Flower is pretty big, my eye is drawn to it (secondarily, black male costume dominates) but as-is I don’t think contributes much to the overall effect.
I like the general abstract feel of the drawing a lot, could be the style we decide to go with, but I think the graphic as a whole would benefit from having (lots of?) active people pictured.
Them dancing together would be a step in the direction of dynamism, but even then a logo of 2 people dancing would make me think more like a dance concert/exhibition, something I might go to to watch a folk danc performancee… it doesn’t communicate to me that there will be lots of people dancing and I could be one of them!
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I’d recommend treating both similarly in terms of realism/abstractness.
Flower is pretty big, my eye is drawn to it (secondarily, black male costume dominates) but as-is I don’t think contributes much to the overall effect.
I like the general abstract feel of the drawing a lot, could be the style we decide to go with, but I think the graphic as a whole would benefit from having (lots of?) active people pictured.
Them dancing together would be a step in the direction of dynamism, but even then a logo of 2 people dancing would make me think more like a dance concert/exhibition, something I might go to to watch a folk danc performancee… it doesn’t communicate to me that there will be lots of people dancing and I could be one of them!
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