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Demonstration Speech Example

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DMU Timestamp: August 23, 2021 17:25

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Oct 13

Charis Paez Charis Paez (Oct 13 2021 9:06AM) : I liked how confident she was. She did a great job of going through each of the steps.

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Amyah Griffin Amyah Griffin (Oct 13 2021 9:12AM) : I also like how confident she was. I think how she explained it was very elaborative.

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student Aryanah Williams student Aryanah Williams (Oct 13 2021 9:06AM) : I think she did a good job explaining everything with details.

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student Aryanah Williams student Aryanah Williams (Oct 13 2021 9:07AM) : I also think she did a good job demonstrating how things should be done while still making eye contact to the audience.

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student Aryanah Williams student Aryanah Williams (Oct 13 2021 9:08AM) : I like how she went step by step and didn't miss anything even the small steps where there.

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Charis Paez Charis Paez (Oct 13 2021 9:09AM) : I thought she used hand gestures very well. I thought it added to her speech.

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Logan McCormick Logan McCormick (Oct 13 2021 9:10AM) : I feel like she's done a fine job, I liked how she informed us on the dangers to look out for when jumpstarting the car.

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Grace Szczerba Grace Szczerba (Oct 13 2021 9:11AM) : I liked the way she explained what’s important and why we should know this information. A lot of the time things may seem like we don’t really need to know them or someone else can do it for us but she explained why we should know this information.

Oct 13

Sariyah Corbitt Sariyah Corbitt (Oct 13 2021 9:13AM) : Throughout the entire demonstration, she explained each detail of the steps and the process.

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Amyah Griffin Amyah Griffin (Oct 13 2021 9:15AM) : It was very helpful that she did this, I understood what was going on way easier because of how she explained every step.

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Amyah Griffin Amyah Griffin (Oct 13 2021 9:14AM) : I like how she had great props that were big enough for the audience to see so that we can understand what she was doing.

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Professor Jessica Gleason Professor Jessica Gleason (Aug 23 2021 7:16PM) : You do not need to start a speech with "Hello my name is..." In fact, it would be better to start with a strong attention grabber. She gets there, but not right away.

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Oct 13

Emily Monosa Emily Monosa (Oct 13 2021 9:04AM) : I think it is important that she told us where we can buy them and how much they are. With this information, we can go buy a set if we don't already have one.

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Alayna Smith Alayna Smith (Oct 13 2021 9:06AM) : I very much agree with this. It makes it a lot easier for the person to have a good idea if they can afford it. Or where to get it if they really need one

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Grace Szczerba Grace Szczerba (Oct 13 2021 9:08AM) : I agree this is a super important step to any demonstration speech

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Paige Phillips Paige Phillips (Oct 13 2021 9:01AM) : I appreciate how she discloses the purchasing information of the products, as some audience might not know for sure themselves.

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Kimberly McGuinness Kimberly McGuinness (Oct 13 2021 9:03AM) : I agree, I think this was a great thing to share as well as some may not have that information. Very thoughtful.

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Alana Taylor Alana Taylor (Oct 13 2021 9:05AM) : I like how she mentions the information from the automotive repair company. Definitely adds to the credibility of her speech!

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Logan McCormick Logan McCormick (Oct 13 2021 9:14AM) : I agree, it might even help people out when they don't know what to do.

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Sariyah Corbitt Sariyah Corbitt (Oct 13 2021 9:09AM) : I liked how she had facts and information from credible companies who specialize in automotive field.

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Ian Blinderman Ian Blinderman (Oct 13 2021 9:10AM) : It helped solidify her experience with what she is talking about, it made her much more trustworthy.

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Spencer Schick Spencer Schick (Oct 13 2021 9:02AM) : I really like her creativity in her visual aids. I like how she made a replica car battery out of shoeboxes!

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Charis Paez Charis Paez (Oct 13 2021 9:07AM) : I also thought that was cool

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Alayna Smith Alayna Smith (Oct 13 2021 9:07AM) : I was thinking the same thing.I liked how she used something so simple that made her speech look more complex. It was simple enough for the audience to follow along

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Paige Phillips Paige Phillips (Oct 13 2021 9:09AM) : Yes! I think creating your own visual aids as a sort of craft can really help the audience better appreciate and enjoy the speech while listening.

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Grace Szczerba Grace Szczerba (Oct 13 2021 9:09AM) : I agree i think it’s good to get creative when it comes to things you can’t directly replicate such as how to jumpstart a car.

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Alana Taylor Alana Taylor (Oct 13 2021 9:13AM) : I agree! I think it was a really creative idea of hers and I am hoping to have a creative idea for mine!

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Logan McCormick Logan McCormick (Oct 13 2021 9:16AM) : I agree, I thought it was interesting for visual aids.

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Emily Monosa Emily Monosa (Oct 13 2021 9:06AM) : By sharing this fact about the length of the jumper cables, it may help us with our purchase of the size of the jumper cables. Additionally, this shows that she is well informed about her topic.

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Sariyah Corbitt Sariyah Corbitt (Oct 13 2021 9:11AM) : I like how she exampled what type of cables is best for the jump start process and why those cables are the best to use.

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Paige Phillips Paige Phillips (Oct 13 2021 9:05AM) : I really like how she takes pauses throughout the speech, saying things like, "That's important," making sure the audience takes a second to realize that. I think that is a great step in actually informing and not only showing.

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Alayna Smith Alayna Smith (Oct 13 2021 9:10AM) : I really liked how she had a really good flow when she talked. She didn't talk too fast and she paused when it was needed

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Ian Blinderman Ian Blinderman (Oct 13 2021 9:11AM) : It adds a form of humor, while also keeping that information more relevant to remember.

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Spencer Schick Spencer Schick (Oct 13 2021 9:04AM) : I like how she references the book "How to jump start your car for dummies". I think this is a good approach because it gives the audience a recommendation of a book to look into if they have more questions.

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Kimberly McGuinness Kimberly McGuinness (Oct 13 2021 9:09AM) : I agree. Giving the audience additional resources such as she did allows people to gather more info should they feel they want to expand on what they just learned in a quick demo tutorial.

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Emily Monosa Emily Monosa (Oct 13 2021 9:08AM) : She mentions sources she got her information from to help back up her knowledge and make her speech more professional.

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Alana Taylor Alana Taylor (Oct 13 2021 9:07AM) : I believe that she is pretty knowledgeable on this topic. I like how she has her notes to read but is still able to maintain eye contact with the audience.

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Viviana Garcia Viviana Garcia (Oct 13 2021 9:08AM) : I like how she mentioned to make sure your car is even able to be jumps started. I did not know that some cars couldn't be jumpstarted, so this information was very useful to me.

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Emily Monosa Emily Monosa (Oct 13 2021 9:09AM) : This is important, because many people don't know this and it could cause them to get injured very seriously.

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Kimberly McGuinness Kimberly McGuinness (Oct 13 2021 9:07AM) : I feel like she could have added in the importance of why you need to connect that last cable to something metal. That bit of info could be helpful to some.

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Charis Paez Charis Paez (Oct 13 2021 9:08AM) : I agree. I was a little confused by that.

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Viviana Garcia Viviana Garcia (Oct 13 2021 9:11AM) : I like how she stated in which specific order to take off the cables. I didn't know they should be taken off in a specific order, so this is very useful information.

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Spencer Schick Spencer Schick (Oct 13 2021 9:08AM) : I like the idea of giving a handout to the audience to take home with them in case they ever encounter this problem. That is a smart tactic to use to have engagement with the audience after the speech.

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Viviana Garcia Viviana Garcia (Oct 13 2021 9:12AM) : I agree! I don't think I could remember all of these specific steps, so having a handout would be really useful in case a situation like this ever happens to me.

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Ian Blinderman Ian Blinderman (Oct 13 2021 6:08AM) : The whole speech she does a great job using gestures to help the audience interpret what she is talking about.

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