[5 of 5] The Adoption by Zidrou and Arno Monin, pages 110-136 (2020)

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 20 2021 8:31AM) : Disenchantment more

I am seeing the father is living through his son through this whole situation.

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Jul 20

Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:25AM) : Don't talk bad about him he's supposed to be dumb.

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:36AM) : Dumb... more

LOL – and this show you I think he is new to this series, right? LOL

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 19 2021 9:36AM) : Thinking of his wrongs more

This breaks my heart, so so sad. And think about what she went through, this whole time. Two families in reality :(

Jul 19

Harry B Harry B (Jul 19 2021 9:37AM) : Nostalgic more

This is the first time I am hearing him reminisce about his son!

Jul 20

Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:26AM) : Do you think this will start a forgiveness arc?

Jul 20

Harry B Harry B (Jul 20 2021 8:33AM) : Interesting switch on his personality more

He is watching cartoons now living through the experiences of his granddaughter, interesting seeing his switch!

Jul 20

Harry B Harry B (Jul 20 2021 8:41AM) : His groupies more

LOL, he is now using this gentleman he has meant as his former support group – like he had back home. He has changed alot.

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:28AM) : That's what I said in part 3 I think.

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:29AM) : I'm sorry, but this gives the same energy as saying oh he forgot to pay a couple of million in taxes. No, you didn't you did it on purpose.

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:37AM) : energy more

Hmm, I am not sure I understand what you mean?

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:40AM) : Perspective more

Mixed with the guilt of how hard he was on his son, and because this guy is new to the story – I think he is harder on the son then his fathers wants to be?

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Jul 20

Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:31AM) : how come Lisa only going to divorce him and not get any charges pressed, It was clear she knew too because they foreshadowed it when she was talking before Qiqi got stuck on a balcony.

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:40AM) : Muddy mess more

the whole thing is a muddy mess LOL

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:32AM) : I love venison pate.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:41AM) : Vension more

I love venison, amazing, beef jerky and it is healthy, lol

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 19 2021 9:37AM) : Son and father more

A HA! So his father was disappointed in his choice to not take over maybe? This is the cause of the rift?

Jul 20

Harry B Harry B (Jul 20 2021 8:43AM) : Butcher more

He puts all his comments in the form of his former job as a butcher.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 19 2021 9:39AM) : Ugh more

I think is unnecessary to show the rawness of the men, the guys together, when the illustrator has so many tools as his disposal, that disappoints me when this does not have to be included to make a point. Sheesh.

Jul 20

Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:36AM) : another bro group of three- almost like his father. side note pls don't tell me all-male get together are like this. smells like testosterone.

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:42AM) : lol Guys more

Some guys are always bonding like this, for sure, so it is depending on the group, personalities, etc

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:42AM) : smells like testosterone. more

Hysterical.

Jul 20

Harry B Harry B (Jul 20 2021 8:44AM) : Therapy more

This is therapy for him – as he reasons out and looks back and reflects on his past. He did not see to be the type of person early in the story to ever do this.

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:37AM) : That's good for his storyline.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:42AM) : storyline more

Certainly almost needs to be there to add a continuation to the plot.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 20 2021 8:46AM) : Graphic novels more

Cool how graphic novels enable you to “see” something received like this!

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:41AM) : Gabrielhome friends. this should be good because they can give us intel into what's happening back home.

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:44AM) : transition more

I think this is a good way of shows how the father is changing and morphing.

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:44AM) : this is so sad and the trope of using monotonous travel as a way to reflect is done well here. I feel like if this was made into a short film or something I can grasp the narration at this point.

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:45AM) : trope more

This does seem to be very good insert of what he is contemplating- the whole scene of this being an alternating trip over the crop shapes below – etc – wasn’t sure of the importance of this.

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:46AM) : Is it just me or is the daughter significantly older? Like in quantifiable years, not just stress.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:46AM) : Older more

Yes, I think so but I thought more of the mother when I saw her, funny, I focused on the mother when the daughter also was visibly older, interesting.

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:47AM) : I love their friendship. End of discussion.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:47AM) : Friendship more

This guy was in the right place in the right time – and it helped develop the thought process better for the father and process all this, pretty good placement.

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Jul 20

Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:48AM) : I love charcuterie. The urban farmer in Philly makes the best one ever.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:49AM) : Hmmm more

Urban Farmer, not familiar, I am not familiar with this word as much as I should be!

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:50AM) : YOU ARE JOKING. He decides to cook lunch for inmates. All this time he said retirement was boring. This actually makes sense he gets his son and work.

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:50AM) : Preoaring food more

This definitely, seems to be the father doing this to remind his son of something his son loved, right? Seems to be just for his son?

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Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:51AM) : no words needed that was so sweet and a turning point for their relationship.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:55AM) : Card more

Excellent closing to this whole reunion of father and son.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 19 2021 9:43AM) : Heartstrings more

Wow, this is heartbreaking!

Jul 20

Harry B Harry B (Jul 20 2021 8:45AM) : I kind of predicted... more

…this as the news he has been waiting for about his daughter!

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Jul 20

Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:53AM) : so now that his relationship with his father is repaired he doesn't need to worry about qiqi. Because she finally sees she's happy she leaves him.

Jul 22

Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:57AM) : Agreed more

I think the whole metaphorical – Qiqi appearing – very cool as she serves as a messenger in her mind.

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Jul 20

Robyn G Robyn G (Jul 20 2021 8:56AM) : This book was sad, heartfelt, and, funny.

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Harry B Harry B (Jul 22 2021 8:57AM) : Twist more

The twist in the middle was really unexpected to me?

[5 of 5] The Adoption by Zidrou and Arno Monin, pages 110-136 (2020)

Author: Zidrou and Arno Monin

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