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Sisterhood is not alway the cheerful moment. Having a lighter skin and education especially for girls in 1920’s in black community does not bettedhelp. It will be confusing that you will not know where you belong, white or black. My sister Maggie after she was burned with in our old house she has never been the same. She start to blasted to blame everyone. That does not mean I would do the same to make her happy. She was the most closed to Mama. But I understand how she feels about me. Usually mothers support more their kid who are not favored that mean who don't have confidence of themselves. She thought that I’m the one who takes all opportunities she should have, like education, and the physical appearancepopularity.After my mama and the church raised money for my college and I went to college I realized that my mama family does not have money.

Sisterhood is not alway the cheerful moment. Having a lighter skin and education especially for girls in 1920’s in black community does not help. It will be confusing that you will not know where you belong, white or black. My sister Maggie after she was burned in our old house she has never been the same. She start to blame everyone. That does not mean I would do the same to make her happy. She was most closed to Mama. But I understand how she feels about me. Usually mothers support more their kid who are not favored that mean who don't have confidence of themselves. She thought that I’m the one who takes all opportunities she should have, like education, and popularity. After my mama and the church raised money for my college and I went to college I realized that my family does not have money.

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Maggie is my sister and nothing will not change that. When I decided to present Hakim to my family my mama did not like him and she started making fun of him. As long I known her she , she always take takes my sister's side and both of them are really locked. She considered my sister more. I will love to have the same relationship with her. But I have no idea how it will started. I guess I supposed to behaved or be the same as my sister. Obviously It will not going to happen because I will not change my personality for nothing. I want to be love how I am and for who I am. She will have to accepted me as I am. She though that I hate Maggie but she is wrong even I like nice things or have knowledge that did not mean I’m a bad person or I hate my sister. The thing my Mama and Maggie did not understands we are a family and this will not change.

Maggie is my sister and nothing will change that. When I decided to present Hakim to my family mama did not like him and she started making fun of him. As long I known her, she always takes my sister's side and both of them are really locked. She considered my sister more. I will love to have the same relationship with her. But I have no idea how it will started. I guess I supposed to behaved or be the same as my sister. Obviously It will not going to happen because I will not change my personality. I want to be love how I am and for who I am. She will have to accepted me as I am. She though that I hate Maggie but she is wrong even I like nice things or have knowledge that did not mean I’m a bad person or I hate my sister. The thing my Mama and Maggie did not understands we are a family and this will not change.

DMU Timestamp: November 21, 2019 20:25

Added November 26, 2019 at 3:32pm by Fatoumata Diallo
Title: Wording change

The text below is the previous wording for paragraph 1 (click to return there).

Sisterhood is not alway the cheerful moment. Having a lighter skin and education especially for girls in 1920’s in black community does not betted. It will be confusing that you will not know where you belong, white or black. My sister Maggie after she was burned with in our old house she has never been the same. She start to blasted to everyone. That does not mean I would do the same to make her happy. She was the most closed to Mama. But I understand how she feels about me. She thought that I’m the one who takes all she should have, education, and the physical appearance. After my mama and the church raised money for my college and I went to college I realized that my mama does not have money.

DMU Timestamp: November 21, 2019 20:25

Added November 26, 2019 at 3:35pm by Fatoumata Diallo
Title: Wording change

The text below is the previous wording for paragraph 2 (click to return there).

Maggie is my sister and nothing will not change that. When I decided to present Hakim to my family my mama did not like him and she started making fun of him. As long I known her she always take my sister side and both of them are really locked. I will love to have the same relationship with her. But I have no idea how it will started. I guess I supposed to behaved or be the same as my sister. Obviously It will not going to happen because I will not change my personality for nothing. She will have to accepted me as I am. She though that I hate Maggie but she is wrong even I like nice things or have knowledge that did not mean I’m a bad person or I hate my sister. The thing my Mama and Maggie did not understands we are a family and this will not change.

DMU Timestamp: November 21, 2019 20:25

Added December 03, 2019 at 2:25pm by Fatoumata Diallo
Title: Wording change

The text below is the previous wording for paragraph 1 (click to return there).

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Sisterhood is not alway the cheerful moment. Having a lighter skin and education especially for girls in 1920’s in black community does not betted. It will be confusing that you will not know where you belong, white or black. My sister Maggie after she was burned with in our old house she has never been the same. She start to blasted to everyone. That does not mean I would do the same to make her happy. She was the most closed to Mama. But I understand how she feels about me. She thought that I’m the one who takes all opportunities she should have, education, and the physical appearance.popularity After my mama and the church raised money for my college and I went to college I realized that my mama family does not have money.

Sisterhood is not alway the cheerful moment. Having a lighter skin and education especially for girls in 1920’s in black community does not betted. It will be confusing that you will not know where you belong, white or black. My sister Maggie after she was burned with in our old house she has never been the same. She start to blasted everyone. That does not mean I would do the same to make her happy. She was most closed to Mama. But I understand how she feels about me. She thought that I’m the one who takes all opportunities she should have, education, and popularity After my mama and the church raised money for my college and I went to college I realized that my family does not have money.

DMU Timestamp: November 27, 2019 01:26

Added December 03, 2019 at 2:51pm by Fatoumata Diallo
Title: Wording change

The text below is the previous wording for paragraph 1 (click to return there).

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Sisterhood is not alway the cheerful moment. Having a lighter skin and education especially for girls in 1920’s in black community does not betted. It will be confusing that you will not know where you belong, white or black. My sister Maggie after she was burned with in our old house she has never been the same. She start to blasted to everyone. That does not mean I would do the same to make her happy. She was the most closed to Mama. But I understand how she feels about me. She thought that I’m the one who takes all opportunities she should have, education, and the physical appearance.popularity After my mama and the church raised money for my college and I went to college I realized that my mama family does not have money.

Sisterhood is not alway the cheerful moment. Having a lighter skin and education especially for girls in 1920’s in black community does not betted. It will be confusing that you will not know where you belong, white or black. My sister Maggie after she was burned in our old house she has never been the same. She start to blasted everyone. That does not mean I would do the same to make her happy. She was most closed to Mama. But I understand how she feels about me. She thought that I’m the one who takes all opportunities she should have, education, and popularity After my mama and the church raised money for my college and I went to college I realized that my family does not have money.

DMU Timestamp: November 27, 2019 01:26

Added December 03, 2019 at 3:02pm by Fatoumata Diallo (suggested by Paul Allison)
Title: Wording change

The text below is the previous wording for paragraph 2 (click to return there).

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Maggie is my sister and nothing will not change that. When I decided to present Hakim to my family my mama did not like him and she started making fun of him. As long I known her she . She always take my sister side and both of them are really locked, she considered my sister more. I will love to have the same relationship with her. But I have no idea how it will started. I guess I'm supposed to behaved behave or be the same as my sister.Obviously It will not going to happen because I will not change my personality for nothing. I want to be love how I am and for who I am. She will have to accepted me as I am. She though thought that I hate hated Maggie, but she is wrong even . Even thourh I like nice things or have knowledge, that did not mean I’m a bad person or that I hate my sister. The thing my Mama and Maggie did not understands understand is that we are a family and this will not change.

Maggie is my sister and nothing will change that. When I decided to present Hakim to my family mama did not like him and she started making fun of him. As long I known her. She always take my sister side and both of them are really locked, she considered my sister more. I will love to have the same relationship with her. But I have no idea how it will started. I guess I'm supposed to behave or be the same as my sister. Obviously It will not going to happen because I will not change my personality. I want to be love how I am and for who I am. She will have to accepted me as I am. She thought that I hated Maggie, but she is wrong. Even thourh I like nice things or have knowledge, that did not mean I’m a bad person or that I hate my sister. The thing my Mama and Maggie did not understand is that we are a family and this will not change.

DMU Timestamp: November 27, 2019 01:26





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