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Review: 'Black Panther' Shakes Up the Marvel Universe

Author: Manohla Dargis


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A jolt of a movie, “Black Panther” creates wonder with great flair and feeling partly through something Hollywood rarely dreams of anymore: myth. Most big studio fantasies take you out for a joy ride only to hit the same exhausted story and franchise-expanding beats. Not this one. Its axis point is the fantastical nation of Wakanda, an African Eden where verdant-green landscapes meet blue-sky science fiction. There, spaceships with undercarriages resembling tribal masks soar over majestic waterfalls, touching down in a story that has far more going for it than branding.

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2021 Milo Hohmann 2021 Milo Hohmann (Jan 08 2021 11:25AM) : This here is the central claim of the review, that not only is this movie a jolt of an experience, but that it is different than other blockbusters.
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Lilly Lyon Lilly Lyon (Jan 08 2021 2:57PM) : From the beginning, the author exemplifies how this film is very different from any superhero film that has come before it. more

She recognizes the stand-out setting and aesthetics while acknowledging the deeper purposes and implications carried throughout the plot of the film.

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Sarah James Sarah James (Jan 08 2021 3:09PM) : I agree with you! Black Panther was able to integrate a distinct perspective into the Marvel community not only with the setting and characters but also the overall message.
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Elizabeth Child Elizabeth Child (Jan 08 2021 3:12PM) : I think it is a very interesting take on the movie. I think her description of some of the ways the movie is different makes the review fun to read and makes me want to see the movie
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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 2:59PM) : this introduces the claim about the story
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Jack Libin Jack Libin (Jan 08 2021 11:07AM) : This is the central claim of the review, that it is a jolt of a movie.
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Josh Icasiano Josh Icasiano (Jan 08 2021 3:07PM) : Our group also thought of this to be the central claim but also debated over the first sentence in the last paragraph.
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2021 Samuel Butcher 2021 Samuel Butcher (Jan 08 2021 11:19AM) : Central Claim [Edited]
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Nicolette Miller Nicolette Miller (Jan 08 2021 11:20AM) : Claim: the use of myth to create "flair and feeling"
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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 3:07PM) : Response more

I completely agree with your statement, but I also believe that these words could be considered uses of positive diction.

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Micah Wedemeyer Micah Wedemeyer (Jan 08 2021 11:20AM) : This is the central claim of the review.
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Owen Larson Owen Larson (Jan 08 2021 11:24AM) : The very first sentence is Manohlas' central claim. [Edited] more

This sentence alone explains her thoughts and opinions on the current movie industry as well as the movie Black Panther. In this statement, she claims that this movie is different from the others that she reviews, and it is special in that way.

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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 2:55PM) : Main claim
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 2:56PM) : The main claim of this review is this sentence
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Josh Icasiano Josh Icasiano (Jan 08 2021 2:56PM) : Main claim
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main claim

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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 2:57PM) : This is a strong introductory because of the wording that captivates the attention of the audience.
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Mark Monette Mark Monette (Jan 08 2021 3:12PM) : Diction more

I believe that “myths” does this well.

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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 3:04PM) : syntax/diction more

words such as flair, joy, and dreams imply a very positive tone. This tone that is obvious early on implies that the author enjoyed the movie.

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Josh Icasiano Josh Icasiano (Jan 08 2021 3:04PM) : Early on uses word choice to set a positive tone using words that have a positive connotation such as in this sentence with flair, dreams.
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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 3:14PM) : I agree, her word choice gave the writing a positive feeling
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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 3:04PM) : Her word choices give it a positive tone. "Flair" is typically used in a positive way.
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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 3:06PM) : main thesis more

main thesis

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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 3:07PM) : Main claim
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Miles Brooke Miles Brooke (Jan 12 2021 1:11AM) : Structure more

I see the author organized her review on her reviews of different characters and their attributes, the special effects, and how the movie sets itself apart from other Marvel movies.

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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:51PM) : Indirect claim of the film
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:52PM) : This is the thesis
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Alexandra Fernandez Alexandra Fernandez (Feb 24 2021 2:16AM) : I believe that the author automatically both catches your attention and states the main claim on the article. She claims that Black Panther is a movie unlike any other, with both the production and the content.
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Alexandra Fernandez Alexandra Fernandez (Mar 02 2021 2:05PM) : By using specific diction such as "flair" and "dream", the author gives this article a positive tone.
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Jack Libin Jack Libin (Jan 08 2021 11:19AM) : This supports the author's claim that black panther's great flair
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Micah Wedemeyer Micah Wedemeyer (Jan 08 2021 11:22AM) : Evidence to back up central claim
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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 2:58PM) : describes in detail the land of Wakanda and its uniqueness.
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 2:58PM) : this is the first piece of evidence that she provides for her claim. She says that the creation of wakanda sets this story apart [Edited]
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:52PM) : Evidence to support the notion that it is a "jolt of a movie"
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:53PM) : This word choice reinforces the awe and the respect that the author has for this film.
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Nicolette Miller Nicolette Miller (Jan 08 2021 11:23AM) : -evidence and descriptive diction used to support a minor claim and introduce further line of reasoning
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2021 Sage Walker 2021 Sage Walker (Jan 08 2021 11:24AM) : dictions supports the claim that this movie has a story that goes deeper than corporate branding.
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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 2:57PM) : evidence more

create a new place for the story to occur

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Anthony Soutor Anthony Soutor (Jan 08 2021 2:57PM) : Intro more

The way that the author opens up the flood gates for her analysis with the last sentence in her introductory paragraph is very good. She makes the claim that the movie has more going for it than the branding, a statement that obviously requires evidence. She provides evidence throughout the rest of the essay.

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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 2:58PM) : Supports the claim
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Josh Icasiano Josh Icasiano (Jan 08 2021 2:58PM) : Supports her claim of "creating wonder with great flair and feeling partly through something Hollywood rarely dream of anymore"
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Elizabeth Child Elizabeth Child (Jan 08 2021 2:58PM) : She gives a lot of details about the things you see in the movie without giving too much of the movie away.

Wakanda is home to Black Panther, a.k.a. T’Challa (Chadwick Boseman), the latest Marvel hero to leap off the comic-book page and into his own movie. Created in 1966 by Stan Lee (script) and Jack Kirby (art), the original Black Panther — a hepcat in a slinky suit with claws and ears — debuted alongside the Fantastic Four in an adventure in Wakanda, which is powered by a mystery metal, vibranium. It was a splashy, timely entrance (the revolutionary group that shares his name officially formed that same year), and by the end of his first escapade, the Four had assured T’Challa “there’s no reason for the Black Panther’s career to come to an end!”

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Micah Wedemeyer Micah Wedemeyer (Jan 08 2021 11:23AM) : Evidence to support the central claim.
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2021 Audrey Sparano 2021 Audrey Sparano (Jan 08 2021 11:29AM) : Dargis claims that while T'Challa's character was introduced in the Civil War movie, the marvel universe was not ready to put down the character just yet.
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:54PM) : Seamless transition into history of black panther
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Alexandra Fernandez Alexandra Fernandez (Mar 02 2021 2:02PM) : Evidence to support the main claim.

In the decades since, Black Panther has undergone a variety of costume alterations and adventures in the comics, some under the direction of the filmmaker Reginald Hudlin and, more recently, the author Ta-Nehisi Coates. To direct the first Panther movie, Marvel tapped Ryan Coogler, who with his last outing, “Creed,” shook the dust off the Rocky series by giving it an African-American champion played by Michael B. Jordan. For “Black Panther,” Mr. Coogler brought back both Mr. Jordan and some former crew members — including Rachel Morrison, the director of photography on his first feature “Fruitvale Station” — continuity that may help account for this movie’s intimacy and fluidity.

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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 2:59PM) : costume altercations more

How the characters dress also adds an element of flair to the movie.

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Josh Icasiano Josh Icasiano (Jan 08 2021 2:59PM) : Supports claim more

Supports the claim of flair about having costume changes.

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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 3:05PM) : claim more

claim about costumes

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Micah Wedemeyer Micah Wedemeyer (Jan 08 2021 11:24AM) : Evidence to support the central claim.
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Josh Icasiano Josh Icasiano (Jan 08 2021 3:02PM) : Structure more

The structure throughout seemed to be jumpy as the author would explain different aspects and it almost seemed like it was missing fluidity.

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Lilly Lyon Lilly Lyon (Jan 08 2021 3:12PM) : I agree, the structure is a little confusing as the author jumps back and forth between topics.
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Thomas Chadwick Thomas Chadwick (Jan 08 2021 3:12PM) : I disagree more

For a review, it is pretty structured. There are example of claims in both the first and last sentences. Also, the author gives sufficient context before arguing her points in her body paragraphs.

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Anthony Soutor Anthony Soutor (Jan 08 2021 3:11PM) : Evidence more

I like how the author talked about the director and how that person made decisions that benefitted the movie and made it more ‘intimate and fluid’

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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:54PM) : The comic writers and visionaries are working together to bring the character to life

As with all Marvel screen ventures, the story has a lot of moving parts, but in general the results don’t register as the same-old superhero busywork, the kind that makes for forgettable stories and strenuously overinflated running times. Written by Mr. Coogler and Joe Robert Cole, “Black Panther” brings T’Challa’s story up to the present, sketches in his past and looks to his future, all while clearing room for the Marvel Cinematic Universe and its other unitard-wearing warriors. (Black Panther was first wedged into the forgettable “Captain America: Civil War.” ) The movie also rather too breezily establishes Wakanda as a militaristic monarchy that is nevertheless fair and democratic.

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Kenia Martinez Juarez Kenia Martinez Juarez (Jan 08 2021 3:02PM) : The author claims that the movie Black Panther is different than other marvel movies. With the new look of the actors and theme
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 3:07PM) : This is another claim
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Alyssa Bardugon Alyssa Bardugon (Jan 08 2021 11:21AM) : claim - Black Panther is different than other predictable marvel movies
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Kenia Martinez Juarez Kenia Martinez Juarez (Jan 08 2021 3:08PM) : This is true as well, on top of the new look to marvel with their actors and theme
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Cecilia Child Cecilia Child (Jan 08 2021 11:21AM) : The author makes the claim that movie still has the same-old busy work, but not as much as other movies
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Kaeli Henderson Kaeli Henderson (Jan 08 2021 11:22AM) : Her primary claim is that Black Panther adds a new aspect to not only the Marvel universe but it Hollywood with its modern flip being the wealth and superiority that is Wakonda.
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2021 Samuel Butcher 2021 Samuel Butcher (Jan 08 2021 11:22AM) : One of her claims, but she also contradicts herself with this claim later in the review.
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Henry Frech Henry Frech (Jan 08 2021 11:24AM) : Black Panther is unique more

The author claims that Black Panther is different than the usual Marvel shoot-em-up movie.

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2021 Sage Walker 2021 Sage Walker (Jan 08 2021 11:25AM) : re-introduction of the claim that this movie is different from other Marvel movies.
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Owen Larson Owen Larson (Jan 08 2021 11:29AM) : Supporting evidence for her central claim. more

This sentence reiterates her emphasis on the difference between other Marvel movies and this movie.

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estrella estrada estrella estrada (Jan 08 2021 3:03PM) : evidence: doesn't have a traditional storyline like those of marvel movies.
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Miles Brooke Miles Brooke (Jan 11 2021 3:00PM) : Claims more

The author makes the claim that Black Panther falls out of the normal pattern of Marvel movies in terms of its plot and framework that makes the storyline too complicated.

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2021 Milo Hohmann 2021 Milo Hohmann (Jan 11 2021 10:30PM) : Word Choice and Tone more

The word choice here, saying how other Marvel stories seem to fail and be forgettable and overinflated when there are many moving parts, yet in Black Panther, it works well, bringing up this enchanted tone that, where other movies fail, Black Panther brings a new jolt of energy that is rarely seen anymore.

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Cecilia Child Cecilia Child (Jan 08 2021 11:23AM) : Provides evidence that other movies in the MCU are "forgettable" compared to Black Panther
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Henry Poppe Henry Poppe (Jan 08 2021 11:23AM) : Uses diction, "forgettable", to portray the original Hollywood entrance of the character being small and non memorable.
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:55PM) : Says that this film is forgettable
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Jack Libin Jack Libin (Jan 08 2021 11:22AM) : This description also provides a description of the myth of black panther
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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 2:58PM) : evidence more

Adds an element of flair to the movie

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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 2:59PM) : Adds to her claim
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 2:59PM) : This is also another use of evidence of what sets this story apart
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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 3:00PM) : this is the evidence because it talks about the aspects and concepts fo the movie
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 3:04PM) : The authors description of wakanda sets of the review with a positive tone as she uses words such as "eden" and "majestic"
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:55PM) : Showing evidence of how excellent the worldbuilding is

The story initially involves a satisfying if obvious cartoonish villain, Ulysses Klaue (Andy Serkis, having a conspicuously very good time), an underworld arms dealer with a weaponized arm, an Afrikaans sneer and a rampaging cohort that includes Erik Killmonger (Mr. Jordan). As his name announces, Killmonger has, well, issues to go with his striking body ornamentation. The band’s evildoing ways attract the attention of the Black Panther and an international lawman in the person of a friendly C.I.A. agent (the customarily cuddly Martin Freeman), whose good-guy status is just one reminder that “Black Panther” adheres to at least some dubious Hollywood conventions.

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Cecilia Child Cecilia Child (Jan 08 2021 11:25AM) : Good use of diction with the word "cartoonish", more evidence that Black Panther is standard repeat.
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 2:59PM) : Another piece of evidence
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Alyssa Bardugon Alyssa Bardugon (Jan 08 2021 11:24AM) : evidence to support the claim of having some similarities to marvel movies while not following the stereotypical marvel movie layout
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:56PM) : Saying that the film is a breath of fresh air but is prone to cliches at times

For a while, as the story and the Black Panther veer here and there, jumping from Wakanda to Busan, South Korea, the filmmakers seem as if they’re simply going to deliver a remix of James Bond with a touch of Spidey shenanigans. The Black Panther even slinks into a swank casino with some backup and before long the place has erupted with the kind of choreographed mayhem that — as legs and gowns twirl — achieves liftoff. There’s also the inevitable chaotic car chase that turns Busan into a video game and, dispiritingly, a car commercial, an egregious tie-in that is somewhat alleviated by the amusing image of a woman warrior’s bare foot putting pedal to the metal.

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Kaeli Henderson Kaeli Henderson (Jan 08 2021 11:26AM) : The author develops her argument by covering the twists and turns of the film by going through what she expected but then clarifying by going over the fresh outlook of the film and the different ways it turns which contribute to making it exciting.
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Jack Libin Jack Libin (Jan 08 2021 11:23AM) : This diction choice emphasizes the mix that the movie is going for, a James bond combined with a marvel movie
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Cecilia Child Cecilia Child (Jan 08 2021 11:23AM) : Supports that the plot is too stretched out, and that it is the same as other movies
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2021 Sage Walker 2021 Sage Walker (Jan 08 2021 11:27AM) : Emphasis on the mix of different movies that have elements within black panther, offering a unique marvel movie.
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:56PM) : Backing up the freshness of this movie by saying how it innovates on existing characters
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Alexandra Fernandez Alexandra Fernandez (Mar 02 2021 2:04PM) : I think the author's structure in the overall article is well-written and easy to read.
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Charlie Peluso Charlie Peluso (Jan 08 2021 11:30AM) : The author's tone seems to presented when they are describing this scene. They give an exciting description of this climatic scene.

Flourishes like this (along with an amusingly airborne wig and, later, rampaging rhinos) and the Wakandan backdrop give the action scenes kick and actual personality, but Mr. Coogler’s directing strengths are more intimate. There are sequences in “Black Panther” that may make you cry because of where they go and what they say, but also because of the sensitivity he brings to them. He makes some savvy story choices too. And so, before Mr. Serkis can steal too many scenes, Mr. Coogler turns his attention to Killmonger and pushes the movie in another direction, away from a white villain wronging black people to black people living their lives.

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Henry Frech Henry Frech (Jan 08 2021 11:26AM) : Meaning behind Black Panther more

The author says its director, Ryan Coogler, artfully combined the typical fight scenes of Marvel with “savvy story choices” and meaningful messages.

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Jack Libin Jack Libin (Jan 08 2021 11:24AM) : These flourishes create a sense of myth
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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 3:08PM) : I agree, it shows character and some sort of cultural history
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Henry Poppe Henry Poppe (Jan 08 2021 11:21AM) : Mentioning scenes where emotion is involved can appeal to many people with their desire to be touched by emotion.
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Elizabeth Child Elizabeth Child (Jan 08 2021 2:56PM) : This is a piece of evidence for her overarching theme given the last paragraph.
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Mark Monette Mark Monette (Jan 08 2021 2:56PM) : Evidence for Claim more

Here, the author provides evidence that the movie tackles race by citing that the movie focuses on black characters living their lives, which allows it to more deeply address racism.

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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:57PM) : This is a claim that the film dabbles in this trope but ultimately rejects it

Part of the movie’s pleasure and its ethos — which wends through its visuals — is how it dispenses with familiar either/or divides, including the binary opposition that tends to shape our discourse on race. Life in Wakanda is at once urban and rural, futuristic and traditional, technological and mystical. Spaceships zoom over soaring buildings with thatched tops; a hover train zips over a market with hanging woven baskets. In one of the most striking locales, an open-air throne room is horizontally lined with suspended tree limbs, creating a loose pattern that pointedly blurs the divide between the interior and exterior worlds and is echoed by the fretwork in costumes and other sets.

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2021 Milo Hohmann 2021 Milo Hohmann (Jan 11 2021 10:16PM) : Evidence for claim, where the movie uses familiar tropes and twists it into social commentary that is both unique and enjoyable.
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Jack Libin Jack Libin (Jan 08 2021 11:26AM) : This is also another rhetorical flourish that reinforces the central claim of the review
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Cecilia Child Cecilia Child (Jan 08 2021 11:27AM) : This is where the author switches to be positive about Black Panther, and makes the claim that it is more complicated than other Superhero movies.
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Nicolette Miller Nicolette Miller (Jan 08 2021 11:27AM) : Claim: either/or divides contribute to pleasure and ethos
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:58PM) : Evidences the previous claim of showing that the film is trying to break the stereotypes and tired tropes in Hollywood about race
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Sarah James Sarah James (Jan 08 2021 3:05PM) : In the sentence, the author supports the claim that Black Panther is distinct by the blend of both urban and rural themes and showing both sides of themes.
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The rejection of the either/or divide extends to Killmonger, whose emotional, fraught back story gives the movie more heft and real-world friction than any of Marvel’s other superhero blowouts. Like a lot of adventures, “Black Panther” turns on a familiar father-and-son drama — there’s an assassination, a power vacuum and a somewhat reluctant heir — a patrilineal intrigue that is filled in here with intense face-offs involving questions of ancestry, identity, the African diaspora, the new world and the old. One particularly moving narrative thread features Sterling K. Brown, a tremulous, vibrantly sensitive actor who conveys entire chapters of grief. (He could out-weep Juliette Binoche.)

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Nyayeek Deng Nyayeek Deng (Jan 08 2021 11:23AM) : The author discusses how different Black Panther is from other Marvel movies. more

Black Panther speaks on many deep subjects and this makes it stand out from other Marvel movies, this is one claim she makes about the film.

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Henry Poppe Henry Poppe (Jan 08 2021 11:26AM) : Provides excellent evidence for hoe the story transposes in relations to the backbone of the career development.
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Lilly Lyon Lilly Lyon (Jan 08 2021 3:01PM) : While acknowledging the cliches of many superhero films, the author supports her concluding statements about race with the larger themes of the movie about identity and heritage.
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Lisa Kasabyan Lisa Kasabyan (Jan 09 2021 1:56AM) : Evidence for how Black Panther stands apart despite the fact that it makes use of well-known tropes. This shows that it is more complex as it presents interesting viewpoints on overarching themes of the balance between the old and the new/indivdual.
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Miles Brooke Miles Brooke (Jan 11 2021 3:11PM) : Evidence how Black Panther sets itself apart from typical Marvel movies. more

The movie reverts back to common themes found in cinema making references to the Lion King and Hamlet. Many Marvel movies get caught up in the action, the special effects, and the multitude of new superheroes, however, they often lack moral themes that make them more than superhero movies. Black Panther touches on so many common and contemporary themes found in today’s world.

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Mr. Jordan is a terrifically charismatic presence and there are times when you wonder if he might have made a better Black Panther. Mr. Boseman’s magnetism is more slow-burning and his performance is more physically restrained than Mr. Jordan, even deliberate, though he has his splashier, freewheeling moments, including some hand-to-hand grappling. (Wrestling is big in Wakanda, hence a few sexy smackdowns featuring acres of bare skin and jumping muscle.) Like many other Wakandans, he speaks in English with a South African lilt, an accent that vividly summons up Nelson Mandela and suggests that T’Challa will soon be assuming the role of international diplomat.

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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:59PM) : Shows how the film will lend itself to the larger MCU

It’s important to the movie’s politics and myth-building that he is surrounded by a phalanx of women, among them a battalion of women warriors called the Dora Milaje. These aren’t moviedom’s irritatingly token strong chicks, the tough babes with sizable biceps and skills but no real roles. For all his father issues, T’Challa is enveloped by women who cushion him in maternal, military, sisterly and scientific support. A female general (Danai Gurira) stands by his side; his baby sister (a vivacious Letitia Wright) provides gadgets and withering asides à la Bond’s gadget guy. Angela Bassett swans in as the royal mother, while Lupita Nyong’o, as a spy, makes the case for her own spinoff.

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Charlie Peluso Charlie Peluso (Jan 08 2021 11:27AM) : The author brings attention to the empowering role that women have in this movie. Though some of their descriptions about these roles are confusing, it's clear that there is some support in the feminist aspect of "Black Panther" is supported.
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Lisa Kasabyan Lisa Kasabyan (Jan 09 2021 1:58AM) : Evidence- Black Panther has a large supporting cast of strong independent women who are not there simply as tokens, which is uncommon.
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 6:59PM) : Talking about another Hollywood dynamic used in this film with themes of race to enhance it
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Buoyed by its groovy women and Afrofuturist flourishes, Wakanda itself is finally the movie’s strength, its rallying cry and state of mind. Early on, a white character carelessly describes it as “a third world country — textiles, shepherds, cool outfits.” Part of the joke, which the movie wittily engages, is that Wakanda certainly fits that profile except that its shepherds patrol the border with techno-wizardry, and its textiles and costumes dazzle because of the country’s secret vibranium sauce. More critically, having never been conquered, Wakanda has evaded the historical traumas endured by much of the rest of Africa, freeing it from the ravages of both colonialism and postcolonialism.

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Lilly Lyon Lilly Lyon (Jan 08 2021 3:07PM) : Word Choice more

The syntax used in this first sentence is incredibly strong. So much so that she is able to summarize two major underlying plots in 20 words.

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2021 Lindsey Housinger 2021 Lindsey Housinger (Jan 08 2021 11:26AM) : Claim...mentions Wakandas technology that shields it from the outside world, along with mentioning the backdrop adding to the action scene in para 7.
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Miles Brooke Miles Brooke (Jan 12 2021 1:54AM) : Word Choice more

The author’s word choice such as “groovy” or “rally cry” in this paragraph reflects on the passion of the author and their commitment to social justice.

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Thomas Chadwick Thomas Chadwick (Jan 08 2021 3:07PM) : Unconventional Word Choice more

The author uses phrases like techno-wizardry and vibranium sauce instead of regular conventional terms, which shows the informal tone of this review and a bit of the author’s individuality.

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Mark Monette Mark Monette (Jan 08 2021 2:55PM) : Evidence for Claim more

In this paragraph, the author provides evidence for Black Panther examining race and history of Africa through afrofuturism and an alternate history.

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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 7:00PM) : Summarizes the central issue of the film, and what makes it so compelling/new

Race matters in “Black Panther” and it matters deeply, not in terms of Manichaean good guys and bad but as a means to explore larger human concerns about the past, the present and the uses and abuses of power. That alone makes it more thoughtful about how the world works than a lot of mainstream movies, even if those ideas are interspersed with plenty of comic-book posturing. It wouldn’t be a Marvel production without manly skirmishes and digital avatars. Yet in its emphasis on black imagination, creation and liberation, the movie becomes an emblem of a past that was denied and a future that feels very present. And in doing so opens up its world, and yours, beautifully.

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Grace Sherman Grace Sherman (Jan 08 2021 11:23AM) : Claim more

The author claims that the movie “Black Panther” signifies the exploration of human concerns regarding race and moreover the discovery and acknowledgement of the past and its relation to the future.

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Lisa Kasabyan Lisa Kasabyan (Jan 08 2021 11:29AM) : Manohla Dargis' main claim is that Black Panther approaches the story and characters with a more realistic lens than many other superhero movies, especially when it comes to race, worldbuilding, villains motives.
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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 3:04PM) : I really like the structure and word choice the author gives when talking about this movie because they explain in detail the important aspects, concepts, and messages that this movie tries to appeal to the audience.
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2021 Milo Hohmann 2021 Milo Hohmann (Jan 11 2021 10:33PM) : Thesis more

This is where the thesis is most explicitly written. Black Panther is unique among its blockbuster counterparts because of its social commentary, especially on racial issues and the “us vs them” mentality.

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2021 Samuel Butcher 2021 Samuel Butcher (Jan 08 2021 11:27AM) : Another main claim that Black Panther has a more realistic perspective in the real world with the inclusion of race. [Edited]
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2021 Olivia Vandersteen 2021 Olivia Vandersteen (Jan 08 2021 11:32AM) : evidence supporting claim more

claim of exploring larger human concerns about different moments in time, and why race matters in this context.

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2021 Audrey Sparano 2021 Audrey Sparano (Jan 08 2021 11:33AM) : I was surprised that the author chose to include this at the very end of the review as the movie's relation to race played a huge factor in how the public received the film.
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 3:11PM) : That is interesting, but you are right. I would expect race to be a larger part of this
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Mark Monette Mark Monette (Jan 08 2021 2:38PM) : Thesis Statement more

In this spot the author most clearly states their thesis statement: unlike other Marvel movies, Black Panther directly addresses real world issues such as race.

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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 3:00PM) : evidence
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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 3:00PM) : evidence more

evidence to support claim

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Josh Icasiano Josh Icasiano (Jan 08 2021 3:00PM) : Claiming that race matters/ Evidence for main claim
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 3:00PM) : The use of race in this movie is also used as evidence
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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 3:01PM) : evidence - it talks about one of the most important messages of the film
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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 3:07PM) : thesis - because it sums up the importance of the film and its cultural and heroic aspects
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Miles Brooke Miles Brooke (Jan 12 2021 1:57AM) : Thesis more

The author includes her indirect thesis at the end of the review that expresses the core of why she is writing. She wants to express how the Black Panther expresses matters of social injustice and how these movies have the platform to express these issues.

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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 7:00PM) : This is another way of stating the thesis
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Alexandra Fernandez Alexandra Fernandez (Mar 02 2021 2:06PM) : This is the author's main thesis.
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2021 Samuel Butcher 2021 Samuel Butcher (Jan 08 2021 11:27AM) : Contradicts her previous claim
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Grace Sherman Grace Sherman (Jan 08 2021 11:20AM) : Claim here
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Patrick Maxfield Patrick Maxfield (Jan 08 2021 2:56PM) : This sentence makes the claim that Black Panther provides an insight into a nonexistent past and a future that could be reality soon.
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Thomas Chadwick Thomas Chadwick (Jan 08 2021 2:57PM) : Overarching Claim [Edited] more

This sentences describes the overarching claim of the review – about how Black Panther clearly and accurately depicts an alternate “past and a future that feels very present”. It essentially shows what a technologically advanced African country would look like, while retaining all aspects of its culture and civilization.

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Dylin (Ori) Reyes Dylin (Ori) Reyes (Jan 08 2021 3:03PM) : this uses linguistic tools such as symbols as it is reffering to the story as an "emblem"
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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 3:05PM) : This is another claim
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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 3:06PM) : claim more

claim

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Yara Ahmed Yara Ahmed (Jan 08 2021 3:02PM) : The author dedicates a paragraph to an aspect of the film. Due to the stark contrasts between each paragraph, the article is a little hard to follow
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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 3:02PM) : her structure was unique and different but it also made it more difficult to read and understand. because each paragraph was a different topic it ended up being more confusing.
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Gus Daskalakis Gus Daskalakis (Jan 08 2021 3:02PM) : structure more

The way that the author structured this piece of writing was going paragraph to paragraph explaining certain aspects of the movie. While this is a good strategy, it was not properly executed. The minimal transitions used created a lack of fluidity in the review.

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Patrick Maxfield Patrick Maxfield (Jan 08 2021 3:11PM) : I agree, the absence of transitions made it hard to understand where she was going with her claims.
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2021 Parker Catten 2021 Parker Catten (Jan 26 2021 7:01PM) : Summarizes how all of these established claims come together to articulate the thesis

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estrella estrada estrella estrada (Jan 08 2021 9:59PM) : claim: black panter is distinct from other marvel movies. starting with a distinct cast and new ideas that were never seen in Marvel movies.
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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 9:59PM) : Adds "flair" supporting her claim
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Student Mae Sweetland Student Mae Sweetland (Jan 08 2021 10:06PM) : Claim
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2021 Milo Hohmann 2021 Milo Hohmann (Jan 12 2021 5:19AM) : Structure more

I noticed that this review’s central claim is not about whether people should or should not watch this movie, which was unique. However, this left the review somewhat disjointed, as others have mentioned.

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