Instead of standing in the same exact position throughout the whole speech,Cain moves her arms around the whole time performing gestures, which makes her look prepared and less nervous.
Cain conveys a calm and soothing voice throughout her speech, which allows for the audience to truly make a relation back to her speeches overall topic, introverts.
Again, I want to take this annotation a step further to connect it to the curriculum we have been studying in class, PVLEGS. Susan seems to navigate the element of voice with ease as she uses projection along with pauses to help make emphasis on certain pieces of her message.
Cain takes 2.5 minutes to illustrate her camp experience with Poise, Voice, Life, Eye Contact, Gestures, and Speed/Pacing. That’s almost 1/6 of her entire speech or about 15% which we have said is appropriate for an EXORDIUM. This is exactly what an exordium does and can do.
At 3:34, Cain makes a move to suggest that the world is losing something for not having recognized the gifts that introverts bring to the space.
Throughout the whole Ted Talk, Susan was never really standing still, She never really sat down. She was always moving, across the whole stage. Her voice stays at a good tone throughout the whole Ted Talk too. It gets a little high when she started to sing for a brief moment, but it went back to the same tone
at 4:10, Cain moves to NARRATIO is defining introversion for the audience. Classic oratory happening here.
At 4:49, Cain moves from what introversion is to what bias against introversion might look like.
So to start, Susan carries herself very well throughout her presentation. The poise is very strong here and you can tell she cares deeply about the subject based off of the life in her voice. The addition of visual aid is also a great strategy in keeping your audience engaged. Her exordium was a great transition into her presentation as well. Gestures were strong and weren’t pointless and weren’t flying all over the place with no real representation of her voice.
From approximately 5 minutes to 7 minutes, Cain explores biases within two familiar institutions (particularly to the TED crowd): education and business.
“Let me give you some examples. . .” Exemplification here. This is what makes this TED talk or any speech a good speech. Awareness of the modes and how to present a subject.
At 7:33, Cain moves to the comments, “I actually love extroverts. . .”
It is here that Cain makes a move toward the larger comment of the talk. It’s about at the midpoint of the talk. . .IF. . .we are going to return to the image of the suitcase.
Throughout the speech, Cain was able to keep a steady, clear voice. She eliminated “verbal viruses” such as the word “like,” and did not mumble her words. This made it easier for her audience to better understand her.
Cain makes a move to discuss solitude and drops in references that would be familiar to the audience.
P- 0:00- 19:05 nicely dressed , funny, relates to audience, knows when to be serious, grabs attention, stops to let audience absorb knowledge, fluent, smooth transitions, friendly,and natural
V- 0:00- 19:05 good pronunciation, clearly heard, good volume, no filler words, good projection, medium pitch, varied words, full voice, mellow sounding, enthusiastic, controlled tongue, and crisp.
She uses “moves” like talking about how introverts are usually smarter people and get better grades, how some of the smartest and most inventive people worked alone, how he best students are mostly introverts, religions that work alone are the most loving, and her three calls for actions; Stop the madness for constant group work; go to the wilderness be like buda and have your own revelations; and take a good look at what’s inside your own suitcase and why you put it there. These moves solidify her throughline.
As I completed part B of the assignment and looked at the different times in which Susan used elements from the acronym PVLEG, I noticed there is no set time for any element. Susan constantly uses Poise as she presents herself on the stage, she appears both calm and collected and avoids nervous habits. Voice is something Susan comes across naturally as she uses projection to ensure her message is loud and clear. Life, the entire message conveyed by Susan is based on the power of introverts and personal life experiences. Eyecontact, Susan never fails to make eyecontact with her audience as it keeps them engaged with what she is saying. Gesture, as several classmates made note of, Susan made use of her body language to guide and emphasize her message using her hands often to help bold her statement. The final element is speed, and Susan talks at a swift but smooth pace, not too fast nor too slow. She also makes use of pauses which seems to allow the audience to engage and appreciate what she has to say along with emphasizing what she has said.
P- 0:00-19:05 nicely dressed, relates to audience, makes jokes, knows when to pause to let audience think, knows how to grab attention
V- 0:00-19:05 Enunciated every word clearly, good volume, good projection, and enthusiastic
The moves that support her through the line are her three calls to action: stop the madness for constant group work, go to the wilderness and have your own revelations, and take a good look at what is inside your own suitcase and why you put it there.
The speaker has been very calm and confident with the topic at hand and all of her ideas have been presented well.
The speaker is scanning the whole room looking at the whole audience evenly. This includes the whole room and lets the audience know they are appreciated.
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