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Jun-25-23 June 25 Summer Sunday
Jun-26-23 June 26
Jun-27-23 June 27 Thoughts about Kumospace
Jun-28-23 June 28 - summary of recent improvements
Jun-29-23 June 29 a new introduction after TTT last night requested some overview
Jun-30-23 June 30 I wrote this in response to feedback on Wednesday
Jun-30-23 a symphony between conflicting projects, trying to bring a harmony of ideas for one ultimate end.
Jul-01-23 A wooden knight in the foreground, mid-morning sun as the backdrop, and an abstract painting style to capture the idea of different perspectives and expertise in chess.

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I wan want to align and integrate Youth Voices, NowComment and Kumospace as part of the DigDiscourse efforts. I'm not sure it all fits together, but I hope that I can find a unifying structure that encourages others to join these efforts. I also want to be my best scheduler and planne so that proposals of "let's write about this" don't just get forgotton. Oh, and part of this will be to get a video about AI and Youth Voices together for the Write Center Conference. How can I make this all feel like the same inetellectual and pedagogical program and not a series of interesting dispaeate events and projects?

I want to align and integrate Youth Voices, NowComment and Kumospace as part of the DigDiscourse efforts. I'm not sure it all fits together, but I hope that I can find a unifying structure that encourages others to join these efforts. I also want to be my best scheduler and planne so that proposals of "let's write about this" don't just get forgotton. Oh, and part of this will be to get a video about AI and Youth Voices together for the Write Center Conference. How can I make this all feel like the same inetellectual and pedagogical program and not a series of interesting dispaeate events and projects?

DMU Timestamp: June 23, 2023 23:36

Added June 25, 2023 at 6:48pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 25 Summer Sunday

Slow day today in terms of my goals and all. I spent some time thinking and talking to Marcie about Jim Moffett, and I reviewed a few documents that I read as part of a Moffett study group that the NWP is sponsoring. I'm interested to understand his relationship to the NWP and his history in general, his Interaction series and the protests and his turn to meditation and introspection. I think there are interesting lessons here.

It has been a while since I added any Thinking Partners and I have a lot of ideas to work on there, bringing some particularly effective templates from Youth Voices to NowComment.

And now I wondering how Moffett's frameworks would be of value to a writer in the form of AI feedback.

So yeah, that's what I'm thinking.

DMU Timestamp: June 23, 2023 23:36

Added June 26, 2023 at 3:11pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 26

I just posted this in a Deeper Dive that is about putting together text-sets on the NWP's Studio.

I'm a retired secondary teacher and a teacher consultant for the New York City Writing Project (NYCWP). I manage two platforms where text sets and argument are nurtured: https://youthvoices.live and https://nowcomment.com.

This spring, a colleague, a third-grade teacher, Marina Lombardo, from the NYCWP and I are facilitating four-week series of workshops designed to introduce graduate students--who are in a STEM program at Lehman College--to multimodal literacy. They will be student teaching, beginning as observers in the fall.

Marina just completed a problem-based "solutionary" project with her third graders about the Hudson River, and we are using her work as a model project. She is quickly gathering student work and the resources she used with them into a collection on NowComment.

We plan to use an inquiry approach with the STEM students in July, asking them to pull together a text-set around a question that might be appropriate for the students they will be working with in the fall, Most of them will be working with early-childhood and childhood levels.

I'd love to see how elementary school teachers think about text-sets that might be built around inquiry-based learning.

Looking forward!

As far as my questions... I'm deeply immersed in AI these days, and given the students I'll be working with in July (see above), I want to think about pulling together a text-set about AI in early-childhood and elementary education. #AILiteracies #elementary #earlychildhood #Inquiry #TextSets

DMU Timestamp: June 23, 2023 23:36

Added June 27, 2023 at 8:53pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 27 Thoughts about Kumospace

After a day of playing with DigDiscourse teachers in Kumospace, and seeing teachers think, "Hey, I could use this," I'm thinking about how this platform is most appropriate for students who are at a distance from each other and maybe the teacher. As such, it might act as a way to connect classrooms both face to face and asynchronously.

DMU Timestamp: June 28, 2023 00:53

Added June 28, 2023 at 4:34pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 28 - summary of recent improvements

Dear Friend of Thinking Partners on NowComment:

You can follow these links and read the small print here AND/OR join us tonight at 9E/8C/7M/6P at kumospace.com/youthvoices and we can talk!
I want to update you on a few things that we have improved upon in the first part of our summer of testing (since March).
More Context
First, one of the behind the scenes changes, we have been reducing the number of tokens that we dedicate to the results of a query. The upshot of this is that you can now use Thinking Partners on the whole text -- as long as that text is 25 or 30 average paragraphs long or shorter. Try it. We put the AI icon back on the "General Document Comments" link. If your text is too long, you will get a box explaining how many tokens (not the same thing as words) you are over. Clearly, we are still testing this, but so far, we are able to do a lot more text than we were able to do a few weeks ago. And OpenAI will probably continue to expand their context levels. Please test this out and stay tuned.
New possibilities
Next, this page sums up a lot of the new possibilities, most of which were recommended by you: Thinking Partners. When you get a chance, please review this and let me know what might still be unclear.
Some details for you as an early tester
  • One of the systems we have put in place is to give Group Administrators the ability to see and edit any Thinking Partner created by members of the group that they administer. This way a teacher, for example, would be able to see and edit Thinking Partners that students in their classes or groups had created. And the rest of us won't see it happening -- until a Thinking Partner is made public.
  • In addition, the Group Administrator (often teacher) would be able to select Thinking Partners from their group to share with the entire group. These, then, would be available to use and duplicate by other members of the group without complicating the "public" list.
  • Test this out by joining the Thinking Partners Group. Many of the partners that have been created from March - June are shared with that group, and when you join they will all show up on your Thinking Partners page and drop-down menu.
  • Note that there is a parenthetical (public) next to the partners that everybody sees.
A basic set
So one of the things that I will continue to need your help on is to identify and/or create a basic set of Thinking Partners that a new user sees. So I have started to winnow down to the following list. Here's what a new user -- or someone who is not in a group with Thinking Partners -- sees:

Screenshot 2023-06-28 at 3.33.52 PM.png

This is something I will want to get more feedback about -- how many? which ones? -- in the next two months.
Now something delightful!
There has been a clear request to be able to easily see the prompts. I think what Jeremie Wood, the NowComment tech wizard, came up with is pretty nice, When you click through the drop-down menu, you will see a two-column box that shows you the title, the description, and the prompt for each Thinking Partner.

Screenshot 2023-06-28 at 3.34.31 PM.png

Please jump onto NowComment and play with these new features!
A way to play!
I've spent some time putting together this set of instructions to encourage/guide the creation of AI Dialogue Notebooks. It's #18 under Help > Videos and Overviews.
Check it out - and leave Kevin a reply or two!
Our colleague and friend Kevin Hodgson has been kind enough to keep his AI Reflection Journal public.
SEE YOU TONIGHT
at 9E/8C/7M/6P kumospace.com/ youthvoices

DMU Timestamp: June 28, 2023 12:38

Added June 29, 2023 at 11:34pm by Paul Allison
Title: June 29 a new introduction after TTT last night requested some overview

By the end of these 19 steps, you will have a notebook--or what is called a collection on NowComment--where you can collect different kinds of multimodal documents that you are using for your own reasons and that you can invite others to comment on as well.

An Ai Dialogue Notebook is a place to gather both your daily and weekly logs about your thinking and resources that you find helpful in your journey to find solutions to you own burning questions or wicked problems that are important to you and your community.

You control how public, private, or shared with a small group you make the different documents in your Notebook.

We begin by uploading one document that you will add to each day for a week. The idea is that you can log your questions, ideas, observations, conversations (with yourself and others), inspiring moments, frustrations.., things going on with you and in your head each day.

The directions below show you how to collect your daily logs on one document each week, which will allow you to use Thinking Partners beside your freewriting, jottings, exploratory logs. You can upload a new document each week for you logs, then collect these into a Personal Collection on NowComment. This collection is your AI Dialogue Notebook.

In time, as you come upon videos, articles, short stories, poems, news items... that relate to the questions and ideas in your logs, you can upload those items to your notebook as well.

Here's an example: Paul's Notebook
It worth saying that this notebook is public so that others can see it as an example. We recommend (and the instructions below suggest) that you keep the Personal Collection that is your notebook private and shared with the People and Groups you invite. That way you can choose to keep some documents in your notebook/collection private (such as your logs) and other things can be made public (such as the resources you find).

DMU Timestamp: June 30, 2023 01:14

Added June 30, 2023 at 7:15am by Paul Allison
Title: June 30 I wrote this in response to feedback on Wednesday

By the end of these 19 steps, you will have a notebook--or what is called a collection on NowComment--where you can collect different kinds of multimodal documents that you are using for your own reasons and that you can invite others to comment on as well.

An Ai Dialogue Notebook is a place to gather both your daily and weekly logs about your thinking and resources that you find helpful in your journey to find solutions to you own burning questions or wicked problems that are important to you and your community.

You control how public, private, or shared with a small group you make the different documents in your Notebook.

We begin by uploading one document that you will add to each day for a week. The idea is that you can log your questions, ideas, observations, conversations (with yourself and others), inspiring moments, frustrations.., things going on with you and in your head each day.

The directions below show you how to collect your daily logs on one document each week, which will allow you to use Thinking Partners beside your freewriting, jottings, exploratory logs. You can upload a new document each week for you logs, then collect these into a Personal Collection on NowComment. This collection is your AI Dialogue Notebook.

In time, as you come upon videos, articles, short stories, poems, news items... that relate to the questions and ideas in your logs, you can upload those items to your notebook as well.

Here's an example: Paul's Notebook
It worth saying that this notebook is public so that others can see it as an example. We recommend (and the instructions below suggest) that you keep the Personal Collection that is your notebook private and shared with the People and Groups you invite. That way you can choose to keep some documents in your notebook/collection private (such as your logs) and other things can be made public (such as the resources you find).

DMU Timestamp: June 30, 2023 01:14

Added June 30, 2023 at 4:18pm by Paul Allison
Title: a symphony between conflicting projects, trying to bring a harmony of ideas for one ultimate end.

DMU Timestamp: June 30, 2023 01:14

Added July 01, 2023 at 12:09pm by Paul Allison
Title: A wooden knight in the foreground, mid-morning sun as the backdrop, and an abstract painting style to capture the idea of different perspectives and expertise in chess.

A wooden knight in the foreground, mid-morning sun as the backdrop, and an abstract painting style to capture the idea of different perspectives and expertise in chess.

DMU Timestamp: June 30, 2023 01:14





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