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Grocery Card Campaign flyer Draft3 Shelley

DMU Timestamp: March 10, 2026 18:12

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 4:06PM) : font size maybe could be a bit bigger, or maybe just right... which do we want bigger, this or You Can Help below?

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 4:07PM) : I can read fine, but maybe a lighter red for more contrast?

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 4:09PM) : Lisa suggested to explain why there is now heightened food insecurity in that community now. I'm very open to language (and maybe grammar) tweaks! [Edited] more

Current text (Lisa thinks too long) is:

The current immigration crack-down is making many of our immigrant neighbors food insecure: lost paychecks from loved ones detained or deported, fearful to go shopping, avoiding food aid they’re eligible for.

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 4:12PM) : Should read (in smallest clearly legible font): "Purchase $25 grocery gift cards from [Walmart or Food Lion logos] [next line in a smaller font] No dollar value is printed on any card, so we need to have a standard value ($25) to avoid confusion." [Edited] more

I kept some explanation but tried to trim it down… better? I think font can be further reduced.

Shorter wording maybe:
“Cards don’t show a dollar value, so we need…”

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 4:13PM) : use blue font color!?

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 4:13PM) : Logo should be in batch that was emailed.

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 4:14PM) : I have 9:30am phone call to see if they are willing to be on this initial flyer or not.

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 4:19PM) : I like it Ok, though maybe not as bright colorful as initial... but we may not have had high enough res artwork for original??

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 6:41PM) : 1. Lisa things some (all?) font sizes could be bumped a bit. (2) maybe a very light color background other than white?

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Mar 26

Dan D Dan D (Mar 26 2026 6:45PM) : Lisa thinks we don't need both this and the Join the Campaign line at top more

I think we need to explicitly say “You can Help” or similar somewhere… Do people think “Join the Grocery Card Campaign” is grabby enough when it’s not a familiar name/term??

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