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“Prayer” by Lyuba Yakimchuk (October 15, 2021)

Author: Lyuba Yakimchuk

Yakimchuk, Lyuba. “‘Prayer.’” Translated by Oksana Maksymchuk et al., Medium, Poem of the Day, 1 Mar. 2022, https://medium.com/poem-of-the-day/lyuba-yakimchuk-prayer-5526373eb458.


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Andrei Tarkovsky, Ivan’s Childhood, 1962
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Our Father, who art in heaven
of the full moon
and the hollow sun

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Paul A (Apr 08 2022 6:56AM) : She begins with one of the most familiar invocations in any language. And turns directly to very earthly images that suggest that all is not well. more

I wonder why the sun is hollow. Is it because it is hidden by clouds of smoke or something less specific? And what are we to take from the image of a full moon?

“Full moon, Kharkiv, Ukraine.” by Fiyoli is marked with CC BY-NC-ND 2.0.

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shield from death my parents
whose house stands in the line of fire
and who won’t abandon it
like a tomb

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Paul A (Apr 08 2022 7:20AM) : This pleading for her parents and her husband to be shielded made me wonder if there is anything in the original prayer that suggests this. [Edited] more

Our Father in heaven,
hallowed be your name.
Your kingdom come,
your will be done,
on earth as it is in heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread,
and forgive us our debts,
as we also have forgiven our debtors.
And lead us not into temptation,
but deliver us from evil.

https://quod.lib.umich.edu/cgi/k/kjv/kjv-idx?type=DIV2&byte=4678801

There is the idea of “delivering us from evil,” but these entreaties to protect her family suggest how desperate she is feeling.

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shield my husband
on the other side of war
as if on the other side of a river
pointing his gun at a breast
he used to kiss

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Paul A (Apr 08 2022 7:24AM) : Is he fighting for the Russians? This is startling!
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I carry on me this bulletproof vest
and cannot take it off
it clings to me like a skin

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I carry inside me his child
and cannot force it out
for he owns my body through it

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I carry within me a Motherland
and cannot puke it out
for it circulates like blood
through my heart

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Paul A (Apr 08 2022 7:26AM) : Wow! The connections she if expressing! Isn't the "Motherland" Russia? There is such pain expressed in these lines.
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Our daily bread give to the hungry
and let them stop devouring one another

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our light give to the deceived
and let them gain clarity

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Paul A (Apr 08 2022 7:28AM) : How can we not read these words as being about the propaganda and stte news in Russia?
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and forgive us our destroyed cities
even though we do not forgive for them our enemies

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Paul A (Apr 08 2022 7:32AM) : The Lord's prayer says that we should forgive, but, in opposition, this is saying, No, we do NOT forgive" and we do not forgive because we are FOR THEM, the people in the destroyed cities.

and lead us not into temptation
to go down with this rotting world
but deliver us from an evil
to get rid of the burden of a Motherland —
heavy and hardly useful

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Paul A (Apr 08 2022 7:33AM) : Seems to confirm that the Motherland is Russia. Pretty damning all of this!
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shield from me
my husband, my parents
my child and my Motherland

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Paul A (Apr 08 2022 7:34AM) : What a struggle this is! She is asking that all be shielded, her family and her Motherland. How she is torn apart, and how she wants all to be well!

translated by Oksana Maksymchuk, Max Rosochinsky and Svetlana Lavochkina

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