The movement to do away with Indian mascots gained momentum after theAmerican Psychological Association in 2005 called for the immediate retirement of the mascots based on studies that showed the harmful effects of inaccurate racial portrayals.

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Joshua Lazenby Joshua Lazenby (Sep 12 2017 9:03PM) : This paragraph states that according to the American Psychological Association inaccurate racial portrayals can have harmful effects. more

This is an example of logos because it provides evidence from a credible source to further its claim by stating that inaccurate racial depictions can be mentally harmful and backing it up with evidence from the American Psychological Association.

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The following year, the NCAA, the governing body of collegiate sports, adopted a policy banning teams with β€œhostile or abusive racial/ethnic/national origin mascots, nicknames or imagery” from competition. The ban affected high-powered football schools such as Florida State University with Chief Osceola and the University of Illinois, whose official symbol was Chief Illiniwek.

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Chloe Byrom Chloe Byrom (Sep 12 2017 3:26PM) : they uses logos by putting the NCAA in it to make you think they are doing the best for everyone and they are reliable to trust
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Zachary Brown Zachary Brown (Sep 12 2017 5:07PM) : I agree.
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Some states have put the morality of the Indian mascots up for a vote.

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Last year, voters dumped the University of North Dakota's Fighting Sioux mascot.And Oregon prohibited public schools from the use of Native American names, symbols or images. The names on the banned list include: Redskins, Savages, Indians, Indianettes, Chiefs and Braves.

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At Florida State University, a white man dresses up as Chief Osceola, smears war paint on his face and rides an appaloosa called Renegade to the middle of Doak Campbell Stadium. He plants a burning spear on the field before every home game. The marching band plays Indian-themed music, and the crowd goes wild doing the β€œtomahawk chop,” a move picked up by the Atlanta Braves.

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FSU student Lincoln Golike, who played Osceola in 2002, told the Florida State Times back then that it was tremendous honor to have so many admiring fans.

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The Seminole tribe in Florida made an agreement with FSU to allow the use of its name that allows the university to continue competing in the NCAA. The university says its relationship with the Seminole tribe is one of mutual respect.

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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 3:29PM) : FSU's use of the Seminole could be an allusion to the Seminole tribe because it is a famous Native American tribe.
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Joshua Lazenby Joshua Lazenby (Sep 12 2017 9:04PM) : I certainly agree, with all this talk of sports teams named after tribes, I'm surprised I didn't think of that myself.
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However, the Seminole nation in Oklahoma, comprised of the descendants of a majority of the Seminoles forced from their lands by the Indian Removal Act, has voiced its opposition to FSU’s mascot.

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The real Chief Osceola fought U.S. soldiers in the Seminole Wars. He was captured in 1837 under a flag of truce and died in prison. Before his burial, the soldiers chopped off the head of the Indian warrior to keep as a trophy. That Osceola serves as a mascot at FSU doesn’t sit well with the Seminoles in Oklahoma and many other Native Americans.

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β€œNative Americans feel offended, they feel hurt. They feel their identity is being trivialized,” says Carol Spindel, who wrote β€œDancing at Halftime,” a book that explored native mascots.

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Peyton Player Peyton Player (Sep 12 2017 3:25PM) : In this paragraph, Carol Spindel, an author of a book that explored native mascots is defending her side that having Native American mascots is offensive to these people. more

Carol Spindel is using pathos by provoking emotions from the reader. She is saying that the Native Americans feel as if their identity is being “trivialized”. It makes the reader think about how they would feel if their identity was being made out to be less important just because of the color of their skin.

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Joshua Lazenby Joshua Lazenby (Sep 12 2017 3:27PM) : In this short paragraph Spindel simply states that Native Americans feel offended and belittled by mascots that portray Native Americans more

This is an example of pathos because the line “Native Americans feel offended…” could invoke a reaction of sadness in the reader, persuading them to agree with the author because they feel bad.

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Zachary Brown Zachary Brown (Sep 12 2017 5:04PM) : I agree with your point of view. An interesting point that I never thought of.
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β€œThis is such an ingrained part of American culture that it’s very hard to get people to question it,” says Spindel, a professor at the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign, where the official symbol used to be Chief Illiniwek. He was the subject of debate for decades and made his last appearance in 2007 under the threat of NCAA sanctions.

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But five years later, there are still some who want Illiniwek back. A nonbinding student referendum held just weeks ago strongly favored making him the official mascot again.

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Spindel concluded in her book that mascots such as Chief Illiniwek were a reflection not of native people but of those who invented them.

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β€œIf we do a census of the population in our collective imagination, imaginary Indians are one of the largest demographic groups,” Spindel writes in her book.

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β€œThey dance, they drum, they go on the warpath; they are always young men who wear trailing feather bonnets. Symbolic servants, they serve as mascots and metaphors. We rely on these images to anchor us to the land and verify our account of our own past. But as these Indians exist only in our own imaginations, they provide a solipsistic connection and leave us, ultimately, untethered and rootless.”

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Robert Rachals Robert Rachals (Sep 12 2017 3:18PM) : This is an example of conduplicato because it is repeating the same word at the beginning of a sentence for several lines. This helps develop the conclusion that what they're doing with the Indian names is wrong. [Edited]
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Jordan Smith Jordan Smith (Sep 12 2017 3:20PM) : agree more

I agree with this but I also think it could be conduplicato.

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Jordan Smith Jordan Smith (Sep 12 2017 3:18PM) : conduplicato more

Moni uses conduplicato because she keeps repeating “they”.

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Joshua Lazenby Joshua Lazenby (Sep 12 2017 9:06PM) : I agree but what I want to know is how do you think this use of conduplicatio helps advance the author's claim?
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Caroline Estridge Caroline Estridge (Sep 12 2017 3:12PM) : conduplicato more

She repeats “they” often to convey her point referring to people of her culture.

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Jordan Smith Jordan Smith (Sep 12 2017 3:24PM) : agree more

I agree with this.

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Zachary Brown Zachary Brown (Sep 12 2017 5:05PM) : I never saw this conduplicato in this essay. Good job on finding it. [Edited]
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At 67, Harjo believes she has made strides in her struggle to do away with racial stereotypes but says Native Americans have a long way to go.

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β€œBecause we as Indians, we don’t have the numbers,” she says, referring to the dwindling population. The latest census listed 2.9 million people as American Indian and Alaska Native.

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Jordan Smith Jordan Smith (Sep 12 2017 3:22PM) : Logos more

Moni uses logos in this paragraph because she gives statistics about the American Indian and Alaska Native population.

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β€œSo we don’t pose a threat,” she says. β€œIf we organized a march, the numbers would be so small. We’ve done it school by school. State by state.”

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Harjo knows if the powerful Washington football team is forced to discard its name, then everyone else will follow. But for now, she takes pride in small victories.

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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 3:21PM) : The authors purpose for this article is to inform readers about how certain names/mascots/logos make Native Americans feel so that they will learn to be more sensitive about this subject.
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Just a few weeks ago, a high school in Cooperstown, New York, decided to retire its R-word mascot.

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C.J. Hebert, superintendent for the Cooperstown Central School District, said students approached him regarding their discomfort with the mascot that had been around for decades.

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Emma Gutshall Emma Gutshall (Sep 13 2017 9:13PM) : Ethos more

This could be ethos because the author adds that C.J. Herbert is a superintendent for the Cooperstown Central School District, so we can trust his opinion on the matter.

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β€œI do think that times change and perspectives change, and certainly it’s historically a time for us to reconsider what the name is,” Hebert said.

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That’s a statement that makes Harjo feel her campaign has been worthwhile.

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Tell us what you think about Native American names and mascots below.

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Kailyn Hyman Kailyn Hyman (Sep 12 2017 3:04PM) : this is ethos because shes refering to the title president of morning star
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Madison Watson Madison Watson (Sep 12 2017 3:07PM) : In paragraphs 9 & 10 the author uses pathos to help the reader understand how derogatory that name is towards the Native Americans. [Edited]
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Mary Robinson Mary Robinson (Sep 12 2017 3:15PM) : In the first couple paragraphs she's using pathos to make us feel for the little girl. [Edited] more

A six year old having to leave the store because of her race is really upsetting. Not only the fact that she was denied the service, but also that she was later called a full blown slur at the age of six is pretty disturbing.

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Collin Spirek Collin Spirek (Sep 12 2017 3:20PM) : in this paragraph she makes appeals to pathos with making you feel sad for her about the incident at the store. when she was six
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